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Temptations a bitch; metallica, james,lars,kirk,jason, marley, holly, sex,romance,jelousy
Topic Started: October 16, 2012, 10:43 pm (1,933 Views)
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(chapter one) october 16 1982

"FINE FUCK YOU! IM LEAVING!" I screamed violently at my boyfriend, we had been fighting for a couple hours now. "oh no your

not, get back here you little bitch!" he grabbed my arm with brute strength and dragged me back inside. He through me up against

the wall and held me there by my neck. "your not goin anywhere you little whore!" He said the words spat out of his mouth.

"...fuck,,,you" i choked the words out and spit on his face. His grip got tighter around my neck and I was gasping for air. "your

gunna pay for that!" he yelled. He raised his hand and struck my face. It burned and I could feel it swelling already. I let out a

faint cry as his powerful hand hit my face.

I kicked him in his nuts, he fell to the floor grappling in pain. I held my neck and caught my breath, still choking air out. I quickly

ran to the door, in a frenzy. "come back here!" I heard him yell trying to stand to his feet. I slammed the door behind me and ran

down the street till the apartment building was out of sight.

I collapsed on the ground and cried. this is not the first time this has happened, he had anger issues and he took them out on me,

he always hits me and chokes me. I dont know why I stay with him, I guess I dont feel like im good enough for anyone else.

his name is sean, he is big and muscly, He was nice when we first met but after a couple of months he turned into this raging

beast, I didnt recognize him anymore, he was a stranger.

I walked to the nearest pay phone and called my best friend....James. (to be continued)
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( continued)

James and I have been friends for 5 years now I trust him.

I dialed his number in the pay phone " hello?" His voice was scratchy and tired " hey, it's marley, can you come get me?" I asked with a shakey voice " marley it's 2 in the morning" he said, I sensed a little anger in his voice . " he hit me...." I admitted almost in tears. James let out a sigh " where are you?" He asked , his voice was more determined now. " I'm outside of the coffee shop " I answerd " alright I'm on my way " he hung up the phone and so did I .

I leaned up against the brick wall of the coffee shop, it was cold out and lonely. A street light shined eerily over my head and then it began to rain. I watched the road as it got painted with the drops of wet rain . It looked shimmery in the light, it was pretty, I like rain. My eye stung from Sean hitting me. I gently rubbed it and winced. I took my hand away and it left a burning sensation . My eye was bleeding it hurt so bad.

I seem James' car pull up slowly in front of me. He got out and walked over " come here" he said helping me up , he pulled me into him and wrapped his arms around me. I began to cry into his chest he stroked my hair and held me for a while " can I stay with you tonight?" I asked my voice cracked out between cries " of course" he said.

He lifted my head and looked at my eye " fuckin bastard" he said as he examined my face " James.... He just has anger issues " I said pulling my face from his grip . " stop making excuses for him marley" James said in a demanding tone " can we just go?" I asked walking toward his car. He started the car and we rode to his house, nothing but silence the entire way . When we got there I flopped on the couch. James got some pillows and blankets out of the closet for me . " thanks " I said taking off my shoes and tucking myself in. " if you need anything else, just come get me" he said sweetly I nodded." Do you want some ice for your eye?" He asked "no it's fine..." I replied " ok well goodnight marley" he said turning off the light.
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How is it so far?
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It's good, I want to read more.
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(chapter two..... shits about to go down ladies!)


I woke up the next morning, my eye hurt even worse than the night before. I was a mess , I was wearing a tee shirt and a thong, which is nothing james hasnt seen before, I have slept over at his house many times before and he knows this is how I sleep. I looked at the clock and It was 10 in the morning. I sat up on the couch, my knees where tucked into my chest and I wrapped the blanket around me, I tured on the T.V. and began flipping through the channels.

The front door opened and I looked over to see who it was. A blonde girl With brown eyes, big tits which were unbelievably fake, and legs up to her throat walked in. The second she seen me her face became furious.

"who the FUCK are you?" she yelled in a nasty high pitched valley girl voice that made me want to puke.

"my names marley, im james' friend" I said calmly and confused.

"wheres james?!" she asked angered. "Hes in his bedroom.....sleeping, so you might not wanna wake him up he gets cranky when hes woken up" I told her. "I dont give a shit hes got some shit to explain to me!" she screeched walking towards james' bedroom door.

Fine let her go. but dont say I didnt warn that bitch.

I turned the T.V. do listen to what was about to happen.

"JAMES! wake the fuck up! you two timing bastard!" I heard her yell

two timing bastard? thats his girlfriend? uhhh puke.

"holly what the fuck do you want!? its fucking 10 in the morning!" I heard james growl

I laughed a little, stupid hoe doesnt know whats about to hit her. see james has a body clock, which he doesnt like being tampered with. If theres one thing you do its dont wake up james hetfield.

"why is there a girl on your couch? who the fuck is she?!" holly screamed in anger.

"oh my fucking god! thats my god dam best friend! im not fucking cheating on you!" James roared

it was very simple to tell that james was pissed. which doesnt happen very often but when it does. steer fucking clear.

"Get that whore out of this house!" holly yelled

whore? oh right yea IM the whore, I forgot that I was the one with the silicone boobs , doing anything and everything possible to make my self look like a 'respectable prostitute'.

"dont call her that" james said in a low growled voice.

I was glad he is standing up for me, it seemed like holly was just james' sex toy anyway.

holly and james both came out of his room and in to the living room still yelling. James wasnt wearing a shirt, he was only wearing pajama pants. holly was wearing a black leather mini skirt with a red tube top and heels.

dont forget that its fucking october, its supposed to be 56 degrees outside and thats the high, shes a whore.

"get out of this house!" holly yelled turning towards me and pointing her red painted fingernail at me.

I sat there

"didnt you here me? get the fuck out!" she screamed getting closer to my face.

"get you nasty ass hand out of my fucking face, you stupid cunt!" I yelled getting annoyed with her.

james laughed a little.

"what did you just call me!!??" she yelled

"im gunna slap the shit out of you in about 10 seconds, if you dont stop screaming like that" I said simply. Im a tough girl and I will take action if something pisses me off.

"you know what, im gunna leave james." I said getting off the couch

"marley no..." He said trying to grab me. "its ok you dont have to"

I shook my head and walked out the door. leaving problem child holly on his hands.

I will call him later to see how the whole thing went, I never knew james would go for a girl like her, she is only with him cuz hes in a band. Metallica.

they are new, and dont have much publicity, but they are known around town. James was the guitarist and singer, kirk was the guitarist, lars was the drummer and cliff was the bassist.

I knew them all, we are all friends. best friends
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I like this one too!!!

You are writing some awesome fics Anesha!!!

I was really hoping Marley would have kicked that whores ass but its ok......maybe she will another time :biggrin

Can't wait for the next update!!
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ha thank you! :heart: :heart: :heart: and yea I thought about maybe having her beat the shit out of holly but I had to go to school so I kinda had to sum things up :lol:
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(chapter three)

I left james' house , but now I have no where to go, I didnt think this through very well.

I walked down town on main street for a while and went in some shops and record stores, I would of bought so much if I didnt leave my fucking wallet at Sean's apartment. fuck. I need my money and all my other shit, but I cant go back there alone. what if he's there, He has a job but im not sure if he works today or not.

I guess Ill have to find out.

I turned around and started walking in the direction of his appartment, It was kind of a nice day out side, it was cloudy so you couldnt see the sun and it was cool out. I liked this weather though, Im not a summer person I like fall.

Ok, im on the street of his appartment and so far I dont see his piece of shit car so he must be at work

thank god.

I started to run. I just wanted to get in get my shit and leave. I got up to the front door and it was locked. shit.

I stood there wondering how the fuck I was supposed to get in but then I remembered there was an extra key to his appartment under the floor mat. I dropped to my knees, ripped the grungy old floor mat out of my way and grabbed the key. I opened the door and started to grab all my things.

I got a suitcase and packed all my clothes, my posters, records, money, drivers license, bank card, some food, anything I could get that was mine and stuffed it in the bag.

I heard foot steps. and sean's voice talking to the neighbor, they were walking up from the elevator.

FUCK!

I closed the suit case grabbed the last of what I could and headed for the fire escape.

"what the fuck are you doin here marley?" I heard sean say as he seen me climb out the window

oh hell.

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(continuing chapter three)

I looked back at him grabbed my suit case and climbed down the fire escape as fast as I could.

"get back here!" he yelled out the window. yea like I was going to listen to him

"NO fuck you! im so sick of you and all your shit! we're done!" I screamed back. "fine ill just have to come get you!" I ran! I fuckin booked it!

looks like ill be making my way back to james' house. out of breath but still running I looked back to see if sean was following me, no he wasnt.

Then I heard screeching car tires.

dare I look?

"son of a bitch!" I yelled continuing to run. this fucker wont give up. now im in a fucking car chase with this bitch!

I could see james' house. Dragging the suitcase behind me I ran through his lawn and opened the door. james was on the couch. "hey your back" He said smiling with a beer in his hand. "not now james!" I said slamming the door shut.

"woah, whats wrong?" he asked standing up. "he's here..." I said leaning my weight against the wall in a corner in fear. Sean started pounding at the door. "open up you little bitch!" I heard him yell angrily. "Leave me the fuck alone!" I growled at him.

James walked over to the door.

"James no!" I yelled going after him.

too late.

He opened the door and sean frantically tried to get in but james' strong sturdy arms and body was blocking him.

"move!" sean yelled.

"get off my property or ill beat your ass!" james growled lowly at him.

sean pushed james out of the way, and came after me. I backed up quickly into a corner. fuck. no way out.

He wrapped his hand around my neck and squeezed so fucking tight.

"you wanna leave me you little bit-"

BAM! james grabbed sean picked him up and through him violently at the wall.

sean got up and punched james in the face.

"stay out of this man!" sean said as james got off the floor.

James kicked him in the nuts and grabbed him by his throat. He slammed sean against a wall.

"if you EVER come near her again, I will fucking kill you! so help me god I will destroy you and everything you love" games seethed through clenched teeth. still holding sean against the wall. "Dont talk to her, dont touch her, dont even look at her again or im going to kick your ass and this time ill actually try to make it hurt! Do you understand me?!" james yelled.

sean was silent. and james got pissed.

He slammed up agianst the wall , but harder this time "I said DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!" james screamed. sean nodded his head, he was shaking with fear. James took him off the wall and through him out the door.

I heard sean scurry to his car and peel out down the road.

I was on the floor still choking, james ran over to me and picked me up. He sat me on the couch and rubbed my back "hey, hey, breath slowly its OK you will be ok marley.....he's gone" james said comforting me.

I was crying and my neck hurt like a bitch.

"jesus christ!" james said looking down at my neck.

"what?..." I asked looking at him worried.

"your neck!" he said looking at it. I got up and walked to the bathroom and looked in the mirror

Sean left finger markings on my neck from squeezing so hard, they were purple and welling up. It looked like someone painted A hand on the front of my neck.

James walked in. "marley holy shit, are you ok? do you want me to take you to a doctor?" He asked holding my face looking me in the eye. "no , no ill be ok" I said rubbing my neck.

the real problem is, where the fuck am I going to live?

"great. now I have no where to live...." I said slumping on the couch. "yes you do. you will be staying with me untill you can get a house of your own" james said sitting next to me. I looked at him and hugged him "thanks james, your an amazing friend" I said into his chest.

the phone rang, james reached over and picked it up. "hello?.....oh hey babe (I rolled my eyes).....yea sure....7 o clock?....k see you then" He hung up the phone.

"Holly?" I asked tilting my head

"yea" he said sighing out. "didnt you guys just get in a fight?" I asked confused. "yea but we talked it over and we are fine now" He said getting off the couch.

"well where ya goin?" I asked him with knit eye brows. "I gotta go get dressed shes gunna be here in an hour for dinner" he shouted back from down the hall.

I sighed out irritated.

I have no desire to see that fucking cunt again.

but this was james' house and he is being nice and letting me stay here.... so looks like ill have to get over it..... unless that bitch wants to start shit then... so be it.

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(chapter four)

I sat on the couch as james got in the shower and dressed for slut holly to come over, me however I was wearing sweat pants and a motorhead tee shirt with black converse, I was doing nothing to help my self look attractive. maybe I should leave, let them have dinner alone.

I shrugged my shoulders and got off the couch, I walked down the hall to the spare bedroom. I took my suite case in with me, im guessing this is the room james was letting me stay in. I threw the suit case up on the bed and opened it. all my personal belongings lay there in a bundle.

I took out my clothes and put them in the dresser drawers. I hung all my acdc, bon jovi, skid row, guns n roses, motorhead, def leppard , judas priest , megadeth , and metallica posters all over the walls. The room looked so much more alive now, more color instead of bland stupid boring white walls.

when I was done I spread my 'the beatles' blanket over the bed and looked at my room proudly. james walked in with a towel a round his waist, his big broad chest and shoulders stood in front of me, water slithered down his body and steam was rising off his skin. He looked so good.... wait NO! I cant think that! hes my friend and he has a girlfriend...no marley.

"oh hey, how do you like it?" I asked looking around at my walls. "its awesome marley really cool" He said smiling and looking around. "so am I supposed to leave when holly gets here?" I asked packing more clothes in my dresser.

"well now, but no starting anything marley" he said leaning on the wall. I looked at him and rolled my eyes "I mean it, I know you ! and I know you could kick her ass so NO starting anything" he said pointing his finger at me and smiling. "yea yea yea whatever, go get dressed, your makin me sick" I said jokingly he smiled and walked in to his room.

I changed my clothes. I put on a ACDC shirt black ripped jeans and black combat boots and a leather jacket. I let my hair down and walked out to the living room.

To my disgust and absolute horror, holly was 30 minutes early and sitting on the couch, looking like a complete whore and idiot. we will see how this goes.
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(chapter four)

I sat on the couch as james got in the shower and dressed for slut holly to come over, me however I was wearing sweat pants and a motorhead tee shirt with black converse, I was doing nothing to help my self look attractive. maybe I should leave, let them have dinner alone.

I shrugged my shoulders and got off the couch, I walked down the hall to the spare bedroom. I took my suite case in with me, im guessing this is the room james was letting me stay in. I threw the suit case up on the bed and opened it. all my personal belongings lay there in a bundle.

I took out my clothes and put them in the dresser drawers. I hung all my acdc, bon jovi, skid row, guns n roses, motorhead, def leppard , judas priest , megadeth , and metallica posters all over the walls. The room looked so much more alive now, more color instead of bland stupid boring white walls.

when I was done I spread my 'the beatles' blanket over the bed and looked at my room proudly. james walked in with a towel a round his waist, his big broad chest and shoulders stood in front of me, water slithered down his body and steam was rising off his skin. He looked so good.... wait NO! I cant think that! hes my friend and he has a girlfriend...no marley.

"oh hey, how do you like it?" I asked looking around at my walls. "its awesome marley really cool" He said smiling and looking around. "so am I supposed to leave when holly gets here?" I asked packing more clothes in my dresser.

"well now, but no starting anything marley" he said leaning on the wall. I looked at him and rolled my eyes "I mean it, I know you ! and I know you could kick her ass so NO starting anything" he said pointing his finger at me and smiling. "yea yea yea whatever, go get dressed, your makin me sick" I said jokingly he smiled and walked in to his room.

I changed my clothes. I put on a ACDC shirt black ripped jeans and black combat boots and a leather jacket. I let my hair down and walked out to the living room.

To my disgust and absolute horror, holly was 30 minutes early and sitting on the couch, looking like a complete whore and idiot. we will see how this goes.
Oh I want Marley to smack her!!

Good job on James' part for kicking Sean's ass. :nanner:

How on earth did Marley contain herself when she saw James all wet and naked...well, sorta naked? :drool

Can't wait for more!
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(continuing chapter four)

so I decided to be nice and smile at her. she rolled her eyes like a bitch. I ignored it and held back the want to punch her in her throat. she stood up and walked in the kitchen.

I went with her "sooo how you doin?" I asked nicely "dont talk to me" she snapped leaning on the counter. I clenched my jaw and balled my fist. still holding back the urge to hit her. she seen my fist was balled up "oh are you gunna hit me?" she said in a baby voice, she laughed and rolled her eyes

we herd james' footsteps coming down the hall. "OWW!" holly yelled as she fell to the floor.

what the fuck is she doing.

james ran in to the kitchen and kneeled down next to her. "James marley just punched me! I didnt even do anything to her" she cried. james looked up at me infuriated "WHAT THE FUCK NO I DIDNT!" I yelled getting pissed. "marley what did I fucking tell you?! NO starting shit!" He yelled standing up "james I didnt fuckin touch her, she just screamed and fell to the floor to make you think I hit her!" I yelled. "what? no I didnt why would I do that?" holly said still on the floor holding her eye. "bitch shut your whore mouth! nobody wants to hear your stupid ass talk! your just lien about everything anyway!"I screamed at her "HEY! dont talk to her like that!" james growled at me.

"why dont you fucking beleive me?" I asked james "because I know you marley! and you can be a bitch some times!" he yelled. I knit my eyes brows in anger. I couldnt belive he just said that. standing up for some stupid hoe hes been dating for a month instead of me. "you know what fuck you" I said walking to my room. "and fuck you too you blonde bitch!" I said actually punching her this time.

"get the fuck out of my house!.....NOW!" james said pissed.

I didnt even care... I walked to the door opened it and slammed it shut.

god that felt good! I finally got to punch that slut right her ugly fuckin face..... she got what she deserved.

but now I have a problem with james.... how can he belive her but not me?
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Ugh, todays I can't believe that James believed Holly over Marley. I'm glad she hit her though bitch deserved it.
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Oh no way, smack that bitch out!!!! Stupid Holly. And James, use your fucken head. Marley's so much better!

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