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touch clean , with a dirty hand; metallica, early years, sex, flirting, romance, funny
Topic Started: October 7, 2012, 5:11 pm (1,578 Views)
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this is my first fan fiction! i hope you guys like it


"Amani wake up" i said ripping the covers off her body. she rolled on her side irritated "no fuck you." she said burying her head in her pillow "cmon get up we have to go to work!" i said impatiently. " im calling in sick.... i dont feel like goin" she said, her voice muffled by the pillow. i sighed and turned out of her room. i walked to the kitchen and made myself something to eat, i looked at the clock . 6:30. "shit i gotta go" i said to myself. i got up and grabbed my car keys. i ran outside looking up at the dark grey sky and the clouds covering the sun,,,,, its probably gunna rain. it always rains here. i live in baraboo.. a small town in wisconsin.

i hate it here everything is so dead and nothing fun ever happens, the only good thing i have is my music. heavy metal. i got in my 1973 red chevy nova and drove to work. i work at an auto body shop with some friends and my sister. its kind of a home away from home for us.I rolled down my window, yes its cold but i like the smell of rain, its calming.i heard thunder roll through the sky. i pulled up into the driveway of the shop. i seen james' car i parked next to him and got out. I stepped on the muddy ground and up to the garage door which was open, the shop had two floors on the bottom is were we repaired all the motorcyles and cars and on the top is were i kept my drumsets and my sister kept her guitars. i walked up stairs and seen james sitting on the couch with lars, "hey guys" i said throwing my keys on a side table "hey sexy" lars said flirtatiously. "ha dont start with me lars, its been a long night" i said sitting on my drum stool and smiling. "wheres amani?" james asked. "oh she didnt feel like coming in today..... i tried to pry her out of bed but she wouldnt move" i said shrugging my shoulders. i flipped my long black wavey hair out of my face and took off my leather jacket and black boots. my style is very grungy.

i got up and walked down stairs to work on a bike that some guy wants done by tomorrow ." am i the only one working on this thing??? you guys have done nothing to help!" i yelled up stairs. i could here them laughing " sorry ma we've been busy" james said. (its so hot wen he calls me ma!) i thought to myself. " your lucky your hot or id fire your ass!" i said jokingly. he walked downstairs " you dont need my help, look at you your a pro... you got it" he said with a sexy smile. the side door flung open and an angry kirk came storming in "whats your problem?" lars asked walking down the steps "nothing. get out of my way!" kirk said shoving lars aside as he walked up the stairs with heavy steps. "....im gunna go see whats wrong..." i said dropping the tools and slowly walking up the steps. "kirk..." i said quietly not to piss him off. he didnt respond he just sat there on the couch with his face tucked in his folded arms. i sat next to him "kirk....whats wrong." i asked rubbing his back "nothing, leave me alone" he snapped. i sighed, "kirk you need to tell me whats wrong" i said softly "would you just fucking go away! jesus christ!" he yelled." sorry..." i said getting up. i know he didnt mean to lose control on me, but i respected his wish and got up and left him alone. he needs space. i dont wanna come off as clingy. (why is he so upset?...) i thought to myself... as i walked down the steps

"what was the yelling all about?" james asked me "nothin...." i said opening the fridge to get a beer "well do you think i should go talk to him?" james asked with a concerned look on his face. his deep blue eyes filled with worry for his friend. "....nah just leave him alone...." i said patting his shoulder.
Edited by anesha.hetfield, October 7, 2012, 5:35 pm.
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This is interesting.. :)
I would really,but really like to have a job like her..well i don't know absolutely nothing about cars or motorcycles expect that they come in different shapes and colors..but who cares as long as I could be near James or that flirty Lars..who cares!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
..oh and why is Kirk angry.. :blink: :blink:
...and i want to know more about her and her sister..soon i hope!! :heart:
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i cracked open my beer and stood outside to watch the rain, i felt a hand on my shoulder "its a little early to be drinkin already dont you think..." i herd kirks soft voice say. I turned around his chocolatey brown eyes store back at me "oh...hey man" i said looking down. he sighed "hey look im sorry i yelled at you, its not your fault, i didnt mean to get angry.....its just, sam broke up with me lastnight. she left me for some other guy, i found out she had been cheating on me with him for the past 2 months..." kirk admitted "...what a whore!" i said getting angry . kirk laughed "yea ur tellin me" he said smiling "she wasnt good enough for you anyway kirk you can do much better" i said rubbing his shoulder as to comfort him. "thanks anesha" he said, he leaned in and kissed me softly. my mind raced . oh my god....hes never kissed me before,,,,does he like me? he pulled away and walked back inside. holy shit.

I walked inside and seen james, i ran over to him "james! guess what!" i said gripping his shoulders to make sure i had his full attention "what?" he asked confused "kirk and sam the slut broke up! she was cheating on him!" i said, his eyes grew wide "so thats why hes upset.... she was a complete bitch anyway!" james said takin a swig of his beer "yea i know, she didnt deserve kirk" i said looking over at him. "hey this place is dead you wanna go to my place?" james asked "uhhh sure, lets close up and tell the guys to meet us there." i said walking over to the garage door and closing it. "guys cmon! we're leavin for today its gettin boring here!" james yelled to kirk and lars. Lars walked downstairs and over by us " its about focking time! i wanna go drink!" he said excitedly. "kirk you comin?" i yelled up stairs "yea ill be down in a sec.!" he said back. "we can take my truck" james said getting his keys out of his pocket.

kirk came out and got in the truck with us. it was still raining and thundering. " so are we goin to your house? or are we goin drinkin?" i asked james "well, we can go to my house and drink" he said smiling. god i love his smiley its so sexy yet sweet and a mood lightener. "alright sounds good to me, should we pick amani up?" lars asked. "yea i wanna see her!" james said.

we pulled into my driveway, i got out of james' truck and ran inside. i busted through the front door "AMANIIII!!!!!" i yelled "what do you want?" she asked blankly "cmon james lars and kirk are outside waiting for us, we are goin over to james' house to drink" i said. she smiled and put on her converse and a short black skirt "k lets go" she said. we walked out the door and got in his truck. "mmmm dam ma you look sexy" lars said as amani squeezed in the back seat with him and kirk. she smiled and winked "i know" she said laughing. we drove for about 15 minutes until we got to james' house. we all piled out of the car and inside. lars held the door open for me and amani "thanks lars" i said shooting him a flirty smile "no problem baby" he said slapping my ass.

when we got inside i sat on the couch and turned on the tv. kirk sat next to me and handed me a beer "thanks man" i said grabbing it and popping it open. i took a drink of the ice cold beverage and let out a loud unattractive burp "yuck" i said to myself "i need to be more lady like"i said smiling. kirk laughed. "nah, i like you how you are" james said from the kitchen. Amani walked to the bedroom with lars "see you losers later....im gettin laid!" he happily said as he walked in the room

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it started to get late, we were all shitfaced and there were beer cans everywhere..."hey james,is it cool if i sleep over?" i asked , my words were slurred and i was wobbling "yea theres blankets in the closet....make yourself comfterble..." he said trying to stay awake on the couch. i walked into his bedroom and fell on his bed. I passed out.

The next morning I woke up to "anything goes" by acdc playing on the alarm clock radio. I sat up and through the alarm clock at the wall, my head hurt and i was dizzy. fucking hangovers. i slowly crawled out of bed and to the bathroom. i looked at myself in the mirror a hideous image store back at me "good god! i look like hell!" i said to myself. i looked down the hall and seen james still sleeping on the couch. i scratched my head and turned on the shower. i took off my clothes and got it. the warm water streamed down my body and the steam relaxed me. i sat in the shower for a while thinking about kirk and sam, and about my secret crush on james, wondering if i should tell him or not. i washed my body and hair. I herd the bathroom door open. "hello?" i asked afraid and confused. "its just me" i herd james' tired worn out voice say back "ha get out! im in the shower!" i said laughing "i wont peek i promise!...im just getting some advil" he said. I rolled my eyes and washed the shampoo out of my hair.

i closed my eyes as i washed the shampoo out so i didnt get soap in my eye. i herd the shower curtain ruffle. i wiped my eyes and looked behind me and seen a naked james hetfield hovering close behind me. i couldnt speak. he had a sexy devilish smile on his face. I grabbed the curtain and wrapped it around my body "james what are you doing, you said you wouldnt peak!" i said with wide eyes. "aww cmon dont be mad baby" he said moving closer to me. to be honest i wasnt mad. i couldnt stay mad at him who am i kidding. i smiled he started to kiss my neck. i closed my eyes in pleasure as his tongue searched my neck. his hands held my hips. i could feel him getting hard. he grabbed his dick and rubbed it against me, he let out a soft moan, his tongue moved from my neck to my chest. "mmm my god!" he moaned as he kissed my chest, i grabbed his dick and stroked it roughly " yea baby that feels good" he grunted. his mouth was warm i felt his long blonde hair drape over my body.

he opened my legs "james...." i said quietly. "whats wrong?" he asked looking at me with his soft eyes ".....i cant...do this" i said backing away from him. "im sorry , but i dont wanna be just another one of your go to girls...." i said "i know you and the guys are going on tour soon, and i know there will be girls all over you, i dont wanna be one of those girls that you pay attention to for a night then forget about." i said. he looked down "im sorry" i said . I got out of the shower and wrapped a towel around my body. i walked into james' room and got dressed in the same clothes i wore the day before. "anesha" i herd james call from down the hall. "no. james." i said without looking at him. I walked down the hall and out the door. I had no way to get home cuz my car was still at the shop so i walked to a near by coffee shop called 'beans n cream'.

i walked inside and sat at a table. maybe i shouldnt of left like that... he probably hates me now. i looked down at the table and picked at my finger nails "how can i help you" i herd a voice say. I looked up. a man with shoulder length brown hair and beautiful baby blue eyes stood infront of me. "oh uhhhh ill just have a mocha latte please" i said moving my hair from my face. "comin right up" he said walking away. i grabbed a news paper and started reading the comics. i could give a shit about the current events of baraboo wisconsin to be honest. I dont care about this wasteland town. "here you little lady" the man said setting my drink down "oh thanks..." i said putting the paper down. "i know its really not my place to ask but um, are you ok?" he said sitting down. why would he care if im ok? i have never seen him before in my life

"yea im fine..." i lied so maybe he wuld get off my back and leave me alone. "are you sure cuz you dont look fine" he said. does this guy ever give up? "look i said im fine, i appriciate you trying to help but im a big girl i can handle my own problems". i put the money down on the table and got up and left. my phone rang. i took it out of my pocket to see who was calling *james* i read his name across my phone screen i was hesitant to answer but i did. "hello?" .... "hey its james....where are you?" ...." im at beans n cream why?"......"well how did you get there?"...." um i walked"....."im coming to get you stay there!..."ja-" he hung up. i closed my phone and sat on the park bench. i took out my ipod and listened to some of his songs. sometimes its hard for me to belive that i have a friendship with the band metallica. im very greatful for it im lucky to know them.

hollier than thou came on and i turned it up. i seen james' red dodge pick up truck come around the corner. my heart sank and i took out my headphones. he walked over to me "anesha im sorry" he said sitting next to me "dont be sorry.... u didnt do anything wrong" i said looking at him " then why did you leave like that?" he asked "james i cant tell you...." i said looking down in shame "anesha you can tell me anything... you know that" he said grabbing my hand and rubbing it with his thumb. ".....can you just take me home please? i dont feel good." i said. he sighed out sadly"........yeah come on." he rubbed my back and we got in his truck. the ride to my house was silent but not akward. me and james have known each other for a couple years now. when he pulled infront of my house i opened the truck door and hopped out. "hey......if you ever need to talk im here...." he said meanigfuly . i nodded and closed the door. he drove away and i went inside.
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just tell me if you guys want me to write more! :wavey i love writing ....and id also like your opinion on if you think im good or not i like any kind of critisism :) thanks ladies
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just tell me if you guys want me to write more! :wavey i love writing ....and id also like your opinion on if you think im good or not i like any kind of critisism :) thanks ladies
oh btw ill probably be able to write every day so expect updates often :) :horns2
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(CHAPTER 2)

Its been a week since i have talked to james. maybe i should call him....no ill wait ill give him time to figure out what he wants. but they go on tour next week and me and amani are part of the road crew so ill have to see him weather i want to or not. I am at the shop upstairs fixing one of lars's drum sets before the tour. Amani is sitting on the couch playing her guitar shes playing you shook me all night long by acdc. "god id love to see ACDC in concert" she said as she played. "yea that would be amazing! i would lose my mind if i seen phil rudd!" i said smiling thinking about what i would actually do if i met him. phil rudd is one of my favorite drummers he is a huge influence on me. it was just me and amani in the shop today. the customer service bell rang, that meant someone was here and they needed me to fix something. i quickly walked down the steps and opened the garage door. a tall man rode in with his harley davidson. "mornin little lady" he said as he climbed off his bike "hey man, how can i help you?"

"well my dam bikes got a dent in it, nd i was wonderin if you could fix it for me" he said lookin at me "sure man not a problem" i said inspecting the bike "is there any certain time you need it done by?" i asked " well..... when can you get it done?" he asked lookin around at the shop "its an easy fix, i can have it done tomorrow if you wanna stop by" i said getting some tools out. "alright sounds good ill be back tomorrow" he said as he shut the door and left. i put my hair up and took off my flannel shirt.i was wearing a metallica tank top and black jeans. I seen the dent on the rim of the back tire. "really? this guy couldnt fix this himself?...." i said shaking my head in disapointment. I started to take off the rims when lars and some other guy walked in. i looked up "oh hey lars , im almost done with your drum set, i got another side project to do too" i said pointing to the bike "who the fuck brought that in here? are they stupid they cant fix a dent?" he said looking at it "i know thats what i said" lars laughed "well no rush sweetie i dont need that set till next week, you got some time" he said opening the fridge. i nodded and went back to working on the bike.

"oh by the way this is my friend, slash" he said closing the fridge "yea i know you! your from guns n roses man i fuckin love you guys!" i said smiling. "ha thanks its always nice to meet a fan" slash said. amani came down stairs "oh theres two of you" slash said jokingly . i smiled " ha thats my twin sister amani" i said. amani shook his hand " nice to meet you amani im sla-"
"no need to tell me who you are! i know exactly who you are! your slash! i love you man!" she said excitedly "your fuckin great!" she added "ha thank you, you guys are very beautiful twins" he said smiling. amani blushed and laughed. "anyways me and slash are gunna go up and play for a while so its gunna get noisey" lars said . "alright man no problem" i said focusing on the bike. lars and james and kirk and jason are always bringing in famous rockstars into the shop to have a jam session so its common to meet them and see them, thats why i like workin here!

"im gunna go get somethin to eat , you want anything?" amani asked "oh yea can you get me some chinese food?" i asked "yea whatever" she said grabbing her coat and leaving. as i replaced the rim and shined it i herd a car pull up out front, i figured it was a customer so i got up and walked out there. I whipped dirt off my hands with a rag and looked up and seen james. "oh....its you" i said looking at his truck. "yea its me.... i need to talk to you." he said grabbing my arm and leading me back in the shop. he sat there staring at me ".....well" i said wanting to know what he has to say

"well i miss you..." he admitted. he misses me? "you miss me?" i asked my heart sank and i started to feel bad

"yea, your like my best friend and i havnt seen u or talked to you in a week...." he said lookin down. "well im sorry i just thought you needed some time to yourself." i said looking at my feet. "look i would not of treated you like a one night stand, you know that..... i care about you anesha" he said getting closer to me

" i just wanted to show you that you meant something to me..." he added. *nows a good time to tell him you like him anesha clearly he likes you too* i thought to myself. "james i have to tell you somethin" i said looking in his eyes "what is it? you can tell me anyting" he said holding my hand "this is hard for me..." i admitted. "but...... i think......i think i love you...and its ok if you dont feel the same way, but i needed you to know that" i said worried what his response would be. he didnt say anything, he just sat there staring at me. "hey james! how you doin man!" slash yelled from upstairs before james could say anything back to me. he smiled at me "..........i love you too" he whispered quietly. WHAT?! he loves me? holy shit! thats NOT wat i thought he would say back.....this is great! finally i told him and i feel good about it! he loves me......
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First of all - James. Naked. Getting into the shower.

YES. :drool :drool

This is great hun! I can totally picture the shop and the guys just hanging out and jamming :) And with Slash! How totally awesome would that be?! :nanner:

Nawww James is sweet and cute and sexy and oh my God, Lars... :drool ...so flirty :D Poor sweet little Kirk...I feel sorry for him :(

Keep going!
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I love this ! Please write more :heart:
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woah, He loves me.... maybe he doesnt understand how much that word means to me. love is not something to mess around with i knew that but i also knew that i loved him. I couldnt speak, i couldnt move. this was so much to take in. does this mean he wants to date me? I snapped out of my star struck daze and walked up stairs with the rest of the guys. The amplifiers roared in my ear, now some people dont like how loud rock n roll is but to me the loud heavy noise is almost calming.

James and slash were layin out a bad ass riff on his guitar and lars was beatin the shit out of his drums, it was clear to see they were in their element. James looked up from his heavy metal parade and smiled at me, it was a gentle honesty smile. It made me warm , I smiled back softly and sat on the couch and began to read 'metal sludge' A music magazine about heavy metal and hard rock.

Amani came upstairs with my food. I happily trotted over and grabbed it from her hands. "thanks sis!" i said as i walked back to the beat up retro style couch i was sitting on. The boys finished the jam session and slash asked if we all wanted to come to a party at his place on saturday. of course none of us turned his offer down, we all quickly and happily agreed to come over. We all said goodbye to him "it was so fucking awesome meeting you!" amani said with an ear to ear smile on her face. he smiled at her excitement "nice to meet you too baby" he said winking. He kissed her on the cheek and left with grace. "slash is a badass" i said as i read an article about Angus and Malcolm young growing up as kids.

"yea and hes sexy as fuck!" amani said laughing. "awww cmon ma, i know you think im hotter than him" lars said putting his arm around her. "ha yea ok watever" amani said rolling her eyes. lars bit his lip and shot her a devilish look " ha down boy!! we got work to do" amani said pushing him away playfully. he laughed and they both walked down the wooden stairs.

and now there was two.... me and james...alone. " i mean it anesha" he said unplugging his amp and guitar. he wasnt making eye contact with me which really took away from the meaningfulness of it but i didnt care. " I love you" he said. This time he was looking at me and he walked over to me aggressively. He picked me up and carried me to the back storage room, slammed the door and started taking off his clothes.

I was enjoying the view and bracing myself for impact ;).
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thanks for reading :heart: :heart: im glad you all like it! i will def. post more very soon :horns2 :horns2 :horns2
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Yeah girl u better get ur arse on here and post soon or I'll beat ur ass! Love this so much :heart:
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After he took off his shirt he took off mine. His chest was so tight and firm and it was moist with his sweet sweat . He looked so sexy! His strong arms pinned me to the ground and he jammed his sweet tongue in my mouth. He moaned as his tongue searched my mouth. He grabbed my boobs and squeezed them as he kissed me. I wrapped my arms around his back it was firm And sticky with sweat he was a very built muscley man . I loved it,


" mmmmm suck me mama!" James seethed as he stood up and took his cock out of his jeans. I slowly slid it down my throat and James let out a quiet moan. The warmth and wetness of my mouth put him into a state of bliss "oh god that feels good" he sighed.

I flicked my tongue on the head of his dick "mmm fuck!" He grunted. He grabbed my hair and made me suck faster and deeper. I gagged a little but kept going.

He pulled his dick out and he carried me to a couch and put me on his lap " ride me baby" he demanded. I rotated my hips and he slapped and grabbed my ass as he moaned in pleasure "oh yes baby " he moaned. He thrusted his hips into my body making me moan a little . He held me in place as he fucked me harder.

" mmmm fuck I'm gunna cum baby!" He seethed. His head tipped back in pleasure . He positioned me on my hands and knees and came on my ass. He let out a deep growled moan from the bottom of his throat. He slapped my ass one last time. We layed on the couch for a while when we were done . He wrapped his arms around me and kissed my head .
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you guys like this one so far?
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I really like it!! Please don't stop!!
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