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| Captain Marvelous | Jul 26 2017, 12:12 AM Post #1 |
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海贼王新世界 Account Name: Mr. Prince 海贼王新世界 Name: (Captain) Marvelous Nickname: Gokai Red Age: 27 Gender: Male Race: Bilkan Height: 5"11 Weight: 170 Faction: Pirate Crew: N/A (Formerly Gokaiger Pirates) Reputation: 5,000,000Profession: Captain (No other notable profession) Fame: 0 Vessel: Hometown: Bilka Physical Description: A well built pale man of alien decent with a large frame for a 5'11 body. His hair is wild, spiky and jet black and his face is somewhat round and nonthreateneing. He has narrow shoulders compared to his wide chest and torso and average arm and leg length. He has clean white teeth and his snow white moon wings are smaller than average and are almost always pressed firmly against his back, hidden under his clothes. He shares almost perfect similarities with a normal human aside from his wings. His eyes are light red with black pupils. Clothing: White or Black button up shirt that reaches up to his upper neck, untucked, with a black vest worn over that. The vest has red stripes across the front with gold trim to them. Black trousers with high black boots. A red knee length captains coat with gold trim on the edges and large gold buttons. He wears black socks and red tighty whities. Accessories: A golden Medallion with a keyhole in the center. A Ranger Dial that looks like This. It has no unique abilities at the moment and it is just a hefty dial Extra: Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle Personality Always sparkling, Captain Marvelous is a "wild man." He desires everything to be stimulating, and he is always curious. Once he sets his aims on a target, he moves forward without flinching, no matter what. Marvelous is the type to poke his head in where it does not belong, and he often brandishes his crew with unreasonable orders. Captain Marvelous is an unpredictable sort of character who does reckless things to satisfy his curiosity, stating his actions as what any pirate would do in that particular moment. Being of alien (Bilkan) decent, he is much stronger than he looks, and he also has a rather hearty appetite. He is a "go with the flow" type of person and he often will start out with a plan, face an unexpected obstacle along the way and shrug and charge lead-long into that obstacle until it's gone. He often appears clueless but is actually quite perceptive of situations around him and can read a room well. Marvelous is also someone who cares much for his crew and for others even if he doesn't show it. However, he does believe in his crew and doesn't worry about them when they are in a bind of their own and shows to have much faith in them. He is an intelligent person despite his decision to become a pirate and make the world government his enemy. He is generally cheerful though he carries a lot of pain and a deep sense of responsibility because of the loss of his previous crew. He likes fighting, people who are laid back, women who are modest, funny people and adventure. He dislikes: cruel people and stupid people, and bland food. He himself has been characterized as funny and he is kind to those who are innocent and downtrodden. However almost all of these tendencies can be overridden by his loyalty to his friends and if they are threatened, he can act way out of character in order to protect them. His morality however is described at best as a puzzle. History Spoiler: click to toggle Weaponry & Equipment Weapon Name: Impact dial Weapon Class: N/A Description: A sturdy seashell of around 5 inches in diameter and 2 inches in height. A small button in the center to release the impact. Impact Dial – This type of dial is able to absorb the kinetic energy of blunt strikes as well as the impact from explosions. The apex of the dial can be pressed to release the stored energy which causes internal damage to a target not normally leaving much external damage. (As a note this can hurt devil fruit users such as Gomu Gomu no mi users or even logia users if caught off guard.) The use of this dial also causes major backlash on the users, giving them at least if not all the force they released back to them. The basic formula for Impact Dials is the first strike that hits them absorbs strength equal to the strength of who ever released the attack. The release of the dial will causes damage to the target and the user equal to the strength of the stored attack. ( Free starting dial) Perks (Points): N/A Price: N/A Stats Strength: 10 Speed: 5 Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 2 Fortune: 8 Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 0/5,000,000 Bounty Beli Earned: 0/0 (For Bounty Hunters and those claiming Marine Bounties) Sources Spoiler: click to toggle PurchasesN/A Traits Bilkan (2 Traits): Like Skypiean and Shandorian, they are endowed with wings on their backs. What differentiates them from the other two races is that their wings face downward. Akin to the other races of the moon. One odd aspect of their race is that many of them possess goat-like facial features such as floppy ears and horns. Bilkans receive a 25% discount off of all dials and can purchase dials at creation. They receive one free elemental or miscellaneous dial, this can not be harvested. Fated (1 Traits) - When the character earns a trait point, they gain 1.5 trait points instead of the traditional 1. Fated acts as a banking system. These traits are usable whenever the taker sees fit. X does not have to be a whole number, and due to the nature of fated can be X or X.5 traits. Devil Fruit Name: N/A Devil Fruit Type: N/A Devil Fruit Ability: N/A Techniques: (4/16) (Max Tech Rank-4) Impact Dial - 4 Type: Defensive Range: 2 meters Stats: Impact Dial may be hit by anything blunt or incapable of slicing and will absorb the kinetic energy. Once the apex of the Dial is pressed, the stored energy is released, usually causing internal injuries to a living body, while not leaving any visible external damage. The Impact Dial can also absorb the impact of explosions. |
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| Captain Marvelous | Jul 27 2017, 07:16 PM Post #2 |
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| Scarlet | Jul 27 2017, 08:14 PM Post #3 |
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You're history is all well and good, i could ask to boost a little on personality's details but its more or less fine, however the appearance section will have to be lengthened and have more detail added for the clothing section and obviously nothing has been done yet for physical description. aside from that, everything to what i can think of right now is in order |
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| Captain Marvelous | Jul 28 2017, 12:21 AM Post #4 |
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I expanded on the clothing and added a physical description. Also slightly lengthened personality. |
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| Captain Marvelous | Jul 30 2017, 10:01 PM Post #5 |
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| Scarlet | Jul 31 2017, 02:49 AM Post #6 |
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Spoiler: click to toggle Inoko Sadismus-The SM Queen Inoko's NPC's Reihe Blitzang- Hellcat Reihe's NPC's Payasso Brommista- Fang Clown Paya Yuutsu Shitsui- Child of Despair Yuutsu's NPCs Selene Saule- Lieutenant Vira D. Bathory- Blood Countess | |
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| Hibiko | Jul 31 2017, 09:19 PM Post #7 |
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Self-Proclaimed Lazy Person
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2/2 This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly. |
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