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Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing
Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,910 Views)
Metal_Psyche
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Edited by Metal_Psyche, November 4, 2014, 6:32 am.
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Verde Manzanita
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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I do like it, really.
And I'd like to read the next chapter so... post it maybe? :lol:

James remembering his past that way sounds good.
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Jaymez
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Oh my god!!!!!!!!!! :drool I love this! I love James and being in his head!! Please post more!!! PRETTY PLEASE? :bow :bow :bow
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-DJ-
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Well this is frickin awesome! The amount of detail just blew my mind and being inside James head is great! :heart: :biggrin
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Jaymez
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Seriously, this is amazing!! Vulnerable uncertain James is so :drool I can't wait to read more!!
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lusy_orion
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Wow! This is really good! :heart:
All those little details...Great!
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Verde Manzanita
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Ok, I definitely fell in love with this and totally loved the ending of the chapter.
More, I want more, you hear me? MOAR :heart:
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Nemesis
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This is a promising start, can't wait to read more! And I like that it's all from James' point of view :heart:

And I don't mind at all that this "bar girl" is called Mia :biggrin
Now it's easier to imagine that it's me :D
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Verde Manzanita
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I've had a very busy, stressing day working on my notes and studying hard, so tonight I'd be glad if I entered this board and found a new chapter of Ten Years Gone.

Will you please do me that favour?
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This is AMAZING! Your detail is amazing! I love your writing style. I just love everything about this story! I liked how in the preface you just give us a little information and don't give too much away. I really like that because it keeps the reader guessing and keeps their attention so they keep reading. You did an amazing job for being new to this. Are you sure you have never wrote before? :)
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Verde Manzanita
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That was soooooooooooo great. I love them!

I love Mia, I love James, I love that apple shit (God knows I do, otherwise I wouldn't be Verde Manzanita), I love the route to her flat, I love their upcoming feelings and I love you for writing this!

I need MOAR :heart:
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lusy_orion
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You are really good in this!!!
This is perfect! :heart:
The whole Chapter is perfect!
More? :D
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