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Admit it; Oneshot James/Gia
Topic Started: March 17, 2013, 11:41 pm (758 Views)
Shayniz21
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Ok so I have been in a writing mood and Bee and I have another fic that we have been planning on co-writing. I have been waiting to start this next fic unti With Out You is finished because of how detailed and long it will be not to mention her and I are writing Orion: A Double Cinderella Story.

However, I have had the characters from the future fic in my head all day and have decided to write a oneshot with them in it. This oneshot may not be in the future fic but I'm not sure.

A little bit about the future fic - I don't want to give too many details away but it is an AU fic and even though all Metallica members are in it, including a previous member, the band Metallica does not exist :) Thats all I'm going to say for now and I hope you guys like this oneshot. It just poured out of me. Hope you enjoy! :heart:


Her hair was long and black and hung in waves down to the end of her breasts. Her eyes were dark and intense; eyes that felt like they could stare down into your very soul. Like she could see your deepest secrets; see you for whom you really are. There was no hiding anything from her because she would be able to see right through any façade you might try to put up. She was powerful and unstoppable. She was strong.

I stood there with my arms crossed against my chest and watched her up on the stage. She poured her heart out, as she sang every word with extreme emotion. Her emotion was anger. I felt her anger. The words she sung pulled me into her world along with crowd. I scanned the crowd, with their fists and devil horns in the air singing the words. She owned them. Every single one of them. They cheered louder as she walked to the end of the stage during the guitar solo. She head banged and pumped her fist in the air along with the crowd. The solo ended and she sunk down to her knees and sang the chorus.

Soon the song had finished and the crowd screamed and shouted. She shouted a ‘thank you’ and took a bow with her band before walking backstage. I waited for her to come over to me but she walked the other direction, heading towards her dressing room. I grabbed the towel and her bottle of vodka that she drank after every show from her assistant and followed behind her. She didn’t know I was following her and when she reached the door to her personal dressing room she slammed it. When I reached the door I opened it slowly and walked in. She was sitting down in the chair in front of the large mirror lighting a cigarette. I shut the door behind me hard, causing her to look at me through the mirror.

“Great show.” I said standing by the door. She nodded and inhaled from her cigarette looking down but then her eyes shot back up.

“I know you want to talk about what happened the other night.” She said staring at me. I knew I couldn’t hide the fact that I wanted to talk to her about last night. I really did want to talk about it but she was intimidating. She stood up, breaking me from my thoughts and walked over to me. “Is this for me?” She looked down at the towel and vodka. I handed the towel over to her and watched her dry her face and wipe the back of her neck, showing me the bite marks I had left on her neck the previous night. My mind began to wonder back to that night. I remembered every minute of it as if it happened just a few seconds ago. She was naked beneath me, moaning softly as I spread kisses all over her body. I had just kissed her shoulder and then went to her neck, biting it and making her gasp-

“James?” She snapped her fingers bringing me back to reality. I shook my head and collected my thoughts.

“Yeah, sorry, umm….I do want to talk about the other night.” I said. She tossed the towel on the floor and took the bottle of vodka out of my hands and opened it. She took a long gulp and then recapped the bottle. “You know, you shouldn’t drink so much. Its bad for you.” I said dryly. I hated it when she drank. She glared at me and then rolled her eyes. She went over to the sofa and motioned for me to sit down. I sat down leaning forward onto my knees while she sat with one knee pulled into her body. I turned to her and met her gaze.

“James….last night was….” She trailed off like she had to choose her words carefully. “It shouldn’t have happened.”

“Yes it should have. I don’t regret any of it.” I said annoyed.

“It won’t happen again.” She said coldly. I stood up and got her face. I had a feeling she would act this way. Hurt my ego.

“What the fuck is wrong with you? Why are pushing me away? Don’t sit there and pretend like last night did fucking affect you because I know it did. I felt it.” She smiled and shook her head, pissing me off more.

“You have no idea what I felt.” She said taking another drag from her cigarette. I put my hands on either side of her on the sofa and leaned in closer, her eyes meeting mine. I had to work hard not get lost in them.

“You loved every minute of it,” I said slowly,” every time my lips touched you, every time I thrust into you and you moaned, you loved it. I could tell by the way you screamed my name when I made you come that you loved it.” She pushed me back, visibly pissed off.

“Fuck you! You have no -”

“Don’t tell me I don’t know what I’m talking about. I know you and that’s enough.” I yelled cutting her off. Her eyes burned into mine. She was definitely pissed but that only fueled my rage and turned me on. She took a step closer to me. Trying to assert her dominance.

“Like I said…..it will never happen again.” She said low and through her teeth. I had never wanted any women in my life so bad before I met her. I stepped closer, almost closing the space between us.

“It will happen again because you want it to. You love me.” Something flickered in her eye and I knew I had touched a soft spot, a spot I was aiming for. She was at a loss for words. She knew she couldn’t hide this from me. I knew her too well. She stood there saying nothing, still looking pissed but I knew inside she was scrambling for something to say. A comeback? A way to hurt my ego more? A few seconds passed before she went to turn around. I stopped her and made her look at me.

“Leave me alone James and see yourself the fuck out.” She said trying to tear her arm from my grasp.

“No, you’re going to admit it.” I said determined for her realize what she tried to hide.

“Fuck you.” She spat. I grinned wickedly at her comment.

“Oh I’d love too, over and over again,” I became serious and stared into her eyes. She quit trying to break free from my gasp and stared back at me, “admit that you’re mine.” I said calmly, wanting her to know that I meant every word I was saying. As I watched her the emotions changed on her face. I could see I was getting through to her. I was slowly starting to break through the wall she thought she could keep me out of. The wall she thought was unbreakable until she met me. Her face fell and I could see how nervous she was starting to become.

“James, please?” She whispered shakily. I knew right then and there I had her. My heart pounded faster in my chest and I wanted nothing more than to love her right then. I pulled her against me and crashed my lips against hers. At first she didn’t move but soon she submitted and opened her mouth so I could insert my tongue. I felt her body tremble the more my tongue explored her mouth. I loosened my grip on her arms and wrapped my arms around her waist. She gripped onto my shoulders and held me close to her. I had her. I had almost all of her.

I guided her to the couch and began unbuttoning her pants. I broke our kiss and pulled her pants down, stopping to pull off her boots; the pants were on the floor shortly after. I grabbed the side of her lace thong and pulled those off as well. I looked at her while I unbuttoned my pants. Her flushed face and swollen lips made my dick twitch and the need to have her legs wrapped around me grew more. I walked over to her and sat her on the arm of the sofa. I pulled my pants down to my knees and wasted no time guiding myself into her. She let out a shaky gasp once I was the whole way in. I began thrusting painfully slowly into her, watching her. She shut her eyes and moaned softly as the pleasure took over her mind and body. I started thrusting a little faster and she wrapped her legs around me. She leant back and moaned as I slid deeper inside of her. She moaned louder and gripped onto my arms. I slowed down my thrusts realizing it was time for her to admit it to me.

“Look at me.” I demanded. She opened her eyes and see how clouded they were with lust. “Admit it.” She continued to stare and not say anything. I knew she was scared. I knew this went against everything she built inside of her but I knew now was the time to break that. “Admit it.” I said louder, thrusting hard into her. She moaned loudly and held onto me as she came violently. Her body shuddered and I leant my head down and found her lips. I kissed her softly and leaned back. She opened her eyes and we both looked at each other. “Tell me.” I whispered. I watched her closely and soon I could see what I knew she felt for me. Her eyes became soft and more beautiful than ever.

“I love you.” She said softly. I shut my eyes, resting my forehead against hers and sighed heavily hearing the words I wanted to hear for so long. I opened my eyes again.

“I love you so much Gia.” I said to her, “you’re mine.”

“I’m yours.” She admitted.
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I_Disappear
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Bad. Freaking. Ass.

Those two characters couldn't be anymore perfect! I can totally see working this one shot into the fic. This was a nice surprise to find in the morning. I've got to say Shay that your writing has improved by leaps and bounds. It's incredible to see where your writing style started and where it has evolved to.

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Her hair was long and black and hung in waves down to the end of her breasts. Her eyes were dark and intense; eyes that felt like they could stare down into your very soul. Like she could see your deepest secrets; see you for whom you really are. There was no hiding anything from her because she would be able to see right through any façade you might try to put up. She was powerful and unstoppable. She was strong.

Those lines right there gave me chills. The despriction of Gia left me breathless. She's gorgeous and strong but she is still bad ass enough to rock out. Love it! Wish I was friends with Gia in real life!
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That was really great! I loved it! :heart: There's a lot that I would like to know about both the characters, like their history and so on, but I suppose the questions I have will be answered once you get the actual fic done/start posting the fic. :)

I do have to say that I'm not a huge fan of AU Metallica fics. (Then again, you could argue that each and every fic happens in some sort of alternate reality. If fics were all totally, completely real and there was no alterations between the fic and the reality, it would no longer be fiction but fact.) Nonetheless, I'll definitely give the fic a shot, see what it's like. This one-shot is definitely an intriguing start (?) to the story.

And I wholeheartedly agree with Bee, your writing has improved a lot! Amazing! :heart:

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Wow. The intensity from both characters made this fic really amazing. I hope you continue it! Your writing is awesome as always. :heart:
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This is perfectly written :heart:
The way James describes her and the fact that they are similar in character, it's like she's a female version of James.
I hope you turn this into a full fic because I'm dying to read more about Gia and James
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I agree with all that has been stated previously. They are both super strong characters that are PERFECT for each other! Love it. Very good. And well... the love scene is great too :drool But that goes unsaid.

More of Gia/James would be awesome, but I like this as a One-Shot. Very well done. :)
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