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| SaitoBatch | May 9 2015, 10:22 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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立ち直り Account Name: SaitoBatch 立ち直り Name: Hayato Lianjie Nickname: None Age: 19 Gender: Male Race: Human Height: 5’11 Weight: 195 lbs Faction: Pirate Crew: None Reputation: No Threat Profession: Shipwright Vessel: Free Rank 1 Hometown: Dandelion Island Physical Description: Starting from the top Hayato has jet black hair. His hair almost always looks like he runs his fingers through it for that messy semi punk look. His eyes are a dark brown color similar to chocolate, but it tends to look almost like Hayato is staring right at your soul and can be unnerving to see if he doesn't blink. His muscle tone is sleek and compact but very noticeable, the kind you’d find on a person that had trained since birth to fight and/or kill for his life. His skin is a slightly tanned color due to his outdoors nature, but without outside interference it’s a light color. His height isn't very big or small so he doesn't stand out in a crowd too much. Clothing: Hayato prefers some form over fashion so most of his clothing is meant to just be clothing or have pockets. He wears either a short sleeved button up shirt with one prominent color with a flower, feather, or sun picture as a design choice or a closed t-shirt with open long sleeved button shirt combo. This is because Hayato can leave the button shirt open to let the ladies see his muscles when he’s working no matter if he's got the t shirt on under or not. However this exposes the fact that he has more than a bit of faded scars on his body. His pants are either blue or black cargo jeans so he can keep whatever he needs on him at all times. His shoes are plain work shoes, no frills of fancy designs thought they are a bit worn looking. In warmer climates he might switch to jean shorts and in colder he’ll put on a jacket but for the most part nothing really changes with his clothing unless he needs to dress up. In that case he’ll wear a black borderline funeral looking suit. Accessories: None Extra: A hollow black star tattoo with an Egyptian scale inside. Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle Personality Hayato is the kind of guy who will be polite and charming at first, but jump right to being a snarky jerk if you push him. He will flirt with hot women, talk to the elderly with a polite tone and volley fake insults with his friends stopping if they start to become bothered by it. Hayato nicknames everyone, if the name is an insult he does not like you and if it’s at least a bit endearing that means he likes you. With a smile usually on his face, Hayato comes off as one happy go lucky guy. For the most part, Hayato values his freedom and chooses to do what he wants, not what others want. On the inside though he can be nice, he also wants things like treasure, status, fame, women, all the finest things in life. At the same time, he knows all that's not worth it without people to share it with so his comrades are just as important. The one exception is when someone he’s very close to wants to do something different, that’s when he’ll consider their options. It’s hard to get him mad, insults will just make him make one back and hitting him just makes him hit back. However if you decide to hurt someone he’s close too, that’s when the smile leaves his face. Due to his back ground, he chooses not to kill unless he doesn't like someone, but at the same time he doesn't judge others if they have or do kill. People die after all, it's not his place to chance that fact of life. History Spoiler: click to toggle Weaponry Weapon Name: Karuna Weapon Class: Proficent Description:This is a long bladed Wodao sword. Similar to the Katana but longer in the blade, it’s meant to be wielded in the same style of other long Chinese sabers. As it’s a variation on the Katana, it can be wielded similar to that weapon. Modification Technique: Price: 4,500,000 Stats Strength: 8 Speed: 8 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 8 Fortune: 8 Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 5,000,000/5,000,000 Sources Purchases Karuna for 4,500,000 Beri Traits Amateur Builder (1 Trait) - 30% Discount on Ship/Base cost. (Excluding Ship submerging or flight abilities.) Fated (2 Traits) - When the character earns a trait point, they gain 1.5 trait points instead of the traditional 1. Fated acts as a banking system. These traits are usable whenever the taker sees fit. X does not have to be a whole number, and due to the nature of fated can be X or X.5 traits. Devil Fruit Name: Devil Fruit Type: Devil Fruit Ability: Techniques TP: 12/16 Max Rank:4 Technique Name Humility Fist – Rank 4 Type: Offense Range: Close Stats: N/A Hayato punches his opponent in either an exposed or soft part of the body with a focused punch for maximum damage after opening with basic attacks. Technique Name Gentle Breeze – Rank 4 Type: Defense Range: Close Stats: N/A Using his hands or his sword as a “fan” Hayato will let the opponent attack, and then using his hands redirect or block the attack in another direction. Technique Name Sacred Sword Style – Eisenmeteor – Rank 4 Type: Offense Range: Close Stats:N/A Hayato quickly gets into a stance that involves keeping the sword near his body primed for attack, when the target gets close enough, he slashes at the target’s midsection quickly. Edited by SaitoBatch, May 16 2015, 04:01 PM.
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| Scarlet | May 10 2015, 02:38 AM Post #2 | ||||||||
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after Techniques it should say TP: 4/16 Max Rank:4
Edited by Scarlet, May 10 2015, 02:38 AM.
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| Enlightened Monkey | May 11 2015, 06:28 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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Stick your weapon in the Purchases section as well. | ||||||||
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| Xan the G | May 14 2015, 08:18 PM Post #4 | ||||||||
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^^ Still needs to be done. Beli earned is 500,000 after the 4.5mill you spent on your item. please add (1 Trait) to your Amatuer Builder title like you have for Fated. Also, add a reply to this thread when you made the required edits saying you've edited. |
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| SaitoBatch | May 16 2015, 11:21 AM Post #5 | ||||||||
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I did the edits | ||||||||
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| Scarlet | May 16 2015, 02:19 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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Approved 1/2 | ||||||||
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Spoiler: click to toggle Inoko Sadismus-The SM Queen Inoko's NPC's Reihe Blitzang- Hellcat Reihe's NPC's Payasso Brommista- Fang Clown Paya Yuutsu Shitsui- Child of Despair Yuutsu's NPCs Selene Saule- Lieutenant Vira D. Bathory- Blood Countess | |||||||||
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| LexLuthor | May 16 2015, 03:47 PM Post #7 | ||||||||
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Technique Name Sacred Sword Style – Eisenmeteor – Rank 4 Type: Offense Range: Close Stats:+1 Strength Hayato quickly gets into a stance that involves keeping the sword near his body primed for attack, when the target gets close enough, he slashes at the target’s midsection quickly. stat boosts dont start til rank 11 i believe...so this cant have a +1 strength Beli Earned: 500,000 <---needs to be 5,000,000/5,000,000 for under purchases just add next to to the weapon (4,500,000 paid with starting beli) you add that because everyong gets 5,000,000 to spend on weapons that's non-refundable. so that's what you are doing there. |
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| SaitoBatch | May 16 2015, 04:01 PM Post #8 | ||||||||
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Did corrections. |
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| Enlightened Monkey | May 21 2015, 03:15 AM Post #9 | ||||||||
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| Xan the G | May 21 2015, 04:46 PM Post #10 | ||||||||
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This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly. | ||||||||
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