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| Woes of a forbidden hero; Umed's Writings | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 22 2013, 10:11 PM (100 Views) | |
| LostandForgotten | Jan 22 2013, 10:11 PM Post #1 |
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I'm going to use this thread to keep record of all of Umed's Poems. Also, suggestions are more than welcome. Piece 1: "New Recruits" Post#8 "Lovers have not been lost; it's the love that's been smothered Our powers are not lost; it's the time being murdered Why are the hearts so hollow Of those with eyes deemed so hallow" Piece 2: "New Recruits" Post#10 "Not all heroes are born from dust Not all in power succumb to lust Titans are those beyond humanity Be they good or be they bad Heroes are the same Nay men of ordinary name Heroes, indeed Are those beyond need" Piece 3: "New Recruits" Post#10 "They call it hope I call it need They call it desire I call it conscience They call it moral I call it guilt-" Piece 4: "New Recruits" Post#10 " Heed not my words, for they are not to be heard. But if you ever judge by the looks, may you end up like the books." |
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| Emmo | Jan 22 2013, 10:16 PM Post #2 |
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Well, I must say, I enjoy that you are creating a moral message with such short stanzas, but do you ever think that you will use it in a story or finish them off? |
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| LostandForgotten | Jan 22 2013, 11:03 PM Post #3 |
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Why thank you, I'm most certainly honored by the fact that someone would actually enjoy them. ![]() To be honest, I have absolutely no idea. At the moment these are merely excerpts from my character's alter-ego's works that he recently burnt to dust. I would say that they were somewhat spontaneous as I wrote them in response to certain posts in a thread. I will have to think over it. |
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| Mysterious Stranger | Jan 23 2013, 07:43 PM Post #4 |
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I enjoyed them quite immensely as I read through the thread several times, just soaking in its comedy, and tension, waiting for the moment to join the fray! that its those wonderfull poems that gave me my perception of your character, whenever I read his dialogue I hear a very specific voice and boyis it awesome! |
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| LostandForgotten | Jan 23 2013, 09:34 PM Post #5 |
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Thank you, I'm glad that it had such great effects. Your comment renewed my hope in using experimental writing for my novel. |
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