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| [Graded]The Lucky Lion and The Black Shirt Pirates; Diekid | |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 8 2016, 05:47 PM Post #1 |
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OCC: Figured we could get to know each other and you can practice description by taking Dorian on a tour of the ship :P Also forcing you to figure out what is all on the ship :P It was a fitful unconsciousness as Dorian continued to remember the Cero Pirates blades one by one slashing into his body in rapid succession. The way he had juggled the blades while sending out air blades had been amazing, the technique alone had distracted him. Not that he could have blocked all of them had he been completely focused. The young pirate would wake occasionally to feel the gentle sway of the ship before falling back into darkness only gathering a few details of his surroundings. Then he would be back in Loguetown facing the pirate and getting ripped to shreds yet again. Each time he tried to will his body to move faster, but each time nothing happened, it was an endless loop of torture. Finally, who knows how long later, Dorian woke up and sat up in his now red bed. Even his white jacket was red, hopefully I can get that out Dorian thought to himself as he reached to pick up his swords from the ground. Immense pain rippled through his arms as he stopped half way sweat pouring down his face. Taking a long deep breath he finished the motion and picked them up slowly sliding them back into their sheath. Roughly a hour later, of just sitting there he took off one of the swords and placed the bottom of the sheath on the ground. With a grunt of effort he pushed himself up and used it as a cane to walk towards what he could guess was the door out. Dorian would slowly make he way through some halls until he found the one outside opening it. A strong breeze full of the scent of sea hit his face, along with a gentle spray from a wave hitting the side of the ship. A smile crept on his face as he pushed himself farther trying to find Baru. His movements were sluggish, and to be honest he probably should have stayed in bed but he refused. |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 13 2016, 09:25 PM Post #16 |
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He let his captain rant for a while as he stared off into the now growing night. Watching him as he climbed up to the head of the lion. You really do look like a captain Baru. Maybe inexperienced and maybe a bit naive, but you have a good heart. Dorian thought to himself as he shifted, limping over to the rail next to the lion's head. "Thank you Baru, that means a lot. I do not honestly know if I could take them down on my own." He stated as his mind drifted back to the fight only a day ago, that fight alone showed him so much. First and foremost was that he was not powerful enough, and secondly that he was cocky and it had almost led to not only his death but Baru's. "Go big or Go home right." Dorian stated with a laugh which ended up in him wincing painfully as it moved his newly bandaged body. The next week or two would be hard on him, not being able to move around like he used to. "You do know, that if we take out the slavers in Diamond Isle, we will be very wanted and probably have to flee to the Grand Line."" Dorian muttered, but loud enough for Baru to hear him. |
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| Kid | Mar 15 2016, 05:25 AM Post #17 |
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Baru would look at Dorian with stars shining bright in his eyes like diamonds. "I would love to become a high threat to the marines." He would say still imagining the beautiful daydream of being chased by the most powerful marines. He would look at Dorian and begin to chuckle then placing his arms on his head. "And the slavers need to be set free anyways they shouldn't be trapped in a mine." Baru would clinch his fist looking at the amazing scenery as his obsidian hair would sway with the breeze like a fellow companion. Baru would look at Dorian once more. "After we get you medical assistance and your wounds are healed, I will head to Diamond Isle and scout the area out." Baru would smile. "The crew's needs come first and there goals are my goals." Baru's stomach would growl and he would drool abit. "You mind cooking this time, because you know I did cook last time?" Baru would evily smirk at the swordsmen. He would place his hand on his stomach and begin rubbing it as in need of food. Baru would still be standing on the Lion's head as if he was a statue. Finally, he would fall off due to a quick jolt due to a wave violently hitting the ship causing him to rock back, landing on his shoulder. "Ouch." Baru would rub his shoulder. "That kinda hurt." |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 17 2016, 12:41 AM Post #18 |
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Baru continued on his rather dull and boring list of what he wanted to do with his life, at least to Dorian. There was not really anything wrong with them, it was just something that seemed pointless. Honestly Dorian had no idea what to do after his attack of Diamond Isle, chances are they would have to flee into the even more dangerous Grand Line. With a chuckle it watched as Baru was dumped onto the deck, "Just be lucky it wasn't into the sea." Dorian stated laughter and pain still in his voice as even the chuckle was enough to send pain through his wounds. "Wel l, if you like blood in your food then sure I can make it." The swordsmen stated with a laugh as he headed towards the doors that would lead to the rest of the ship. "Also, before we eat, why don't you show me around, I only know about the kitchen and the room I awoke in after all." Dorian said as they walked, still using his sword as a cane. |
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| Kid | Mar 19 2016, 02:44 AM Post #19 |
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Baru would laugh. He would walk up to the hull and knock on it. A secret door would reveal itself to Dorian. "This is the ship's blueprint with detailed descriptions. He would throw the blueprint at Dorian. "I mean you are my co-captain." Baru would smirk, rubbing his neck. The map would read: The Main Deck: Nothing but barrels filled with rum & a wooden surface for the crew to enjoy. It also contains a scouting deck were at the top, you would scout the area for incoming islands, pirates, and etc. At the tip of the ship is a Lion's head made out of gold. Aye whoever bought this damn ship didn't want it to be made out of silver soo. The Kitchen: The area were the crew will enjoy breakfast, lunch, and dinner. This area consist of various pots and pans. It also comes with a loadout of equipment including yes you know it, spoons! The floor and walls would be wood but the items inside would be a variety of colors. For example, the oven would be white and black. The fridge would be pearly white. The table would be rectangular and consist of silver. The Captain Quarters: For this ship the captain only wanted a mahogany desk, chair, pens, paper, and a picture of a duck. Sleeping Area: This area has multiple beds were the crewmmates will lay there heads and just relax. The only thing that can be heard is the relaxing ocean waves so e joy yourself. The bloody bed is also Dorian's property, Baru would add. The Workshop This area has a variety of flintlocks, cutlasses, and other weapons which are found on normal ships. It also contains armors but this is a pirate ship, you don't need armor. The crew may also workout in this deadly area just make sure the swords dont fall on your head even if they are safely secured in straps. Edited by Kid, Mar 19 2016, 09:31 PM.
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 19 2016, 09:40 PM Post #20 |
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Dorian eyed the man as he tapped open a secret area, it was a small room and probably wouldn't be that hard for others to find. With a quick movement he caught the plans as they flew toward his face and growled. Pain rippled through his body as the motion caused the bandages to start turning red he had opened at least one of them again. "Thank alot." Dorian whispered as he slowly flipped through the plans. "A workshop huh, is there a forge in there by chance?" Dorian asked as he continued to stare at that section of the blue prints. It would be nice to have his own forge and be able to hone his skills even more. It was one of his goals to become a master smith, maybe even make legendary swords. "Um, I have one simple question though for you Baru. Who is piloting the ship. Last time I checked they did not sail on their own...." They had been busy for a while now, it was surprising they had not hit anything or well gotten lost... even though they probably were lost. Add navigator to the list. Dorian thought to himself. |
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| Kid | Mar 20 2016, 02:11 AM Post #21 |
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Baru would place his closed fist onto his hips, chuckling. "Obviously I sent the ship towards Shelltown." He would then be smiling for abit then quickly frown. "But...the ship has to be navigated or it'll...go..off..course." He said slowly, rubbing his neck sighing. He would then grab the blueprint from Dorian sending it flying into the secret compartment. He would close it and rush towards the wheel. "Oh darn! I forgot to navigate the ship, I mean I am not a expert but-" Baru would sigh. "I love adventures!" Baru would say. "But lets try to find a navigator." Baru would walk down to the main deck once again. He would hop onto the Lion's head and criss-cross his legs shaking left to right, whistling. The night would quickly come to a halt as the sun would appear at the horizon. The ship would independently sail on it's own. Wherever the ship went, so did the Black Shirts. "I can't wait for our next adventure." |
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| Kerum Kosha | Mar 20 2016, 09:21 PM Post #22 |
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Exasperated Dorian just watched as his captain went to the wheel and started to make corrections. I fear for my life if we can't find someone, anyone who knows how to navigate. He thought to himself as he followed Baru to the lion's head watching him assume his new favorite spot. "Well, wake me up if anything happens or if we make it to shell town. I think I am going to go sleep for a few weeks." Dorian jested as he turned to leave the thud of his sword rhythmic as he moved along the wooden deck. It was not hard to find his way, especially since there were blood droplets to follow. Pushing the door open he looked at the room a bit differently now, it was his home. The crimson bed beckoned him, he probably should change the sheets but they would most likely become bloody again. Phantom sat next to the bed, he had felt naked without it but it had not been needed. Placing Wraith next to it he patted them softly before crawling into bed and falling unconscious. THE END |
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| RyanG | Mar 21 2016, 02:36 AM Post #23 |
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Graded! Ketchup: 5 DP, 700,000Second person: 5 DP, 700,000 Notes Pretty informative thread. Cool. Edited by RyanG, Mar 21 2016, 06:41 AM.
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