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| Temptations a bitch; metallica, james,lars,kirk,jason, marley, holly, sex,romance,jelousy | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: October 16, 2012, 10:43 pm (1,934 Views) | |
| anesha.hetfield | October 19, 2012, 8:00 am Post #16 |
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great. so where in the fuck am I supposed to go now? ugh, Ill just go to kirks house, hopefully he is home and doesn't mind me showing up un invited. He lives like a couple blocks away from where I am now, so walking there shouldnt be to bad. I began my way to kirks house, the sun was actually out now, its been raining for four days, but I loved it. The fall smell was in the air and it made me comfortable, everybody that passed by me had a smile on their face, I liked seeing other people happy. believe it or not, I have a heart. I was now walking down kirks street, scanning the houses for the white small one that is kirks. When I got up to his door i knocked and then stepped back. "just a second" I heard him say, the lock of the door clicked and it opened. "oh hey marley" "jesus christ what happened to your neck?!" he said leaning against the door . I shook my head . "nothing kirk.... can I come in?" I asked sighing out. He opened the door farther and let me in. "thanks" I said walking over to the couch. "so why are u here?" he asked sitting next to me. "cuz holly is being a major twat and james is no better" I said slumping back in the big comfy couch. "I cant stand that bitch!" kirk said agreeing with me. "I know she told james I fuckin punched her, he got pissed and kicked me out" I said folding my arms in anger. "why are you staying at james' house anyway?" He asked getting up and walking his thin tan smooth skinned body to the kitchen. "well, sean hit me, and choked me so I went to stay with james, sean followed me there then james beat his ass and I havnt seen him since." I said getting up and following him to the kitchen. He looked me in the eye. "are you gunna be ok?" He asked moving closer to me. "yea Ill be fine im a big girl, I can handle it." I said getting some water."oooo guess what!" I said with wide eyes, excitedly. kirk looked confused. "what?" he asked a little frightened. "I sure did punch that bitch in her fuckin face!" I said laughing. Kirk broke out in laughter and gave me a hug of appriciation. "its about dam time, she needed to get hit" He said as we walked back in the living room. We heard the phone ring kirk reached over my body to answer it. "hello?" He said biting his nails and leaning back on the couch. "oh yea, shes right here..." kirk said handing me the phone. He put his hand over the phone. "its james" he whispered to me. I rolled my eyes and snorted irritatedly. I snatched the phone out of his hands. "what do you want?" I asked quickly. "look.... im sorry, I shouldnt of said what I said.." he said sympatheticly. I sighed. "james I didnt touch her, why dont you beleive me?" I said back. " yea, I know you didnt hit her.... cuz after dinner I asked her how her eye felt and she said why would my eye hurt?" he replied. stupid hoe. "shes an idiot...... im sleeping at kirks tonight, ill be back tomorrow.....thanks for not believing me..." I said, I hung up the phone. |
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| HannahBanana | October 20, 2012, 12:38 am Post #17 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I like Marley she's awesome and James' girlfriend is a bitch who should have her ass handed to her |
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| anesha.hetfield | October 20, 2012, 11:46 am Post #18 |
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Frantic
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he should of just believed me in the first place....... it would of saved alot of dam time!. "oh, its cool if i stay here tonight right?" I asked looking at kirk, he was smiling ." sure" He said sweetly " rock on, im gunna go to the bar, you wanna come?" I asked getting off the couch looking at him, and fixing my clothes. "oh no I cant me and lars are going to the studio in like 15 minutes" kirk said looking at the clock. "this late?... alright well tell lars I said hi" "sure thing" he replied I opened the door and walked outside, It was now around 9 or 10 the clouds were dark and full of rain. I crossed my arms over my chest to keep warm, I could see my breath in the air and I was shivering a little. I get cold easily. The bar was just up the road I could see its neon sign flashing, I loved this bar, I always went here when I was upset or something. I knew the guy that owned the bar and He would let me drink even though im only 20. His name was Michael he had curly brown hair, he was hilarious always made me laugh, we are good friends I have known him since I was 16. when I walked in the bar there was kind of a lot of people there, "HEY little lady!" michael said with a big smile, he had fat cheek but they made him look really cute wen he smiled. "Hi mike" I groaned sitting on a bar stool at the counter. "you alright?" he asked as he wiped off some dishes. "NO" I said resting my chin on my hand. "do I wanna know about it?" He asked wincing. " well I dont feel like talking about it" I said laughin, " so you dont have to listen to me and my problems" I added laughing. He smiled. "hey baby how you doin?" some guy said putting his hand on my shoulder. "go away" I said blankly not even looking at him. I looked at michael and rolled my eyes. "aww cmon sweetheart, id like to get to know you" the man said sitting next to me. this time I did face him. "how about me and you go to a hotel and-" "HOW ABOUT YOU LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE BEFORE I BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOU! HOW ABOUT THAT?" I yelled annoyed. The put both his hands up in the air as he got off the stool and walked away. "theres the marley I know, there she is" Michael said smiling. I laughed. "why have you not offered me anything to drink yet mike? i came for alcohol not to get hit on" I said with a smile. "just hold your horses little missy" he said getting me my usual drink. Michael was about 23 and single. "here you go" He said handing me a rum and coke. I through it back "give me another, and keep em comin" I said with a smirk. "dam girl, am I gunna have to drive you home tonight?" he said "yes you are" I said smiling "do you hear that?" I asked swirling my glass around. "thats the sound of an empty drink...... more please" he laughed and grabbed my glass. I turned around and faced all the people in the bar to see who was here tonight. oh my fucking god. sean is here and his with some blonde girl wait a minute, I know who that is........HOLLY! I seen her making out with sean, michael handed me my drink "oh hold on fool, this bitch is about to get her ass beat" I said sliding off my stool. I knew I wouldnt get in trouble for starting a bar fight cuz mike owns it and he wouldnt put me in jail. I quickly walked over to holly. and grabbed her by her hair. "ow what the fuck!" she yelled. still holding her hair I pulled her off her seat "so you wanna cheat on james like that huh?........you are one stupid cunt you know that right?.....see this is why Im about to kick you slutty ass !" I said throwing her on the floor. I got on top of her and started punching. "your a fuckin bitch! how could you do that to james, he has never hurt you! you dont even deserve him, he is way out of your league and deserves so much more than to be cheated on by a stupid worthless slutty ugly fake fucking cunt like you!" I yelled I picked her up and held her against a wall. "look bitch this is my fucking bar so I suggest that you leave and dont let me see your skank ass around here again!" I said punching her and throwing her on the floor. she was crying like a little bitch and bleeding and no I didnt feel bad, that bitch had it coming for her for a long ass time. She was screaming and crying and cussing me out. "thats great you stupid cunt now get the fuck out!" I yelled pushing her out the door. mike started to cheer for me and everyone else was laughing at holly. I turned around to walk back to my seat and seen james, standing there in shock at what just happened. shit. "did you see any of that?" I asked worried. "yea,,,, all of it..... I seen that slut making out with sean too" He said sadly. sean left already, he probably escaped out the back door when he seen my face. "james im sorry" I said hugging him. "she was a slut, I knew she was gunna cheat on me" he said hugging me back. "can we go home?" he asked looking at me. "sure lets go" I said walking out the door with him, we got in his car and drove back to his house. when we got inside we both sat on the couch in silence reflecting on what just happened. "thanks marley" james said, I looked at him confused. "for what?..." I asked facing him. "for standing up for me like that, and kicking hollys ass, you didnt have to do that, you could of just let her get away with it" he said looking me in the eye "It was really sweet of you to say that stuff to..... so thanks marley" "dont thank me james.....im your friend and thats what friends do" I said he pulled me into him and hugged me, and we fell asleep in each others arms. |
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| bleedmeacure | October 20, 2012, 2:53 pm Post #19 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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*cheers for Marley* Holly got what she deserved!
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| Shayniz21 | October 20, 2012, 6:06 pm Post #20 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Holly got what she deserved now James and Marley should together |
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| anesha.hetfield | October 21, 2012, 10:27 am Post #21 |
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Frantic
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The next morning I woke up because the sun was peering through the blinds in the living room, the intense light shone in my eyes and woke me up. I opened my eyes and then squinted them, the sun hurt. I rolled over and faced the other way. My face was now burried in the back of the couch.... it smelled like james. He was gone now, I remember him laying under me and my head cuddled into his chest and thats how I fell asleep, but now he is gone im not sure where he is but i knew it wasnt too far from home. I was to comfortable to even care, james must of put this blanket over me before he left to where ever he is. It was big and warm and with james' smell lingering around, it felt like he never left. He probably went to the store or something, he was running low on food. Slowly I fell back asleep. The front door opened, I knew it was james. I herd his footsteps walk past me and into the kitchen. I opened my eyes glad to see the sun was no longer showing its piercing glow. I sat up and wrapped the blanket around my body, I know I probably look disgusting, I am not a morning person at all. "mornin...... arent you just a ball of sunshine" james said laughing "shut up" I responded quickly. He smiled "where were you?" I asked getting of the couch and rubbing my eyes. "store" told ya. "I got breakfast" He added waving a bag of greasy doughnuts in my face. I sat at the table as he continued to prepare breakfast. "I got you your favorite, chocolate with sprinkles" He said turning around and placing it in front of me, he stood there for a second proudly as I took my first bite. I looked at him "thanks bud" I said continuing to eat. He sat down with his creme filled chocolate doughnut, I liked those ones too. " What day is it today?" I asked feeling stupid. "itsss saturday......marley" james said looking at me like I had some kind of mental problem, He probably thought I was stupid, but its not like I have a job or anything so its common for me to lose track of the days. "why you got somethin to do today?" james asked taking a drink of his milk. "no, you?" I asked taking the last bite of my doughnut. "well I gotta go to the studio, wanna come with?" he asked putting his cup in the sink. "sure....im gunna go get in the shower." I said walking down the hall. I went into my room and dug through my drawers, I found a skid row tee shirt and a red skinny jeans. I through them on my bed along with a pair of converse. I grabbed a towel and made my way to the shower, I turned the water on to a perfect temperature. I stepped in and began to wash my hair and body and shave my legs and all that. when I was done I got out and walked into my room, it was freezing , the cold air brushed against my moist skin. I dried myself off and got dressed. "ready to go?" james asked playing with his keys. "yea" I said, we walked out the door and drove to the studio, when we got there all the other guys were already there. We walked inside and down the hall into the door labeled 'metallica'. when we walked through the door the boys were sitting on the couches, with two girls on each of their laps. oh my christ. I did not come here to see blow job city. when the girls seen james one of them walked over and began rubbing his chest. "so this is what you guys do at rehearsal?" I asked disgusted. "not all the time, but today our manager suprised us " lars said smiling and rubbing the girls thigh as she kissed his neck. look at all these whores, do they really have nothing better to do? James sat down and put the girl on his lap. "james why did you bring me here if this is whats going to be happening?" I asked looking at all the girls around the room. He didnt answer me, he was too busy playing hide and seek in that girls mouth with his tongue. this is pointless. "fuck you guys" I said walking out of the room. It hurt a little to see james with another girl like that. I know me and him arent together and that we are just friends, this shouldnt bother me but I was still jealous. "marley wait" lars said. I turned around in anger. "WHAT?!" I snapped back. "get me some water will ya?" "what the fuck, no screw you im not your slave, why dont you ask one of your holiday whores to do it im sure they would be more than happy to" I said The girls looked at me like they all had a problem with me. "what are YOU looking at??? you got something you wanna say? no, I didnt think so" I said to the girl on james' lap. she was looking at me with a snotty rich girl type look. "dont be jealous cuz you dont look like us sweetheart" she said. "lets face it....... your ugly" she said with a smirk. this bitch is about to get fucking hit. "look bitch im not the one you wanna mess with so I suggest you shut your whore mouth before I tear your ass up" I said pointing at her. she laughed. "whatever you say......sir" she said under her breath. oh I know she just didnt call me sir. "bitch what the fuck did I just say?!" I yelled grabbing her and throwing her off james' lap. I punched her while she was down, james jumped up and grabbed me from behind and lifted me away from her. I kicked my feet aiming for her head. "marely....MARLEY" james said trying to calm me down. He held me tighter and carried me out of the room. He set me down in the hallway. "hey calm down" he said standing close to me "james you herd what she said, she was being such a bitch" I said irritated. "yea she was but that doesnt mean you can attack her like that." he said scowling me. "look why do you care anyway, you dont even know her" I snapped. "you only like her cuz she has big tits a nice ass and blonde hair right? and im just the ugly servant girl!" I said, my voice was shakey and a tear fell from my eye. I walked down the hall and into the bathroom, fuck them. why cant I look like those girls? why am I so ugly? they get all the attention and im just a fucking assistant to james and the guys. I wish I didnt look how I looked, I have nasty curly light brown hair, shit brown eyes, pale skin, im short, my boobs arent as big as those girls, im fucking ugly. I took my pocket knife out of my shoe and began to slit my wrist. It hurt a lot but I didnt care, I deserved the pain. Slowly the blood poured out as I carved the word 'ALONE' in to my wrist and watched the blood hit the floor and seep down my arm. when I was done I continued to cry and hate myself............ im disgusting and james helped me realize that im not good enough for anyone. (to be continued) |
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| HannahBanana | October 21, 2012, 12:22 pm Post #22 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Nooooo! I didn't think she'd do that! Marley should get a makeover and try to make James jealous but James needs to tend to his friend more |
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| bleedmeacure | October 21, 2012, 2:07 pm Post #23 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Really James? Stop standing up for those girls. Bros before hoes (well, Marley's a girl but you get what I mean ). She's your best friend, what's wrong with you?I agree with Hannah. She should fix herself up & make James jealous ;) |
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| anesha.hetfield | October 21, 2012, 2:23 pm Post #24 |
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Frantic
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yea i was thinking about the makeover idea but we will see what happens ;) |
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| anesha.hetfield | October 21, 2012, 2:52 pm Post #25 |
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Frantic
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I stepped out of the bathroom with a paper towel wrapped around my wrist, I walked slowly back into the studio room wiping tears from my face. "im going home" I said to james. he looked down and walked towards me, "marley" he said sadly "no your being a dick and standing up for some bimbo you met 20 minutes ago fuck you" I said angrily turning around to leave. james grabbed my wrist, the one thats cut up. "ow!" I cried out. james looked confused but then he seen what I had done to myself "marley......" "its nothing just leave me alone!" I said walking down the hall james chased after me so I started to run "marley stop!" I herd him yell as we ran throughout the halls of the studio. I ran outside and stopped a cab. by the time james go out side I was already in the car. He stood there watching me as the cab drove away. "where you goin?" the cab driver asked, "take me to the mall" I said looking out the rear window, I could still see james' Silhouette I turned back around and faced the front. The ride to the mall was silent and I was deep in thought. I wanna look like those girls but I dont know how. "here you go miss" the driver said. I didnt notice that the car had came to a stop. I fakely smiled at the driver and paid him for the ride. I got out of the car and walked inside the three story mall. I dont know what the fuck im gunna do. I dont know what stores to look in or anything. So I walked in the first store I seen, forever 21. I started looking around. "anything I can help you with?" a guy asked me, he was a bit flamboyant and seemed homosexual, I have nothing against homosexuals. live and let live right? "yea I need some new clothes but I dont know what to buy" I said shyly "oh well dont worry hunny , I will have you looking fan-tas-tic" he said snapping his fingers . I laughed "my names terry its nice to meet you" he said shaking my hand "its nice to meet you too , im marley" I said smiling. First we walked over to the pants and skirts and things like that he picked out multiple things for me to try on. "what size are you?" He asked suddenly stopping. "im a 6" I said shyly, he continued to dig through the clothes. "ok here try these on" he said handing me the mountain of jeans and skirts, I walked into the changing room and put on a pair of black jeans, they were tight and form fitting , they made my butt look good. I stepped out. "oh honey all of this FIERCE!" terry said standing up, he liked what he seen and he was proud of his ability to make ugly girls look good. I smiled "lets get you some shirts" he said grabbing my hand and walking over to the shirt department. We picked out a lot of shirts that I loved! "oo this is cute as fuck!" terry said scanning a purple shirt with a low v neck, I liked it too. We also got a sweater dress with the British flag on the front, a black dress, an acdc crop top, a metallica tube top, and many others. "all of these have looked great on you!" he said happily and smiling. "so are we ready to check out?" he asked clapping his hands together. I nodded "yea" I responded, we walked over to the register, "ok so cash debit or credit?" he asked scanning the clothes. well I had a credit card but it was only for emergencies...... eh this is emergency enough. I handed terry my credit card he slid it through and handed it back to me and started to bag all my clothes "thanks honey this was fun, you look hot in those clothes, I would go straight for you! HA just kidding I wouldnt but seriously FIERCE" he said looking at me "ha thanks for all your help" I said smiling. He handed me my bags and I left. lets see james ignore me now. |
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| anesha.hetfield | October 31, 2012, 7:29 pm Post #26 |
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Frantic
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When I got back to james' house I went to my room and put my bags of new clothes on my bed. I decided to try something on, I put on my leather skirt and a red tube top. I acctually looked good......... I didnt have much self esteem to begin with, and james just crushed what ever I had left. He pisses me off sometimes, I dont see how he could do that. I looked at my wrist, it burned like hell, I stopped the bleeding. Now there were just slices in my pale skin, they were red and swelled up, I looked back in the mirror and I was pleased with the pretty girl that store back at me, I smiled. "marley?" I heard a familiar voice call. who is that? I slowly and carefully walked down the hall and into the living room I looked around and seen kirk standing by the front door. "what do you want" I asked sternly kirk looked up and down my body, takin back by my suggestive new look. "james told me to come check on you, hes worried about you..." kirk said walking farther into the house. "if hes so fuckin worried why didnt he come here himself, why did he send you?! oh I know why,,,,,, cuz james doesnt give a fuck about me" I said throwing myself on the couch. kirk walked over to me and sat down. He reached over and touched my arm "dont fucking touch me..... you are no better than james, all of you made me feel like shit" I said standing up. "I dont want to talk to any of you...... I should of just stayed with sean" I admitted quietly. I felt kirks eyes lay over me "what did you just say?" kirk said seriously "I said I should of just stayed with sean!" I yelled getting off the couch and walking to my room. "marley wait" he said trying to stop me. "no fuck you im going back to sean, tell james I said bye....." I slammed the door and began to pack my bags |
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| Shayniz21 | November 1, 2012, 1:56 pm Post #27 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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NO NO NO! She can't go back to Sean!! UGH!! I want to smack Marley right now and tell her to think it over! I know what this is all about though. I have been in Marley's shoes before, I know how bad it hurts James better shape up!! |
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| anesha.hetfield | November 5, 2012, 4:37 pm Post #28 |
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Frantic
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Fuck them. I don't need them, I don't need anyone, I'm fine by myself . I lied to Kirk tho in not going back to Sean, I'm not an idiot. I felt like a teenager who was pissed at her parents and running away in the dead of night . I always have a home, no matter what , I'm going to the only place I can call home right now, The bar I walked down the street , the air was cold and it slithered through my skin and froze my bones , I wrapped my arms around my body and I began to shiver, the bar was only a couple more blocks away, hopefully Michael is working tonight, maybe he will let me crash at his place for a while. I walked into the bar, it was a slow night, I looked up at the signed angus young guitar on the wall. I turned my attention to the bar counter, sure enough there mike was wiping off counters and cleaning glasses. I walked over "hey mike" I said tiredly sitting down , the heat of the building brought my body back to life. "Hey ! Long time no see" he said happy to see me, I nodded " yea iv been a little busy" I said looking around at the almost empty bar. Two men were playing pool, it was clear to see that they were drunk, a woman and a man were sitting at a booth sharing fries and she was being flirty but playing hard to get. "I got in a fight with James,...... And Kirk and Lars , all of them!" I explained. I couldn't hold it in anymore, I needed to talk to some one and Michael was the only person I trusted right now. He put down the rag he was holding. "What happened?" He asked coming around the counter and sitting next to me. "They brought me to the studio to basically be their slave, they had girls all over them and James was being a complete dick! And the rest of them didn't even give a shit!" I almost yelled out if anger. "I left James' house and I need a place to stay now...." I added, Michael nodded "you can stay with me, it's not a problem" he said looking at me with sympathy. "He made me feel like I'm ugly and worthless, fucking bastard" I said, I felt a lump form in my throat. Oh god don't cry, not here. Not infront of Michael. A tear fell down my cheek. Damnit. I looked down to avoid eye contact, and wiped the tear from my face. "Come on let's get you home" Michael said grabbing my hand. We walked out to his car and he took me to his house. When we got there I laid on the couch, mike walked up to me and threw a blanket over my body. "Marley.....your beautiful" he said rubbing my cheek with his thumb. He leaned down and his lips pressed against mine,it was a soft sweet kiss. When our lips parted from each others , he just looked me in the eyes "and don't ever forget that" he said standing up. Michael seems to be the only person that actually gives a fuck about me.... |
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| HannahBanana | November 7, 2012, 2:11 am Post #29 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Awh.... I hope Michael treats her right since James and his friends are being such dicks |
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| I_Disappear | November 7, 2012, 6:55 pm Post #30 |
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Blackened
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LOVE this post!! Please update again soon! |
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