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It's been such a long time; A poem written a long time ago.
Topic Started: Jan 27 2013, 01:56 AM (52 Views)
LostandForgotten

So, I wrote this poem/song quite some time ago and thought it was great. But now, after looking at it again, I don't feel it's that good. Do you guys think it's contest/submission worthy?
P.S. The story is fictitious; the last stanza is removable.

Its been seven months since I saw you last
By now, I would have died
Only if time didn't move so fast
Because,
Every moment spent without you
Was spent thinking about you
And has since been killing me inside

The longest seven months of my life
These hollow feelings inside
No matter how hard I try
I can't seem to hide

It'd be wrong for me to wish
To go back
To what we were before
Because its impossible
To go back
A bridge that you burnt

I don't want you to date me
But please don't hate me
There are many people in this world
I'd give a damn for
But you're the only one
I'd give my life for
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