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| Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,921 Views) | |
| Jaymez | May 10, 2013, 6:28 pm Post #16 |
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Oh my gosh! This is amazing! I sense a relationship coming!! Moar?
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| Metal_Psyche | May 10, 2013, 7:01 pm Post #17 |
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| Verde Manzanita | May 10, 2013, 8:47 pm Post #18 |
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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*sighs* Ok breathe. I have -need- to breathe. Should I dare to say that was the best piece of sex I've ever read? Yes, I'll dare to. That was definitely the best piece of sex I've ever read. I was so concentrated on every word that I almost felt it myself, and that's a great feeling for this time of the night. I've always wanted to write something like this because it's exactly what I wish I had, so I'll have to try, one of this days, to put my feelings and deepest wishes on paper (a thing I do, paradoxically, everyday, although it's been a good while since I expressed my sexual/loving desires through writing). I have to congratulate you deeply, your writing amazes me and your style is so detailed and clear. I loved James in this, totally; Mia too, of course. Even Mia's house and the environment you created for both of them. In all seriousnes, congrats.
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| Jaymez | May 11, 2013, 12:02 am Post #19 |
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What Verde Manzanita said, 100%. I really don't have words, that was amazing! |
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| Lilith | May 11, 2013, 7:26 pm Post #20 |
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Oh, my! this was awesome! Excellent!I think this is one of the best James's POV's I've read, full of emotion, self consciousness and logic. Also your writing style is so fluid and detailed! :horns2 I love this, need more!
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| Metal_Psyche | May 11, 2013, 7:59 pm Post #21 |
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| Metal_Psyche | May 11, 2013, 8:28 pm Post #22 |
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| Verde Manzanita | May 11, 2013, 8:59 pm Post #23 |
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I have no feelings in my soul, where most have passion I got a hole
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Head fucks! Sounds pretty familiar to me, I know how that feels. James needs to empty his mind and concentrate on his feelings for her. It never ceases to amaze me how beautifully you write and how I love every update you make. Congrats again on the amazing work. More?
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| Jaymez | May 11, 2013, 9:14 pm Post #24 |
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That was spectacular! Stupid James!! Saying he's not going to let himself fall in love with her! I see that being a problem in the future. I can't wait for more
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| Metal_Psyche | May 11, 2013, 10:32 pm Post #25 |
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| Jaymez | May 11, 2013, 11:15 pm Post #26 |
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Woah. I don't really have anything to say except: Mr. Master of Puppets needs to tell her who he is though!!!
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| -DJ- | May 12, 2013, 4:59 pm Post #27 |
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I love this fic so much already you don't even know! And i agree with Jaymez, he needs to tell her who he is!!
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| Verde Manzanita | May 12, 2013, 5:38 pm Post #28 |
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Mr. Master of Puppets, you better tell her the truth soon or I'll kick your rockstar ass myself. I have no words for the sex scene because I'm still drooling. Moar
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| lusy_orion | May 12, 2013, 5:41 pm Post #29 |
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To live is the most rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.
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Speechless..that's all...I am speechless.
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| Metal_Psyche | May 12, 2013, 6:44 pm Post #30 |
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Oh, my! this was awesome!
Excellent!I think this is one of the best James's POV's I've read, full of emotion, self consciousness and logic. Also your writing style is so fluid and detailed! :horns2


8:38 PM Jul 10