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| Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,909 Views) | |
| jaymzbabe | October 2, 2013, 8:08 pm Post #181 |
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O.M.G!!!!! That is all I have to say about this story. Throughtout it all you have felt the pain from both James and Mia and I've felt it right then. So excuse me now while I go and cry a few buckets😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓 because the story was absolutely magical 😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍 |
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| Verde Manzanita | October 3, 2013, 10:03 am Post #182 |
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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What can I say? (appart from... I read this tonight and I couldn't help but crying). It's touching. The whole story (and, of course, this ending) is touching in a way I usually don't expect a story to be, and that means a lot. It meant a lot for me tonight and I felt things I had forgotten about. This should be a good, big review, but it's not gonna be so. Instead, I'll just say it's been a pleasure to read your story and I am grateful you have shared with us those Ten Years Gone.
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| Lilith | October 8, 2013, 8:36 am Post #183 |
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♥ Jaimelicious ♥
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First of all: CONGRATULATIONS!!! You did an awesome job! ![]() This ending broke my heart, I'm gonna miss this James so much, has been my favorite James's first person POV. I enjoyed a lot that moment of both remembering their funny anecdotes, it was so touching, I'm glad he finally had the chance to clear things up with her, but it was so sad she had to leave him again. But I guess she had to mantain her integrity, and not mess up with his married life, I understand her, in the end he could have ending losing all, but still was too heartbreaking! To lose her again when he had finally found her... ;____; I'll need some time to recover. Thank you so much for this story, I'm gonna miss it a lot, your writing style is addictive! :3 I hope to be reading something new of you very soon, really looking forward to! |
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| ZombieCake | October 10, 2013, 7:56 am Post #184 |
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It is my time now to comment this amazing story, and when I say amazing, I mean, AMAZING, with all the words. I’ve rarely seen such a well written story like this one, I mean, There’s really cool stuff out there, but nearly all of them have something, or some parts that don’t fit totally. This story kept my attention from beginning to the end. And I will say why is such a great story. Is not because the great idea of the story, (well, that too) It’s because the characters, (I don’t care if it’s James or my cousin) but you wrote them perfectly, paying a lot of attention in their feelings, experiences, and psychology in general. You made that all the story and the characters had a big coherence, and that’s what I really like to read. Not a character who changes his/her way to be/opinion, just because it doesn’t fit in the chapter or the scene. Having a coherence too in time, because like everyone knows James had changed his personality a bit in all this years, and you wrote both personalities (The justice era and this one too) nearly perfectly. Plus, you had to write really dark stuff, which is not easy, James alcoholism, a miscarriage, cancer and a character’s death. And you wrote all of them with a big sense, and making the reader feel the angst that all of them have. Some people don’t like a character death, just because it’s sad, but in this story, had to happen, and it was sad, but it was in the destiny of this story. I understand this death like a lesson for James, he learned a lot of Mia, A LOT, and her death wasn’t in vain, cause she teach him that he loved his family with all his heart, and that was the most important thing in the world, Love. It’s really difficult for me to understand that this is over, because I loved this story so, so much, that I didn’t wanted that it finished. But yeah, for your sanity this story must be finished, and now that it ended, I totally send you my congrats, because you made me love all this, and it was because of you, and your amazing ability to write!! I totally recommend this story to a new reader, because it will be for sure, one of the best stories that you will read, it is certainly one of mine and I’ve been reading fictions for more than 8 years now. |
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| Metal_Psyche | October 13, 2013, 4:27 pm Post #185 |
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Thanks you lot for the awesome comments, it means a lot. I'm just happy to hear you liked reading this because it was loads of fun to write. Thanks for the support!
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| blatantdisarray | June 4, 2014, 9:38 am Post #186 |
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That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. It's a story with a moral, something for everyone who reads it to live by: find yourself before finding someone/something to drown your emotions in. It's also wonderfully amazing that you were able to have the willpower to writer a fan-fiction novella. I would quit in two hours. I really love your writing style by the way, so descriptive. I hope you write more.
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| Metal_Psyche | June 7, 2014, 9:51 pm Post #187 |
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Aw. Thanks! Really nice to read your comment, thanks for taking the time to post your thoughts.
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| HellHathNoFury | July 16, 2015, 5:27 pm Post #188 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I wanted to re-read this story and its gone
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| Rockfan71 | August 15, 2015, 10:03 am Post #189 |
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Frantic
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I never got to read this story!! So where did it go. It's in the finished section but all there is left are the comments on what a fabulous story this was.... I kinda wanna read it too!
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I really love your writing style by the way, so descriptive. I hope you write more.
8:37 PM Jul 10