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| [Graded]The Lucky Lion and The Black Shirt Pirates; Diekid | |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 8 2016, 05:47 PM Post #1 |
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OCC: Figured we could get to know each other and you can practice description by taking Dorian on a tour of the ship :P Also forcing you to figure out what is all on the ship :P It was a fitful unconsciousness as Dorian continued to remember the Cero Pirates blades one by one slashing into his body in rapid succession. The way he had juggled the blades while sending out air blades had been amazing, the technique alone had distracted him. Not that he could have blocked all of them had he been completely focused. The young pirate would wake occasionally to feel the gentle sway of the ship before falling back into darkness only gathering a few details of his surroundings. Then he would be back in Loguetown facing the pirate and getting ripped to shreds yet again. Each time he tried to will his body to move faster, but each time nothing happened, it was an endless loop of torture. Finally, who knows how long later, Dorian woke up and sat up in his now red bed. Even his white jacket was red, hopefully I can get that out Dorian thought to himself as he reached to pick up his swords from the ground. Immense pain rippled through his arms as he stopped half way sweat pouring down his face. Taking a long deep breath he finished the motion and picked them up slowly sliding them back into their sheath. Roughly a hour later, of just sitting there he took off one of the swords and placed the bottom of the sheath on the ground. With a grunt of effort he pushed himself up and used it as a cane to walk towards what he could guess was the door out. Dorian would slowly make he way through some halls until he found the one outside opening it. A strong breeze full of the scent of sea hit his face, along with a gentle spray from a wave hitting the side of the ship. A smile crept on his face as he pushed himself farther trying to find Baru. His movements were sluggish, and to be honest he probably should have stayed in bed but he refused. |
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| Kid | Mar 8 2016, 11:49 PM Post #2 |
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The ship would lay silent but the waves would continue to roar, continuously hitting the sides of the ship. Baru would be in his quarters planning there next adventure at his mohagany wooded desk. He would be thinking about all the amazing adventures he's already had and couldn't even keep himself from chuckling. He would grab onto a nearby #1 pencil and his notepad and begin writing a message to his grandfather hoping he would recieve the piece of paper. Dear Grandfather, how's life going in Shelltown? I would like to say my adventure has been crazy and I am not in the Grand Line yet! I met this young man named Dorian and he's badily wounded at the moment but It seems we have joined together to establish a pirate crew and travel the seas together. I just wanted to let you know about this and please stay safe. Your grandson, Baru." Baru would grab a bottle, go outside to the side of the ship, and a mailbird would swoop down to retrieve the message. Baru would now be outside, and it would be morning it seemed. The crisp smell of the sea breeze caused Baru to take a good whiff up his nostrel then slowly exhale it out as if he just took a big hit off a unfiltered cigar. "Good morning, Lucky." He would say with a smile. This baby was worth every beli in my budget. He would walk up to the front still in his socks to finally examine the ship. The whole ship would be made of polished maple. All the way upfront would be Baru's second favorite thing on the ship and that was the golden Lion's head at the tip of the ship carefully structured by the finest engineers. All the way at the top would be the jolly roger which was the pride and joy of the Black Shirts. The Black Shirt Pirates I have vowed my life to. No other pirate crew, marine, or orginization of any kind will take this pride away from me without brute retaliation. Baru would walk from the main deck and into the dining room which contained a variety of cooking utensils and other nessecities to live off of inside there. Baru would run up to the stove to see smoke coming out his pot. Baru would turn off the stove and carefully prepare food for him and Dorian. Coincedentally, his stomach would growl at the sight of the content in the pot. Now that cooking is done Baru would quickly rush back outside to wake up his fellow lad, Dorian. He would go up to the living quarters to see the man sluggishly heading to the man deck. "Dorian!" Baru would rush up to him to assist with aid. "Good timing, its time to eat then after we can sterilize those cuts." Baru would look at the cuts once more to see that they are beginning to look infected. "Yeah right after we eat I shall apply medical assistance." Baru would also be thinking why the man would be out of bed in the first place but It was perfect timing. |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 9 2016, 01:14 AM Post #3 |
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The young swordsmen groaned as he had to halt almost running right into the as always energetic Baru. "Hey dying man here watch it." Dorian stated weakly as he struggled to remain his balance before limping along after him. Part of him hated to be helped along like Baru was doing but the other part of him was very grateful. "Medical assistance would be good... I think we will need to find a real doctor soon though..." Dorian added as they pushed into the kitchen area. It was a nice area, and the aroma of food filled the area and Dorian immediately started to drool. How long as it been since I ate, from the feeling in my stomach and the pool on my chin it must have been years. Dorian thought to himself as he slid into a chair leaning Wraith against the table. "So... um... where ya get the ship? Ya steal it?" Dorian asked his eyes not leaving the pot on the oven eyes longing for whatever was inside of it. "Also did I call you captain in my near death experience...?" Dorian asked with a chuckle. |
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| Kid | Mar 9 2016, 01:47 AM Post #4 |
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Baru would crack a smile. "You said captain, a couple times and no I purchased this with the rest of my money." Baru would begin to prepare the table then quickly make bowls due to the furious growling of his insides. He would pass Dorian his bowl making sure not to spill a drip on him due to the hotness of the content. Baru would sit down and begin to pray. Finally he would slurp on the souplike food. About ten minutes later, Baru would have succesfully eaten four big bowls of the food. "I am not the best cook but that was delicious." Baru would aggressively burp, then place his bowl into the kitchen sink. Baru would now be outside standing up on the head of the Lion as it sways and rocks. Baru would think about the life he could have still had if he hadn't became a pirate. This woulf suprisingly make him frown. Man my life would have sucked! He would still be sitting on the head when the ship would violently rock back causing him to fly back and hit his head. I will never do that again...ouch! He would stand up and rub his head since he did hit his head first. Baru would still be in the exact area when he hit his head. The sea breeze would hit his face and have his cheeks rather chilly. He would suck on his pointer finger and then place it in mid-air. "We are heading north!" He would run towards the wheel, quickly gripping onto the wooden wheel and 360 twisting it causing it to make a half spin. The ship would now be heading north. Edited by Kid, Mar 9 2016, 01:57 AM.
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 9 2016, 02:14 AM Post #5 |
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The food was amazing, regardless of that fact that Dorian was starving as well as a human garbage disposal. He had yet to eat anything as disgusting as what they served on Diamond Isle it was worse then bland it was as if they purposefully made it disgusting for some reason. Why Dorian had no freaking clue, he ate ravenously downing at least five bowls of the stuff angry that Baru had to help serve him but at this point he just wanted to food. Even his pain was momentarily forgotten as he inhaled it. "Baru, that was yummy, who cares if you might not be a good cook to me it was the best." He stated tossing his last bowl into the sink from his chair and leaning back staring at the ceiling noticing how well put together the ship was most of the seems were close together and straight. Then he heard the door close, quickly he looked around to find Baru gone. "That little..." He growled as he grabbed his sword and stood quickly forgetting his wound and quickly regretting it as he slammed the sword down to stabilize himself. Before he even made it out the door the boat rocked and he fell into the wall, "What in the hell is he doing." Dorian hissed as he flung the door open causing a loud bang as it hit the wall on the other side. "BARU!!" Dorian yelled as he limped along using the sword as a crutch. Coming out into the fresh air he scanned the area until he found him at the wheel. "Excuse me C a p t a i n. But did you forget that you were going to help clean my wounds and re bandage me." Dorian stated his face full of anger. He could not believe he had just done that... well actually he could but that was not the point!!! |
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| Kid | Mar 9 2016, 04:36 AM Post #6 |
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The amazing Baru would go towards the railing of the 2nd floor to see his fellow companion Dorian talking to him, slowly slouched on the door of the kitchen. Baru would smile. "The medical equipment is in the kitchen so take your seat." Baru would hop from the second floor to the bottom floor, quickly entering the kitchen and going towards the cabinet located above the stove bringing out a red medical box. "Just want you to know I am uhh...not really certified for this type of job." He would open the box and quickly take out the carbon peroxide. Baru would begin to slowly take off Dorian's shirt including the pieces he ripped off his own. He would quickly rub alchol around the wounds. He would pick Dorian up. "Stay as straight as possible and this will most likely hurt but will sterilize the wounds." Baru would grab the carbon peroxide and make a countdown from 3. Once the countdown was over, he would began to shoot the liquid all over Dorian's body, making sure to get the inside of his wounds. Due to it being carbon peroxide and not alcohol, it makes sure to only cause the person to want to itch and the pain is very low. Baru would then smile and grab surgery bandaging and wrap it around the man's body and arms. "All done it is now sterilized." Baru would clap. Edited by Kid, Mar 9 2016, 04:37 AM.
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 9 2016, 07:48 AM Post #7 |
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Dorian glared at him the entire way to the dining kitchen area and slid onto a bench next to the wall, he needed better support then a chair that was for sure. He watched cautiously at the man as he got out the supplies. "Not surprised, maybe we should find a doctor for the crew." Dorian stated with a slight chuckle pain shooting across his chest wound. It hurt so much as he lifted up his arms and tried to help as best he could as his tattered black shirt was pulled off of him. "Do not ruin that shirt." He almost hissed as it hit the ground in a pile next to his feet. It was the only thing he still had from being a slave, it was something precious to him. Dorian took a few deep breaths, trying to focus and will his body to stay still even with the pain coming his way. With a nod he signaled for Baru and the countdown started. The liquid was cold, but that quickly changed to pain as the liquid seeped into his wounds flaring them back up. His hand gripped the wooden arm rest, tiny cracking noises could be heard as it tried to break but did not. He was in too much pain to realize just how strong he had gotten, as Baru finished them up. The next part he knew was going to hurt, each wound felt like it was happening all over again as Baru wrapped the bandaged tight around each, they were already starting to stain red as the cleaning had reopened them. Finally after what felt like an eternity they were done, Dorian was panting and looked up at his Captain. "Thank you, Baru. We have been through so much and yet I know absolutely nothing about you." |
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| Kid | Mar 10 2016, 01:03 AM Post #8 |
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Baru would clean his hands, smoothly washing them. "Well uhh, I don't know much about you neither." Baru would smile. "But I am 19 years of age and I want to become one of the greatest pirates to roam the seas!" Baru would say holding up a wet cloth, high in the sky. He would cough once trying to bring out the emotions. "So what about you, Dorian?" Baru would have his hands clean and would dry them off on his shirt. Baru would look at the bandaged swordsmen. "I lived with my grandfather my whole life due to my parents going missing somehow." Baru would make a small smirk, then chuckle abit. "Then I fought my grandfather just to adventure the sea as a pirate and he wanted me to become a marine." Baru would begin to laugh. His eyes would widen remembering he has some rum in the fridge. He would rush to the fridge and open it then grabbing the cold bottle of rum placing it on the table. The rum would be exactly across from Dorian. Baru would then place two glasses onto the table, then pouring crisp rum into them. "Now let me hear your story?" Baru would place one of the glasses by Dorian then take a sip from his glass finally slouching on the countertop. Edited by Kid, Mar 10 2016, 01:25 AM.
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 10 2016, 04:11 AM Post #9 |
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As expected the little captain stated what almost every pirate and there dog stated when asked what they want in the future. "Well, I suppose trying to be greatest pirate ever is grand and all..." Dorian stated as he got up and moved to the table, his movements were much better now that his wounds were properly bandaged. "I am 18, and at the moment I only have one goal and that is to destroy a certain part of Diamond Isle." His voice got low and growly at the end of that his eyes turning into something sinister. The thoughts of destroying those slavers went against most of Dorian's believes and it brought out the darkness he had boxed up as a slave. "So, you became a pirate to spite your grandfather?" He was not sure if that was the reason but to Dorian Baru was a nice stand up guy. Seems he would have had a great future in the marines because of his grandfather. The last question hung in the awkward silence for longer then it should as Dorian's thumb went at his nervous tick, unsheathing the blade slightly before snapping it back. It was the only noise besides the sea gently lapping at the ship. "I was a slave, for seven years I was a slave. My parents sold me for a small fortune and let me rot in a mine." The venom in his voice was gone, instead it was full of pain. "I escaped, barely, catching the forge of fire while some disgruntled customer had caused a scene. I got shot in the back right before I got to the sea.... I drifted in the ocean pushing myself to keep going for over a day." Dorian stated, going silent for a moment as he grabbed the bottle and took two hard swigs of it before placing it back on the table. Edited by Kerum Kosha, Mar 10 2016, 04:11 AM.
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| Kid | Mar 11 2016, 01:35 AM Post #10 |
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Baru would viciously look at Dorian. "You were what!?" Baru would slam his glass onto the table, causing it to break cutting up Baru's hand. He would stare at Dorian in utter silence with his chromatic colored eyes. Baru would be thinking about why Dorian's parents would sell him into slavery. "You got to be kidding, what island?" He would grind his teeth, hardenly clamped together. Baru would sigh seeing he is getting too angry then rubbing his neck. Baru would grab onto the rum bottle and take several big swivels. He wouldn't place it down at all only too wipe his mouth of rum that didnt make it to his mouth. "Dorian...I know we just assembled this pirate crew but let's take a quick break." Baru would frown. "I am going to scout this ISLAND that you are speaking of and I want you to take the boat and seek medical assistance and train hard so we can destroy those bastards!" Baru would quickly go back to anger, rubbing his mouth again. Baru would be reminded of his past. "I never lived a life like you. My life was way better but it seemed so horrible knowing my parents were missing. I wanted to become a pirate to find my parents but it became more than that as I saw great pirates coming from the port." Baru would laugh abit. "I want to conquer the New World and I know that will take awhile." Baru would begin to frown again. |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 11 2016, 04:50 AM Post #11 |
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After Dorian finished he was quiet for a long time, letting Baru take the bottle from in front of him. It was as if telling the story had ripped the wound wide open again as his mind flashed back to the days of his slavery. Always hungry, always around the hot forge with just enough water to survive. Endlessly creating tools for the other slaves to continue the seemingly nonstop mining of the mines. "Baru, no... I cannot imagine what I would do if you got caught. They will make you a slave if you are caught snooping around." Dorian whispered as he looked down at his sword, he could not let his friend, his captain take such a risk. "Plus, I will need your help to get medical attention, we are wanted, you have to protect me if whatever doctor I see reports me." He was not sure how long it might take for the posters to start circulating. It could be days, or weeks he did not know. The state he was in though a normal nobody marine could probably take him down. |
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| Kid | Mar 12 2016, 12:29 AM Post #12 |
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Baru would think about Dorian being captured which obviously wouldn't be good. He would finally calm down from his tantrum, placing the rum down in the exact same place as it was. The only difference about the rum bottle was the content inside being less in volume. That wouldn't be good but I want to scout the island. Baru would mess around with his chin. "After we get you medical assistance, we will seperate until I scout that island." Baru would clinch his fist, then criss-cross his arms on his chest. "Then we will come back even stronger to destroy this island, WE both want to destroy." Baru would look around then making contact with a nearby window. Baru would walk up to the window and look out, seeing that daytime was no longer and it was sort of dark but the sun was only half way down. Baru would look at Dorian and smirk. "We are actually heading to Shelltown to see my grandfather, he can help you." Baru would place his index finger and thumb on his chin as if thinking, looking up at the ceiling. "I won't be leaving without fighting that old man again." Baru would smile and evily laugh. "I'll probably win again unless the marines arrive." Baru would look at Dorian. He would feel bad for the swordsmen and the feeling of revenge would feel his soul. He would then look outside seeing the sun glaring off the sun making beautiful scenery. Baru would slowly grab Dorian with care obviously. "Come on, let's head outside big guy." Baru would smile. |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 12 2016, 12:59 AM Post #13 |
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Dorian eyed his captain the entire time he was talking, his thoughts going at full speed. "Isn't your grandfather a marine, why would he help me, or us." Dorian added at the end. He did not see a ex-marine helping some pirate his grandson brought over. Especially with them now having a bounty, for all Dorian knew the grandfather would turn him in hoping that with his pirate crew gone Baru would change his mind on being a pirate. Grumbling, Dorian got up using Wraith as a cane, following Baru outside. The fresh air that slapped his face was pleasant, helping to pull him out of such dark thoughts. The sun was just dipping down, and it made the horizon light up in such a beautiful way. It was things like this that actually made Dorian grateful that he was no longer trapped in a cave. "Well Baru, at least we have a goal, something to strive for in the short term." He looked over at his Captain, as much as he liked the man he was afraid he would slow him down. He hated thinking that but the man had a long way to go. "Just make sure you get powerful Baru, I cannot imagine what I would do if you got captured." Maybe I should sneak off and take care of this myself. Dorian thought to himself pulling his sword out of its sheath and staring at the blade, his eyes reflecting off the metal. |
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| Kid | Mar 12 2016, 04:54 AM Post #14 |
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Baru would be blankly staring at the horizon were the sun was located. The swordsmen would piss Baru off with that question. "Because he is my grandfather and if he doesnt Ill kick his ass!" Baru would grunt, placing his arms into his chest, criss-cross. The waves would be smooth tonight, but the situation would not soothe Baru at all. Baru thought about his grandpa and the fight they had at Shelltown. Baru would have slightly grown since the fight but what would the old man have done since then? Baru would smile abit thinking about his grandfather. Baru would look at the man. "This is your goal but I will help you since we are a crew." Baru would climb onto the Lion's head and stand on it as a surface. "You decided to become one of my men so I will do whatever it takes to take care of my men even if death is the sacrafice." Baru would look at Dorian and grunt. "I will become powerful and conquer every area of this world with my crew, nothing will hold me back from my goal except death." Baru would place his fist into the air. "The Black Shirts will rule the New World." |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 13 2016, 09:22 PM Post #15 |
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He let his captain rant for a while as he stared off into the now growing night. Watching him as he climbed up to the head of the lion. You really do look like a captain Baru. Maybe inexperienced and maybe a bit naive, but you have a good heart. Dorian thought to himself as he shifted, limping over to the rail next to the lion's head. "Thank you Baru, that means a lot. I do not honestly know if I could take them down on my own." He stated as his mind drifted back to the fight only a day ago, that fight alone showed him so much. First and foremost was that he was not powerful enough, and secondly that he was cocky and it had almost led to not only his death but Baru's. "Go big or Go home right." Dorian stated with a laugh which ended up in him wincing painfully as it moved his newly bandaged body. The next week or two would be hard on him, not being able to move around like he used to. "You do know, that if we take out the slavers in Diamond Isle, we will be very wanted and probably have to flee to the Grand Line."" Dorian muttered, but loud enough for Baru to hear him. |
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