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| KidZerker | Jun 4 2015, 05:54 PM Post #1 |
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b]探検家[/b] Account Name: TrueZerker 探検家 Name: Shimazu Toyohisa Nickname: ( what evers given) Age: 30 Gender: Male Race: Human Height: 6,1 Weight: 190 Faction: Bounty hunter Crew: N/A Reputation:Rookie Profession: Berserk Vessel: Standard Ship Hometown: Unknown Physical Description: Toyo is a tall man with crimson red eyes he has short black hair and battle scars all across his body from battles that hes been in he has two sharp teeth inside of his mouth that only come out. when hes is either smiling or pissed. he has a very calm aura around him unless pissed off then in which it becomes a murders aura that lomes around him. He has three giant scars that go across his chest from the black beast and a few slashes from other creatures on the island that he was raised on but the scars on his chest are a reminder to him that he needs to get stronger to kill that beast and avenge his family. He also hes creased pupils Clothing: Toyo's clothing is usually based around the base colors of red and black and lastly gray just for the sake of blood not to show so easily on his clothes. Crazy, yes, but very much effective. Besides those things, he just loves those colors because they remind him much of his childhood. His tops normally consists of black and or gray crew cut t-shirts. They are cotton and breathes quite well allowing great mobility for him as well. On top of the t-shirt there is also his red shirt cut mini capri jacket. This is again fashionable and full of function. His bottoms consist of crimson red pants and at times samurai guards. His pants bottoms are made of leather, similar material like his capri jacket actually. They allow a bit more mobility much like the rest of his clothes. Along with this, his samurai guards, same color as his pants, grant a bit more extra defense against attacks, and his vest has the emblem of the dragon. Accessories: arm guards, side guards , leg guards , orange sash, black gloves Extra: Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle PersonalityToyohisa is on the Contrary to the impressions of his hotheaded and belligerent exterior might create, Toyohisa is an intelligent and honorable man with little to no interest in power, just the drive that keeps him going and that makes never willing to bow before no man or woman. But hes a bit on the ruthless side killing without a second thought. He doesn't have a soft for mostly anything or anyone because of the way he was raised in a kill or be killed kind of life but he only goes for vitals and kill blows but he will only kill when challenged or threatened. People may call him reckless sometimes cause he may injury him self just to kill a enemy and he has a weird habit of beheading his enemy's and bury his enemy head because he says it good luck and a easier for them to make it to the after life. He has a habit of singing Drunken Whaler on a boat and letting off a dangers Aura he also has a code of honor to thank someone who has saved his life and repay the debt also he will not strike down a enemy who has thrown away there weapon or given up. History Spoiler: click to toggle Weaponry Weapon Name: Weapon Class: Kannouheiki Description: a basic well made long sword Long Sword price - 300,000 x 15 (10 labour and material + 5 Sharpness) = 4,500,000 Price: 4,500,000 Weaponry Weapon Name: rifle Weapon Class: Goushikiheiki Description:Rifle price = 50,000 x 20 (10 labour and material + 10 projectile) = 1,000,000 Price: 1,000,000 Weaponry Weapon Name:short sword Weapon Class: Goushikiheiki Description a basic short sword Price: 750,000 Stats Strength: 10 Speed: 9 Stamina: 7 Accuracy: 6 Fortune: 8 Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 3,750,000/5,000,000 Sources Purchases Long Sword - 4,500,000 (paid with starting beli) Rifle price = 50,000 x 20 (10 labour and material + 10 projectile) = 1,000,000 short sword = 50,000 x 15 = 750,000 Traits Fated (2 Traits)When the character earns a trait point, they gain 1.5 trait points instead of the traditional 1. Fated acts as a banking system. These traits are usable whenever the taker sees fit. X does not have to be a whole number, and due to the nature of fated can be X or X.5 traits. Please be aware that Devil Fruit users cannot take this trait. Weapon Mastery: (Katana) (1 Trait)Use of this trait grants a character expertise with a single class of weapon/attack. Any techniques made involving the weapon chosen may be [2]*X ranks higher than the character's current maximum. Additionally, characters with this trait receive a discount of 10% off any weaponry purchase/upgrade. Devil Fruit Name: Devil Fruit Type: Devil Fruit Ability: Techniques: (0/16) (4) Technique Name - Rank Type: Range: Stats: (Write attack description here) Edited by KidZerker, Jun 9 2015, 11:54 PM.
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| LexLuthor | Jun 6 2015, 06:06 PM Post #2 |
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more clothing history in spoiler Long Sword price - 300,000 x 15 (10 labour and material + 5 Sharpness) = 4,500,000 Rifle price = 50,000 x 20 (10 labour and material + 10 projectile) = 1,000,000 (this is a very weak rifle, also comes with thirty free bullets at rank regular weapon rank) short sword = 50,000 x 15 = 750,000 Distributive Points Earned: 0/32 <--should be 0/0, you dont count first 32 dp. Also it says you have 19,000,000 beli? you need to link your sources under the sources section. and for fated please put the whole trait/description there. |
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| KidZerker | Jun 7 2015, 05:42 AM Post #3 |
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Fixed everything |
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| LexLuthor | Jun 7 2015, 08:35 PM Post #4 |
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under purchases put: Long Sword - 4,500,000 (paid with starting beli) (TP Used/ MaxTotal TP) (Max Tech Rank) <---change this to 0/16 (4) |
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Ivan Volkov - Thief - #0B4C5F Envy Sans Souci (Queen Bee) - Pirate - #C68E17 Sven Voltaic - Pirate Captain- #8A0829 Medusa- Fighter - #FF4000 Hidden
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| LexLuthor | Jun 7 2015, 08:52 PM Post #5 |
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need to subtract 1,250,000 from your left side of your beli, since u went over your 5,000,000 starting beli for weapons. also need to put your weapons under weapons area |
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Ivan Volkov - Thief - #0B4C5F Envy Sans Souci (Queen Bee) - Pirate - #C68E17 Sven Voltaic - Pirate Captain- #8A0829 Medusa- Fighter - #FF4000 Hidden
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| LexLuthor | Jun 10 2015, 12:00 AM Post #6 |
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1/2 Approval |
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Ivan Volkov - Thief - #0B4C5F Envy Sans Souci (Queen Bee) - Pirate - #C68E17 Sven Voltaic - Pirate Captain- #8A0829 Medusa- Fighter - #FF4000 Hidden
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| Scarlet | Jun 10 2015, 03:04 AM Post #7 |
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2/2 This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly. |
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