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| It's been such a long time; A poem written a long time ago. | |
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| LostandForgotten | Jan 27 2013, 01:56 AM Post #1 |
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So, I wrote this poem/song quite some time ago and thought it was great. But now, after looking at it again, I don't feel it's that good. Do you guys think it's contest/submission worthy? P.S. The story is fictitious; the last stanza is removable. Its been seven months since I saw you last By now, I would have died Only if time didn't move so fast Because, Every moment spent without you Was spent thinking about you And has since been killing me inside The longest seven months of my life These hollow feelings inside No matter how hard I try I can't seem to hide It'd be wrong for me to wish To go back To what we were before Because its impossible To go back A bridge that you burnt I don't want you to date me But please don't hate me There are many people in this world I'd give a damn for But you're the only one I'd give my life for |
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