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Ten Years Gone; James/OFC, Het, Romance, Sex and Swearing
Topic Started: May 7, 2013, 6:55 pm (14,914 Views)
Jaymez
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Sorry for not commenting in forever! Busy!!!

Great chapter, per usual! James.... Oh dear, dear James.... How could you do this to Mia?? ^I'm wondering the same thing as Lilith

Can't wait for more!
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Metal_Psyche
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Edited by Metal_Psyche, November 4, 2014, 6:45 am.
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Jaymez
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OH. MY. GOD. I really want to side with James because, well, he's James, but he screwed up big time. Good for Mia, kicking him out of her life, he's pretty much toxic at this point. Near the middle there I almost thought she was going to tell him that she was pregnant :/

GREAT chapter!!!! I love your writing, it was like I could feel the tension in the air!! Can't wait for more!!
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HellHathNoFury
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^That's exactly what I thought. That she was going to tell him she was pregnant. And he was drunk. I want to kick his ass. :horse
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ZombieCake
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Damn, that was sad!!! I really dont like problems.... They made suxh a cute couple, but James was stupid, (very stupid). Hope that they can fix this... :( :( :(
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bleedmeacure
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Nooo T_T I hate the way he broke that to her, almost as if it didn't matter... Poor Mia :( She didn't deserve that. Dammit, James. You really need to get your act together :angry

What's gonna happen now..?
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ZombieCake
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Oh god that was sad and hard to read!!! :( Mia is gone... She is still alive but her spirit isnt with her, and James is guilty of that. :( I really hate to see her like this, depressed, alive but dead.... James fix this up!!
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bleedmeacure
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Aw man, that was rough... I'm afraid for Mia now with the way she's acting. I hope she'll be ok :unsure:

& James is still an idiot -_-
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HellHathNoFury
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Wow... that was really really intense and sad. :( James is so fucked up.
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Jaymez
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Oh gosh :/

This was such a well written chapter! Can't wait for more.
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-DJ-
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Hey sorry for not commenting but my internet's fudged up at home so i'm posting from my phone right now but the last few chapters have been awesome. So many emotions. The way James told her he cheated wasn't fair but now i can't help feeling a little sorry for him right now :(

Can't wait for more! :heart:
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Shayniz21
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I have to agree with DJ and say that I do feel bad for James even though he cheated. I am also worried about Mia. I don't like the fact that she was so skinny. I am really worried. This update was sad.

As always, you writing style is amazing and the flow and detail is perfect. Can't wait for more!
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Lilith
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This chapter was so sad. ;_; I feel Mia is keeping something from him. At first I thought she was pregnant, but in 5 months plus 3 more, it might have shown. So I am really curious.

Plus, I wonder what will happen when she learns James is paying for her college.

More!
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