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| Fight your demons; GEN Oneshot, James /OFC Angst, Drama. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: June 12, 2013, 4:51 pm (661 Views) | |
| ZombieCake | June 12, 2013, 4:51 pm Post #1 |
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Hello there, I'm new in this, well, not really, but yes writing in english. Isn't my mother tongue so be gentle with me ![]() This oneshot came into my mind one day while I was travelling home. I wrote it looong ago, almost forgetting I had it. It's a complete drama, so if you don't like to suffer, don't read it!! ;) - It was dark outside, rain was beating hard on the window, was the only sound that they could hear despite their own breathing. A thunder illuminated the room just for a second. There were two bodies sitting on the floor, one was holding the other, pressing his back on her chest tightly. They were on a small bathroom, next to it there was the bedroom, that was completely messed up, blankets on the floor, like the light of the night table, window was open, curtains were moving heavily, dancing with the fast wind of the storm. Leah held him tighter when she felt a whimper on him. She tried to calm him with a whisper in his ear. James shivered again, if it wasn't for her tight embrace he wouldn't be there, sitting quiet. A cold sweat covered him, he fought with Leah again for stand up, he couldn't hear her, he just wanted to do one thing. -James, doctor told us that you will be like this, you knew that would be this hard, please – She whispered feeling her tears running through her cheeks. -Let me go, Le, please... Let.me.go... – He said between his clenched teeth. -Shhhh – She tried to calm him rubbing his hair. James moved violently again, trying to untie him from Leah arms, so hard that he almost did. -Please, calm down! James was breathing rapidly, his chest was moving up and down against Leah arms. He was growling like an animal, all covered in sweat, shaking, totally wet. He moved again between her tight arms. -Let.me.go, I need it.... it, it hurts – he said almost spitting his words. -James, you knew that this would happen before stop drinking, it's hard but we will do it, I know that you can do it – Leah tried to calm him while she was brushing her nose in his neck, smelling his sweat, his anger, his fear. James felt a span, he wanted to puke, Leah noticed it and she just let him to move to his side and reach the toilet. Leah watched how he arched his back, while he threw the less food that he could barely eat. She rubbed his shoulder gently, making him know that she was still there supporting him. He laid on his back as he finished, feeling how all his power left his body. James knew what was going on inside him. Alcohol was leaving his body and he just needed it for living, it was so fucking hard. He was completely cold and his alter-ego was dominating him almost all the time. He wasn't like that, but now he became a beast, James couldn't even control himself, he just wanted to beat Leah, harm her, so he could go to the kitchen and pour the amber liquid of Jack Danield's on his mouth and feel it burning as it run on his throat. He noticed that his mouth was filled of saliva and the beast appeared again. He stood up and went to the bathroom door, but before he reached it, Leah was there cutting his way to the kitchen. - Let me go, Le. - He pouted. - No, James – Leah moved her arms towards him, wanting to embrace him, but he pulled them, strongly, almost with violence. Another lightning illuminated the room, Leah scared and trembled at the sound, so James took advantage of that weak moment to make another step to the door. Leah took his arms and pressed his wrists tightly. - Let me embrace yo... - Shut up, bitch! - He yelled cutting her and second after he nudged her, making Leah loose the equilibrium and fall on the floor. He almost run to the kitchen as soon as she hit violently the floor. - James, NO! - Leah shouted crying. She stood up and went running to the kitchen where she knew that he was. She found James there, totally sweated breathing heavily, gripping a bottle so hard in his hand that his knuckles where white, was nearly rubbing his lips. - Please no! Don't do it! Don't throw to trash all good times and all that we advanced in – Leah shouted crying, tears were burning on her cheeks. Bottle was almost in James lips, he could smell the liquid, making him shiver while his mouth watered. James could almost taste it, he glanced Leah while the bottle touched his lips slightly. He saw her totally broken in tears, black traces through her cheeks, her t-shirt was bigger cause he grabbed her, and her shoulders were red for his violent nudge. Suddenly he realized the situation, the real James fought the bad one, and he could see clearly what was going on. He hurt the thing that he most loved in his life, just only for a liquid. James pulled down his arm and left the bottle slip through his fingers and fall to the floor smashing against it and breaking into pieces. James collapsed beside the millions of crystal pieces breaking into tears. At what point of his fucking life he became that beast? Would Leah forgive him? James felt her moving and he knew that she will leave him forever. She should, Leah had enough reasons to do it. He cried even more. James felt her footsteps beside him, she was going, and he deserved it. After some seconds that felt like hours James felt her arms holding his chest and her body pressed in his back. They ended in the same way like they were before, but he felt much lighter than before, he fought and won against his own demons, and she survived the storm with him. - I love you, James – Leah whispered - And nothing else matters. |
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| Metal_Psyche | July 25, 2013, 6:37 am Post #2 |
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Dude, this was awesome! I loved it because it's got a lot of heart and communicates so much in just a little. As for it being your first go at writing in English, I'm blown away!! Hope you write more in the future.
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| ZombieCake | July 25, 2013, 8:15 pm Post #3 |
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^ Aww thanks a lot!! *hughs* Maybe I try to write a bit more, who knows? Hope to get some inspiration soon, haha ![]() Thanks again :* |
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| -DJ- | September 8, 2013, 12:57 pm Post #4 |
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Aww I really loved this. You got their feelings across really well. You should definitely write more.
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| ZombieCake | September 13, 2013, 3:09 pm Post #5 |
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^ Thanks!! I really appreciate all your comments! |
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