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| Mr. Prince | Apr 29 2015, 09:50 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Account Name: PrinceofPeace 探検家 Name: Araunah Mojica (Adopted name: Azuel Ocean) Nickname: "Azul Phantom" Age: 24 Gender: Female Race: Human Height: 5’6 Weight: 130 Faction: Pirate Reputation: 0 Profession:Doctor~ A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. They also get various other related knowledge in terms of poisons, nutrients, animals, anatomy and certain history. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Vessel: None Hometown: East Blue- Gecko Island Physical Description: Short and slender, but fit, with small hands and distinct facial features. There is little if any fat on her and her chest is rather soft and non perky, making it easy to tie down. Her teeth are rather edged and sharp, resembling a fishman's somewhat. There also seem to be quite a lot of them... Clothing: Araunah's casual outfit is tight navy blue leggings, light weight white running shoes, and a green and white polo shirt. She caries a blue backpack containing her Gauntlets and rings when not being worn. Semi casual outfit Accessories: Silver Ring Extra: Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle Personality The amount of time that has gone by since she began the search for her brother has weakened her resolve and she can oftentimes come across as not assertive enough and many failures and let downs have caused her to question her motives. But when she finds a reason to fight, her resolve and loyalty are unmatched. She lives a very simple lifestyle and has found contentment with a few pleasures in life so the things she likes are few and unvaried. Araunah enjoys reading, (specifically mysteries) Talking with friends, meeting interesting people, a good challenge (only when she's in the mood for it), exploring (again only when she’s in the mood), the nighttime air, fruit cocktails, training and the color green. She lives her life based on the golden rule and therefore she dislikes people who don’t treat her well or treat others well. A few personality traits that stand out that she dislikes are; arrogance, cruelty, stupidity, selfishness and cheaters. She also dislikes spicy food, oversleeping and not being in control of her situation. Despite all of this she has a positive outlook on life and thought she may not enjoy something she rarely finds something she hates. The following things don't fall into that category. Squash, a really hot day, boredom, loud people. History Spoiler: click to toggle Weaponry Weapon type: Gauntlet X2 Weapon Class: Kannouheiki [Proficient Weapon] Weapon name: None Specs: 2 ft in length, long enough to cover her entire forearm/6 inches in diameter. Special info: Made of steel alloy. It basically resembles the picture aside from a few changes. 1) The gauntlets do not cover the underside of her hands. The underside is a black leather glove that she puts her hand inside of and a leather wrapped metal rod extends across the underside that she can grip. 2) On the gauntlet the black circle with the blue ring inside of it is the top of a plastic cylindrical container that sits inside the gauntlets. That container holds 10 Metal Rings that fit very comfortably inside and are easy to remove quickly to be thrown at the enemy Metal Rings Price: 3,000,000 Weapon type: X30 Weapon Class: Goushikiheiki [Regular Weapon] Weapon name: None Special info: Made of normal iron. It basically resembles the picture. Specs: 1/4inch thick, 3inch in diameter Price: 750,000 Stats Strength: 5 Speed: 10 Stamina: 6 Accuracy:11 Fortune: 8 Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 1,250,000/5,000,000 Sources Purchases Gauntlet (X2) - 3,000,000(Starting beli used)Metal Rings(X30)- 750,000 (Starting beli used)Traits Patience (1 Trait) - This trait can only be used to save traits, and does not have the same advantages as the "Fated" trait. Random Devil Fruit (2 Traits) - A character may take this trait to be granted a random Devil fruit. This fruit can be declined if taking at character creation. Random Devil fruit that are taken after creation must be kept. This trait cannot be taken more than once and if the devil fruit is declined there is a 3 month wait period for another roll. Devil Fruit Name: Iso Iso no Mi (Shift Shift Fruit) (T3) Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to become completely intangible at will. This allows the user to move through solid objects as if they were phasing through it. Techniques: 8/16 Phase-Rank 4 (Free DF Tech) Type: Defensive Range: N/A Stats: N/A The user turns a their body intangible using the Iso no mi. Soaring Sapphire Strike-Rank 4 Type: Offensive Range: 1-3’ft Stats: N/A Supporting her striking hand with the free hand the user delivers single open palmed strike upwards into the opponents chin or throat. Indigo Interception-Rank 4 Type: Offensive Range: 1-5’ft Stats: N/A Description: A double palmed thrust into the opponent usually done as a counter Edited by Mr. Prince, May 4 2015, 04:02 PM.
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |||||||||
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| Ace | Apr 30 2015, 02:51 AM Post #2 | ||||||||
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Just a couple of things since your app uses OPEx rules. Since the only real things you're tripped up on are Traits and Techniques, I linked the appropriate threads so you can read up in case what I say causes confusion. The "Keen" trait here actually helps you out a bit more. Here's the nocode - [b]Keen (1 Trait)[/b] - For every 4 points put into accuracy (up to a maximum of 75), the score increases by an additional 1. You might also want to hold off on having the Hara Hara no Mi listed as a 2-trait or Tier 3 fruit until it's approved, the staff might decide to give it a higher tier. Also, professions here are mostly fluff unless you grab a profession trait. You can still call yourself a doctor and do a few doctor-y things, but nothing too masterful unless you grab the Doctor trait. Willpower is not a stat here, so just get rid of that. And the cleanest way to show your bonus accuracy would be 13 (11+2), don't worry about mentioning that it's from a trait, that's understood. Techs are probably the most different, and rather than explaining it here I'd just read up on the Technique thread I linked above. Basically you'll want to change those tech ranks from Rank "E" to Rank 4. Unfortunately you'll have to get rid of one of those techs for now since you won't have enough TP (fortune x 2, in this case 16). Edited by Ace, Apr 30 2015, 02:51 AM.
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| Scarlet | Apr 30 2015, 12:33 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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oh, just gonna say this now since he did not, we do not do that aspect stuff~ | ||||||||
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Spoiler: click to toggle Inoko Sadismus-The SM Queen Inoko's NPC's Reihe Blitzang- Hellcat Reihe's NPC's Payasso Brommista- Fang Clown Paya Yuutsu Shitsui- Child of Despair Yuutsu's NPCs Selene Saule- Lieutenant Vira D. Bathory- Blood Countess | |||||||||
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| Mr. Prince | Apr 30 2015, 01:26 PM Post #4 | ||||||||
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |||||||||
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| Scarlet | Apr 30 2015, 02:56 PM Post #5 | ||||||||
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IT'S ROLLERIFIC Devil Fruit Name: Iso Iso no Mi (Shift Shift Fruit) (T3) Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to become completely intangible at will. This allows the user to move through solid objects as if they were phasing through it. |
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Spoiler: click to toggle Inoko Sadismus-The SM Queen Inoko's NPC's Reihe Blitzang- Hellcat Reihe's NPC's Payasso Brommista- Fang Clown Paya Yuutsu Shitsui- Child of Despair Yuutsu's NPCs Selene Saule- Lieutenant Vira D. Bathory- Blood Countess | |||||||||
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| Mr. Prince | Apr 30 2015, 06:45 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |||||||||
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| Scarlet | Apr 30 2015, 11:23 PM Post #7 | ||||||||
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approve 1/2 | ||||||||
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| LexLuthor | May 1 2015, 06:33 PM Post #8 | ||||||||
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Going to need your actual account name at the top for the RDF traitput the actual trait there, your DF below it. Purchasing the Gauntlets: Labour and Material (10) x 300,000 = 3,000,000 (gauntlet comes with no metal rings) Also for the X30? are those metal rings? or? which would be ammo (10) sharpness (5) x 50,000 = 750,000 unless they aren't sharp, then they would be 500,000 how did you get your pricinng? Also in Purchases you need to say the weapon name then the price |
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| LexLuthor | May 1 2015, 08:52 PM Post #9 | ||||||||
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just change the price of gauntlets under actual weaponry and can approve | ||||||||
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Ivan Volkov - Thief - #0B4C5F Envy Sans Souci (Queen Bee) - Pirate - #C68E17 Sven Voltaic - Pirate Captain- #8A0829 Medusa- Fighter - #FF4000 Hidden
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| Mr. Prince | May 2 2015, 12:54 AM Post #10 | ||||||||
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Done so | ||||||||
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |||||||||
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| Xan the G | May 4 2015, 04:04 PM Post #11 | ||||||||
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This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly. | ||||||||
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