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Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing
Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,921 Views)
Jaymez
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Oh my gosh! This is amazing! I sense a relationship coming!! Moar? :biggrin :biggrin
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Edited by Metal_Psyche, November 4, 2014, 6:34 am.
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Verde Manzanita
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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*sighs*

Ok breathe. I have -need- to breathe.

Should I dare to say that was the best piece of sex I've ever read?
Yes, I'll dare to.
That was definitely the best piece of sex I've ever read.

I was so concentrated on every word that I almost felt it myself, and that's a great feeling for this time of the night. I've always wanted to write something like this because it's exactly what I wish I had, so I'll have to try, one of this days, to put my feelings and deepest wishes on paper (a thing I do, paradoxically, everyday, although it's been a good while since I expressed my sexual/loving desires through writing).

I have to congratulate you deeply, your writing amazes me and your style is so detailed and clear.
I loved James in this, totally; Mia too, of course. Even Mia's house and the environment you created for both of them.

In all seriousnes, congrats.
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Jaymez
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What Verde Manzanita said, 100%. I really don't have words, that was amazing!
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Lilith
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:splat: Oh, my! this was awesome! :drool Excellent!I think this is one of the best James's POV's I've read, full of emotion, self consciousness and logic. Also your writing style is so fluid and detailed! :horns2

I love this, need more! :heart:
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Verde Manzanita
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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Head fucks! Sounds pretty familiar to me, I know how that feels. James needs to empty his mind and concentrate on his feelings for her.
It never ceases to amaze me how beautifully you write and how I love every update you make.

Congrats again on the amazing work.

More? :heart:
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Jaymez
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That was spectacular! Stupid James!! Saying he's not going to let himself fall in love with her! I see that being a problem in the future. I can't wait for more :nanner: :nanner: :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:
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Jaymez
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Woah. I don't really have anything to say except: :drool Mr. Master of Puppets needs to tell her who he is though!!!
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I love this fic so much already you don't even know!

And i agree with Jaymez, he needs to tell her who he is!!

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Verde Manzanita
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Mr. Master of Puppets, you better tell her the truth soon or I'll kick your rockstar ass myself.
I have no words for the sex scene because I'm still drooling. :drool

Moar :heart:
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Speechless..that's all...I am speechless.
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