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Topic Started: Sep 24 2017, 06:20 AM (112 Views)
Thequartzcaptain
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海贼王新世界

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海贼王新世界

Name: Ozymadius Fae
Nickname: Spark
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'3
Weight: 221
Faction: Pirate
Crew: N/A
Reputation: N/A
Profession: Musician
Fame: N/A
Vessel: Night sky ((Ichi rank))
Hometown: Karaoke Island
Physical Description: Ozymadius is a very handsome man. He has somewhat tanned skin from hanging out at the beach so much and long white hair. Across his face is a scar that goes from one part of his cheek, across his nose, and to the other side of his cheek. Other than that large scar on his face he has no impurities on his face. To go along with his white hair he has white eyebrows. He also has eyes as blue as the sky that would attract any woman to him. Unlike most people ozy is a very strong person, but has a more lean cut body since he is taller than most. His white hair is long enough to go down a bit passed his shoulder blades.
Clothing: Despite being a beach boy ozymadius likes to dress nice so wherever he goes he is wearing a black suit with a white tie. To go along with it he has black and white dressy shoes.
Accessories: N/A
Extra: On his back is a tattoo of a demon
Picture:
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Personality Since his childhood ozy was a very outgoing person. Although as he grew as a person he started to become very blunt, straight forward, polite, and at the same time disciplined. Around woman and children he is a very sweet and caring person. He can understand a lot of things that may be going on in their lives and would do just about anything to make the person happy again. With men he is the life of the party! He likes to joke around, drink, party, and just in general have fun with his friends. In most situations he is the optimist who tries to make the best out of moments. Although he likes to have fun he isn't the best at fully planning things.

When brought upon people who anger him ozy doesn't show mercy. He will fight them if needed, beat them, and then try to break or discipline them. Either that or if they are pirates he would do the thing they hate the most and turn them into the navy. When he is bored he just brings out a ukelele and sings for everyone or just for himself.

History
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Weaponry & Equipment

Weapon Name: N/A
Weapon Class: N/A
Description: N/A
Perks (Points): N/A
Price: N/A

Stats 32
Strength: 7
Speed: 10
Stamina: 9
Accuracy: 6
Fortune: 8

Distributive Points Earned: 0/0
Beli Earned: 5,000,000/5,000,000
Bounty Beli Earned: 0/0 (For Bounty Hunters and those claiming Marine Bounties)

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Traits Fated (3 Traits) - When the character earns a trait point, they gain 1.5 trait points instead of the traditional 1. Fated acts as a banking system. These traits are usable whenever the taker sees fit. X does not have to be a whole number, and due to the nature of fated can be X or X.5 traits.

Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A

Techniques: N/A

Technique Name - Rank 4
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Stats: 16
Edited by CaptainMarvelous, Sep 26 2017, 08:40 PM.
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Is this a WIP or is this your application you wish to submit? If it is under construction please note it with a WIP tag in your title.
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it is a character app
I'm a viking and I am staying at your house. How did you expect me to not raid your panty drawer? That's what vikings do! - Magnus Holt
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Thequartzcaptain
Sep 24 2017, 10:45 PM
it is a character app
Ok then a couple of things need to be adjusted before I can give an approval.

3 paragraphs is the minimum of acceptable history
You don't have any techniques which is fine but you still must list your technique points/technique points available and your max technique rank. See the character creation template for reference
Your clothing section could probably use a little beefing up as well.
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Your picture just leads to pinterest itself, if you can link me the actual picture I can assist in placing it into your app.

Your stats add up to 34 not 32. Please remove two stat points..

Your fated if you are using all 3 traits in it will have 3 Traits labeled and not X Traits.

And as pops has said we would like some more history, and I would love a little bit more personality. Without the picture as well I'm having a hard time imagining what your character actually looks like.
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Sep 25 2017, 03:37 PM
Your picture just leads to pinterest itself, if you can link me the actual picture I can assist in placing it into your app.

Your stats add up to 34 not 32. Please remove two stat points..

Your fated if you are using all 3 traits in it will have 3 Traits labeled and not X Traits.

And as pops has said we would like some more history, and I would love a little bit more personality. Without the picture as well I'm having a hard time imagining what your character actually looks like.
Reposting your App is discouraged please edit the original...

Also reposting your app does not fix the issues stated below. Please edit them accordingly.
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I see you have made some adjustments that we suggested. If you believe your app is currently ready to be approved I must inform you that it is still not. It you require any further assistance please reach out to a member of staff. If you are aware of what you must correct on this app already then disregard
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Azuel

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Just a bit more personality if you could then I'm okayish on 1/2ing
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous
Junez Laxus Caliuco
Azuel

Sylar "Sleight" PeaceMarine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: :beli: 168,350,000 • Location: Rellechill
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