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Account Name: That One Guy
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Name: Brenden F. Magnus
| Nickname: 'Crimson Reaper'
| Gender: Male
| Race: Human
| Height: 6' 3"
| Weight: 160 Lbs
| Age: 20
| Hometown: Iron Holow, North Blue
| Faction: Revolutionary
| Reputation: Disgruntled Citizen
| Crew: TBA
| Vessel: TBA
| Profession: Blacksmith / Fighter
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| Physical Description |
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Brenden has a well-shaped body. He's quite muscular despite his age and has basic assets of a mage. His body helps him in the lines of speed and stamina, but mainly strength. He tends to look less though than his body shows with clothes on, making people think strangely of him. His face on the other hand contradicts his body, it seems rather gentle and he's smiling for a great deal of the day. His eyes are tainted with a crimson-red colour and are quite large compared to others.
He's got a rather rough pair of lips due to being beaten up alot in the past, they seem hardened. Brenden's hair isn't all too fancy. It's all fuzzy and spread across the top of his head, or rather as they say 'bed-hair'. His hair's got a smooth crimson-red colour and most of it is kept up by the headband he wears all the time. His nose is balanced. It's not too wide, not too long or short, not too big. His neck isn't short yet not exactly long. It has a normal length for his age but you can see that it's a little muscled up and the veins being thicker around his neck. His shoulders are rather skinny but then again in a muscular way. They are in balance with his arms and look natural. |
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Mostly wears a T-Shirt with black pants and a mantle with a colour combination of Red and Blue flames across it, No fancy shoes or anything. Wears a pocket watch made out of Gold around his neck. He switches T-shirts once a week but never seems to switch pants. He has 2 katanas, his reserve katana on his back and the Fiery-Red katana strapped to his belt, in an expensive sheeth covered with a gold tip and a few golden lines. His shoes are made from low-quality leather and have a black colour.
Golden Pocket Watch from his Father. Extra: Extra: Large scar on his back, cross-slash scar on his chest.
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Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle 
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Brenden is a young man and such he acts. Although he comes over quite cocky and aggressive he has reasons to be. He doesn't really have any friends meaning he feels like a loner. He becomes aggressive when unjust things happen near him, he'd immediately take action. He is the kind of person that helps the innocent with all his might. Besides such moments, he can be gentle and nice with women, also with men if those wouldn't be too arrogant. He hates people that are arrogant and has a grudge against the Marines.
He sighs every morning, simply because he awaits the day that he'll get into a Pirate Crew or perhaps Make one. That is his goal so far that he chose. He heard of Bounty Hunters before and has slight fright towards them for the future. They might come after him, after all. Then there's mercenaries, He doesn't seem to care about them and doesn't mind them. He likes gentle and polite persons, loves meat and fruits and also likes women. When he gets the chance he'll start a conversation with any he finds! He kinda hates men, due to most having arrogance is why he would teach them a lesson, or those that ruin his chances with a lady. He also hates persons that interfere with some matters and those who are a burden.
He has grown a lot thanks to the people he's met, and the few fights he's been through. He thinks before he attacks most of the times, but when he sees someone strong he becomes thrilled and gains an adrenaline rush. Now he aims to set free the world with power he had not obtained before but wields now, however. He seeks to free people from the imprisonment of the marines!
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History Spoiler: click to toggle Chapter One : The Baby Brenden was put in a foster family from the day he was born. His father was unknown and dead according to his Mother, which died after giving birth to him. His foster parents took great care of him. After a month Brenden thought he was at his home even though he didn't really realise it yet. His foster dad was a shopkeeper and one that went out to the forest sometimes to get wood, mushrooms, food and so on. That one day, when Brenden was about half a year old, his foster father came back from his exploration of the forest. They were both wondering how they'd tell Brenden once he would get older... Who his father was, and what he became. How he died, and why.
Chapter Two : Grown-Up Brenden was now 10 years old. He seemed interested in swords from a young age already... That's why he asked Gregory to buy him a Katana. Gregory thought it was dangerous at first but after a couple of days he went to the Smith to look for a sword. Brenden gazed upon a sword already from the moment he entered the shop. He saw a beautifull and elegant Katana with a Red-orange(Fiery rather) blade, about Half an inch thick and 2 feet long. After receiving it within the sheeth he was happy and strapped it upon his belt. It was heavy for him at first, ofcourse. But a year had passed now, and he could handle the katana, having practiced harshly during the year that had passed. Brenden was also working with his father in his shop and made his share of money.
Chapter Three : The Fight Brenden was 13 years old now... It was a normal day in the shop, until Gregory heard footsteps in the distance. The navy marched through the little town... They stormed into every shop, and then they stopped in Gregory's. They marched inside in two rows and one stood in the middle, stating "Brenden F. Magnus, You, are sentenced to Death!". Brenden and Gregory were both surprised and started laughing. They talked about Brenden's father after the sentence and named him " 'Massacre' Kando F. Magnus", a once famous pirate that was executed due to his criminal activities, his whole pirate crew was killed, too. Not a trace was left behind, besides Brenden. Brenden was angered, and slashed down every of the Navy soldiers with his Katana.
Gregory yelled at Brenden furiously and gave him a long lecture... Brenden was angry, at himself and stood in his room for a week, without eating or drinking anything. After having forgiven himself he left his room. His foster parents were worried, ofcourse, and hugged him. Anna cooked something for him so that he wouldn't starve to death. After that, Two more years passed...
Chapter Four : The Departure Brenden was 15 already, when he decided to follow the path of his father, and be a Pirate.. Early in the morning he left the house with a bagpack that had a bit of food and water in it and putting the Golden Pocket Watch of his Father around his neck. He looked at the clothing shop across of his house and bought a mantle with a bit of his savings, Along with another Katana as reserve from the Smith. He put the mantle and katana on as the morning light shined on his mantle, covered in Blue and Red flames. He then departed towards the edge of the island... He looked at the sea, and then back behind him, at the town he was raised in. He was surprised, as he saw Gregory infront of himself. Gregory was enraged as he saw that Brenden was going to leave, without even telling anyone. They started fighting and Gregory overpowered Brenden, pushing him down the cliff by accident. Gregory fell to his knees and cried, as Brenden's scream echoed through the island. He was lucky, and landed on one of the small boats on the water. He thought he was saved and looked in his bagpack quickly. Brenden set sail with the small boat, but was struck by a large wave of water...
Chapter Five : The current times Being hit by the wave increased his speed, although he lost consciousness due to the wave itsself. Brenden drove across the sea for a week and Three days when he woke up. He set sail and drove across the sea. By the time he was out of food he'd already gotten way past 16 years old... And that, is where the true story starts! Nobody knows what's been going on the following years with him, but who knows?!
Weapons Weapon Name: Crimson Katana Weapon Class: Kyouretsuheiki [Strong Weapon] Description: A Fiery red-orange coloured katana. About 2' 4", and a little thicker than half an inch. Made out of an unknown greater metal. The sharp edge of the blade is laced with seastone. Perks: Sharpness (5 points)Labour and Material (10 Points)Seastone Blade - The price for coating a small section of the weapon in seastone. NOTE: This perk is only available at the Strong weapon class or higher. (15 points) Strong Ability - (20 points) - Flaring Blade: The blade has a few small mechanisms within it. Upon clenching the hilt firmly, an electric circuit opens up making an immense amount of amperages flow through, causing a large amount of friction, making the blade flare up with flames.
Price: 10 (L&M) + 5 (Sharpness) + 20 (Strong Ability) + 15 (Seastone Blade) = 50 x 1,000,000 (strong) = 50,000,000 - 5,000,000 = 45,000,000 beli - 13,500,000 Beli (30% blacksmith) = 31,500,000 Beli Weapon Name: Yōtō (Demon Blade) Weapon Class: Kyouretsuheiki [Strong Weapon] Description: A strange black katana that holds unknown strengths. It seems to emit an aura of the user's killing intent and negativity. The blade has a 3' length and a 1' hilt. The material is odd, seemingly made out of a black metal. Aside from the multiple claims of this blade being cursed, it's a normal katana. Perks: 10 Points (Labor&Material) 5 Points (Sharpness) Price: 15 x 1,000,000 (strong) = 15,000,000 - 4,500,000 (30% blacksmith) = 10,500,000 Beli Ryuuseiken (Proficient Rank Weapon) x 8: These are plain old katana, or so they appear. They have the hilt resembling the mouth of a dragon, seemingly about to bite, with a green colour theme to it. The blade itself looks like any steel katana, but it's made out of steel, firm enough, simply. It's about 3' long of a blade with an 8" long hilt. These are small addings to Dark's inventory for the Mugen Ittoryu style. Perks: [10 (L&M) + 5 (Sharpness)] x8 Price: 120 x 300.000 (Proficient) = 36,000,000 - 10,800,000 (30% blacksmith) = 25,200,000 Beli
Stats 261 Strength: 85 (68 + 17) Speed: 60 (48 + 12) Stamina: 66 Accuracy: 50 Fortune: 65
Distributive Points Earned: 0/200 Beli Earned: 37,800,000/105,000,000
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| Purchased | Price / Cost | | Crimson Katana [Weapon] | - 35,000,000 Beli
| | Yōtō (Demon Blade) [Weapon] | -10,500,000 Beli
| | Ryuuseiken [Weapon] x8 | -25,200,000 Beli |
Traits | Traits (9/9) |
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| Trait Name | Trait Cost: | Trait Description | | Specific Devil Fruit | 4 Traits | The player may choose a specific devil fruit, either canon or custom, for his character. Certain fruits are deemed too powerful for "starting fruits" and will not be allowed regardless of class (myth/ancient type zoans, paramecia with irresistible effects, etc). In the end, the moderator staff has the final say on what passes.
| | Amateur Blacksmith | 1 Trait | 30% Discount on Labour/Mats and Explainable abilities. (Excluding Seastone)
| | Mighty | 1 Trait | For every 4 points put into strength (up to a maximum of 75), the score increases by an additional 1.
| | Great | 1 Trait | For every 4 points put into speed (up to a maximum of 75), the score increases by an additional 1.
| | Technical Mentality | 2 Traits | This trait increases a character's technical score multiplier from x2 to x(2 + X). |
Devil Fruit Name: Kachi Kachi No Mi (Rock Hard Fruit) [T4] Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to harden their body as well as increase their body temperature at will.
Techniques: (168 / 260) (Max Rank 32)
Techniques Kachi Kachi No Mi - Rank 32 (4+ 28TP) Type: Natural Ability / DF Range: Self Stats: N/A This fruit allows the eater to harden the body at will, increasing defense capabilities. The user can also increase the temperature of their body, which can be be used to increase damage done to the opponent. The heat Brenden can rise his body temperature to is [rankx10]°C. Brenden has mastered this fruit greatly, able to shift into his Kachi state quickly or even almost instinctively. Crimson Series Second Stage: Red Reaper - Rank 30 Type: Supportive/Buff Range: Self Stats: +20 Speed, +15 Strength, -20 Stamina, -10 Accuracy Brenden uses the Kachi Kachi no Mi's abilities to harden his body and heat his body temperature to his utmost capabilities, increasing the blood flow and pumping rate of his own body. This increases the speed and power, but is quite exhausting to keep up. He also emits a slight amount of heat, steam rising from his body, coming over as a heated person. Brenden has formed a perfected state of Second Stage and can perform it on single limbs, and doesn't require to use his old pose anymore. Duration: 6 posts, Maximum Cooldown: 4 posts (Rule 1: If it were to be used for longer than the limit of 6 turns, it may end up utterly exhausting and even lethal. He gains a passive -10 in stamina per post he goes beyond his limit.) (Rule 2: The user may revert from this state freely.) (Rule 3: If the user reverts within 3 posts of the duration, the cooldown is halved) Crimson 'JET' Burst - Rank 24 Type: Offensive Range: Short/Impact Stats: Using the ability of his Kachi Kachi no Mi, Brenden hardens his fist and heats it up, sending out a strong punch towards the opponent. This punch can deal some damage, and leaves potential burns. May be used in mid-air. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation.
- (Branched from Crimson Burst) Crimson 'JET' Impact - Rank 25(25-24=1)
Type: Offensive Range: Impact/Short Stats: +15 Speed Brenden uses his Kachi Kachi no Mi to harden one of his hands and heat it, then thrusting his palm against his opponent. Mostly used to deliver inner body impact damage or push/Throwback. Great advantage to gain some distance. Can be used to move around in Mid-air. This move can also act as a geppou, pushing the user up by [Technique’s Rank] feet, Max Altitude = [Stamina + Technique Rank] feet. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation. (Aerial State of up to two posts, can be chained for swift movement.)
- (Branched from Crimson Burst) Crimson 'JET' Impact Burst - Rank 26(26-25=1)
Type: Offensive Range: Impact/Short Stats: Brenden uses his Kachi Kachi no Mi to harden both of his hands and heat them. Then he rushes towards his opponent at a swift speed, thrusting both of his palms against his opponent. Mostly used to deliver inner body impact damage or push/Throwback. Great advantage to gain some distance. This punch can deal some damage, and leaves potential burns. Feels like a punch from a lightweight boxer. Can be used in Mid-air. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation.
Crimson 'JET' Lance - Rank 25 Type: Offensive Range: Mid-air Stats:Brenden uses the ability of his Kachi Kachi no Mi, to heat up his body and harden it. In mid-air, he shoots down with his legs stretched and kicks his opponent with both feet. It causes a throwback effect towards the opponent, and launches Brenden into the air by [Stamina+Strength /3] Feet. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation. Crimson 'JET' Cross Faith - Rank 25(25-24=1) Type: Offensive Range: Impact/Short Stats:Brenden uses his Kachi Kachi no Mi to harden both of his hands and heat them. He forms a cross with his arms, his left arm above, and his right arm below. His left hand is pointed palm-upward and his right hand palm-downward. Then, he charges at the opponent and strikes them with full-force with both fists in this form. This is mostly aimed at the ribs, or to hit two people at once. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation. - Crimson 'JET' Falling Dragon - Rank 26 (26-25 = 1)
Type: Offensive Range: Mid-air Stats: +16 Speed Brenden uses the ability of his Kachi Kachi no Mi, to heat up his body and harden it. In mid-air, he jolts one of his free hands behind him, and releases a Crimson Impact to propel himself forward at an increased speed, then striking the opponent with double 'claw' shaped fists. These resemble the fangs of a dragon. During Second Stage, this move is enhanced with high speed and more strength. It can also be used in a normal state without Second Stage, as partial transformation.
- (Branched from Crimson Burst) Crimson 'JET' Barrage - Rank 27(27-26=1)
Type: Offensive Range: Mid-air Stats: Brenden uses the ability of his Kachi Kachi no Mi, to heat up his body and harden it. This move can only be performed while Second Stage is active, or when Brenden performs a partial transformation onto his arms. He lashes both of his arms backward, then launches them forward, rapidly, and repeatedly sends out a barrage of fists. This might seem the same as a bullet storm to some...
Flare Blade Arts Swordsman techniques forged by Brenden after mastering the Flare Blade ability of his Crimson Katana.Flame Wave - Rank 30 Type: Offensive Range: Meelee - [Rankx2] Meters Stats: Holding any of his weapons firmly, lighting up his blade aflames with either his own flames or his sword's ability, he lashes out a typical compressed air wave, igniting it as it flies forward for about [Rankx2] meters before dissipating, damaging and burning everything on it's path. - Flame Circle - Rank 31 (Rank 31 - Rank 30 = 1)
Type: Offensive Range: Meelee - [Rankx2] Meters Stats: Brenden twists around while holding his sword, as it's shrouded in flames, slicing a circle around himself, as a flame-wave spreads from the slash stretching out till up to [Rankx2] meters.- Flame Pierce - Rank 32 (Rank 32 - Rank 31 = 1)
Type: Offensive Range: Meelee - [Rankx2] Meters Stats: He holds back his sword, setting it aflame first, then thrusts his blade forward with full force, releasing a compressed-air beam / spear-like blast, igniting it to make it a giant burst of flames towards the opponent in a strange line, up to [Rankx2] meters far. Then, upon impact, it explodes into a [Rank - 10] meter radius. It's about 6' thick / wide
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