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Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing
Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,911 Views)
Lilith
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"She must have seriously loved that dog because she'd have a little drunk cry about him every so often! I told her to just get another one but she said they wouldn't be the same."


;__________________________; Oh, this was so sweet and sad!

OMG! I can't wait for more, I was so happy to find you already posted, you had left me biting my nails...;____; Ah, but I'm in tears now... it can't be James finds her, and it's too late!! Oh, my feels! ;_;

Perfectly written, I could picture every moment in my mind! :3
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ZombieCake
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Seriously, I fucking love this story.

YOU.WRITE.AMAZING.
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HellHathNoFury
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AHHH NO! She can't be dying or what it sounds like :(
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Edited by Metal_Psyche, November 4, 2014, 6:49 am.
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;_______; I don't know what fibbers this touched in me (or maybe I do), but this has had me weeping all morning. I want to spank Mia for having left James the way she did, leaving him in total darkness. But mostly I want to spank Naomi, for knowing how both felt, and had left Mia feeling that way about James all these years. Yes, he was a drunk asshole, and not convenient for her, but he loved her, at least Naomi could have eased her pain some way. :(

Ahhhh... I can't wait for more! :heart: I don't want this to end, I never have enough of this James.
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I am glad they talked, but he IS married and has kids. He needs to be careful lest he make the same mistake twice.
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Hello!! Now that I'm able to do it I will write you a comment!
This chapter was AMAZING! It's sad to see the way Mia is still broken, but it's normal after what she passed through... and alone. I can't imagine how hard those ten years could have been, but well, after seeing James and crying with the first words of miscarriage, I can see how broken she is. But at least she spoke with James, that's a sign, I was afraid that she didn't wanted to see and talk him, but after the "Fight" I calmed down.

I'm looking forward the next chapter, I don't want that this ends but... I just cant await to read.
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September 8, 2013, 12:12 pm
But mostly I want to spank Naomi, for knowing how both felt, and had left Mia feeling that way about James all these years. Yes, he was a drunk asshole, and not convenient for her, but he loved her, at least Naomi could have eased her pain some way. :(
Yeah, Naomi could have given some help that would have made things happen very differently...

I can't wait to see what's coming next!
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Edited by Metal_Psyche, November 4, 2014, 6:49 am.
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I have missed tons of updates.
SHAME ON ME.

To be true, there is a lack of words to express the level of awesomeness this story has reached. After having read everything as carefully as I could, I must say I'm confused, for I'm not sure at all whether to sigh in bliss or start a ridiculously uncontrollable sobbing that would lead to a laughable, baby-like crying in the end.

So I find myself contemplating the possibility of stopping reading your story, for I know how it is going to end, and I don't think I'm ready to let Mia go at all; see, I can identify myself with James in this specific issue. But I know I won't be able to miss the last part. Well, curiosity is a very powerful characteristic in me.

They have been, are, and will forever be so in love it almost hurts. I swear it hurts here, inside. I wish someone loved me the way he loves her. Yeah, he was a dick and couldn't control his drinking problem at a time, I know, I am not excusing him, but it's crystal clear he could die for her. And now, she's sick to that point, and he just can't accept the decision she has made (a decision I totally understand because I'd probably do the same). So they meet again, and they know they won't have another chance to demonstrate each other they are still in love, which is very intense, very complex, and very sad too.

And I feel like crying over the whole scene. One cannot help but wondering why things have happened this way, to wonder "but if...?", and that's the most fucked up question ever when facing a situation like this.

I truly don't know what else to say, I'm a bit lost in my own emotions right now; and now that I reflect about it, that's exactly what makes this, those Ten Years Gone, a really good, and I mean good, story.

Thanks a lot for sharing your talent with us.
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Edited by Verde Manzanita, September 17, 2013, 5:53 pm.
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AWESOME!

I just don't find the word, and I may be tiring after saying how much I like this on every post, but seriously, I love it. And you are a great writer!

I liked the way James was like a teenager again, it's like if all those years doesn't passed, and I liked the way Mia laughed and smiled again. But oh god, James must be totally sad after knowing that she have cancer... All his life is marked by that word, fuck. I feel sad for them, really, I didn't wanted them to finish like this, so separated, but still so near, but life is like that.

They will love each other for ever, no matter what, and that's the most powerfull feeling ever.

PS: Girl... THAT WAS HOT! ;)
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Lilith
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Aw,poor James, it's so sad he finds her only to lose her to cancer too. But I share her POV, but I feel so sorry for him. It was so toruching to see them recovering their old intimacyM and James is being so sweet with her. And last part was :drool just delicious! :drool I just hope it wasn't a dream.

I simply love your writing! :3 :heart:
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I was so hoping that last part wasn't just a dream :( This is so sad :(
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