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[Accepted]Iblis
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Topic Started: Oct 19 2017, 09:55 PM (126 Views)
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LordBunnyBone
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Oct 19 2017, 09:55 PM
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- Iblis
- The Dark Lord
| Account: LordBunnyBone Character Alias: Iblis Title(s): - Age: 25 Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Race: Human Height: 6’1 Weight: 180 Pounds Faction: Unaffiliated Crew: N/A Position: Captain Reputation: No Threat. Profession: Martial Artist Fame: 0 Vessel: One Ranked Ichi ship Hometown: Prodence Kingdom |
Physical Description Hair : Short, white, and always clean. His hair reaches to his shoulder. Iblis wouldn't do anything stupid for his hair, but he does hold it with enough value that he wouldn't want to purposely get it damaged. Eye: Pitch Black in color, they are generally so black they are the first thing many people notice about Iblis. His eyes have an odd look, they look as if they are about to devour the onlooker's soul intimidating people upon first glance. You can tell a lot about Iblis's real feelings though his eyes. Some say, even just by seeing his eyes, that they can tell that he is a dangerous person to anger and who will not tolerate foolishness Skin: Dark, smooth, no real blemishes to his body. Iblis always keeps himself clean, and hates bruises and scars. Though, with his fighting style you think he would have a lot more. Physique: Skinny, but muscular. His body doesn't often look as raw powerful as it is, but Iblis always makes sure to keep himself as strong physically as he can. Without his shirt on, you can clearly see just how bulky Iblis really is. His arms and chest look as if they are ready to bust under the rather skinny frame Iblis has. Traits: Iblis suffers from a scar right below his eye on his cheek received when fighting the villagers of the town.
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Personality Iblis is fearless and has devoted his existence to combat. His urge to fight stronger opponents and relish in the fight has left mountains of the dead in his wake. He is ferocious and does not show mercy, even when an opponent is clearly outmatched. Above all, he seeks a challenge. Which makes his Evil and always true to his word.
He is a sarcastic, arrogant pompous jerk that doesn't hold back when he talks, extremely cynical and has an aloof and detached personality yet he is very laid back and takes life easy. He now considers himself a deity that evolved beyond a mere human and apparently fears no one. He now seeks to show the world the meaning of his existence has "God". He shows no moral qualms about his actions. He is willing to kill anyone in cold blood and brutally execute friends or foes. He even goes so far as to proclaim himself a "god of peace" come to guide the world to maturity . He also feels that if one does not acknowledge him as a god, their existence is futile in this world...
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HistoryHistory Iblis originated in the Prodence Kingdom to a normal couple but when Iblis was born , he came out with a sinister aura of death and his parents thought that was a bad omen and that he needed to be abandoned or killed...His parents chose the latter and threw the infant into a river where he miraculously survived and was found by an old couple that wanted a child of their own to raise....So they named him Iblis and went to live with them in a small village. At the age of 5 his adopted parents died and he was later adopted by a church cult that was secretly training orphans to become killers. Though Iblis was being raised to kill people the church made sure that Iblis became a devote follower of God since an early age. He grew fond and intrigued by religion and God. He talked for hours with the priests, pundits, or any other religious figure that he could.
Though whenever confronted with the question of which religion he belonged to, he would answer, “I don’t know”. People would encourage him to join their religion, but he would pay no heed. One afternoon at the age of eight a priest questioned about his family. Iblis sat back onto a bench and told his tale of a swordsman that killed his mother and father. “I don’t mind though, it was God’s will”, Iblis said. The priest was moved by the young child’s perception. So, time went on and Iblis grew to a strong and faithful man. He was always true to his word and never held back from a challenge.
At the church, he was the best fighter they had seen in years and knew that he would hero great things and would be fated to do great things. Cult thought two schools of martial artists both at which Iblis was proficient enough at. Those two styles were Kyousen Style of Martial Arts which revolved around various striking techniques without any weapon involved and the next style was the Turtle style which implemented the use of the sword
When Iblis was twelve he began to question his origin, as to why felt different from others and received a so called vision from God who whispered to him “You are just like us” . With those words spoken to him he decided to become a god. He thought he was god, able to create, destroy, and control anything. His heart grew darker and darker. He trained for hours upon hours in the fighting styles that the cult was teaching him. He became an excellent fighter with weapons and even in hand to hand style combat. At the age of Twenty-Three the people of the town began to grow afraid of the church because they found out what they were secretly doing. They picked up their weapons and attacked the church with Iblis along it. Through a gruesome fight Iblis massacred the town and the church as well leaving no one but himself. His thought himself higher then god now. He decided to make the world bow at his feet. He went to the docks and took a ship and sailed out to sea to make the world his.
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| Achievement: | Thread: | Extra: | | None filed. | None filed. | None filed. |
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| Weaponry & Equipment |
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Black Wing Weapon Class: Kannouheiki [Proficient Weapon] Description: These are a pair of Steel Arm Guards that cover both his forearms Perks (Points): Labour and Material (10) Price: $3,000,000
Katana/Sword Weapon Class: Goushikiheiki [Regular Weapon] Description: Regular Katana Perks (Points): Labour and Material (10) + Sharpness (5) Price: $750,000
Black Amour Weapon Class: Goushikiheiki [Regular Weapon] Description: Light Body Armour covering Iblis’ front from attacks Perks (Points): Core Guard (20) Price: $1,000,000
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| Stats | Strength | Speed | Stamina | Accuracy | Fortune | | 32 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 5,000,000/5,000,000
Traits
Traits
Fated (3 Trait) - When the character earns a trait point, they gain 1.5 trait points instead of the traditional 1. Fated acts as a banking system. These traits are usable whenever the taker sees fit. X does not have to be a whole number, and due to the nature of fated can be X or X.5 traits.
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| Devil Fruit Name: | Information N/A | | Devil Fruit Type: | Information N/A | | Devil Fruit Ability: | Information N/A |
Techniques Technique Points: 0/16 Maximum Rank: 4 Offensive
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Fresh
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Oct 20 2017, 12:12 AM
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Lemme do ya a favor real quick. Run those gauntlets under Weaponry pricing instead.
10 Points Labor - 3,000,000 Beli they serve better as Armor under the weaponry anyway.
Every character starts with 5,000,000 Beli. AS WELL AS 5,000,000 beli that is not visible on the character sheet but used for starter weapons.
So your beli value with the above gauntlet pricing would be 5,000,000/5,000,000 
Other than that, I haven't observed the techniques since I'm on self-proclaimed Vacation for a bit. >_<
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Orks
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Oct 21 2017, 04:44 AM
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A Hot Mess
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Yeah, you'll need to adjust the pricing as slated above by Fresh.
As for techniques, you'll probably want to tone the descriptions done for Thousand Tile True Punch (Senmaigawara Seiken), Water Shot (Uchimizu), and Atomic Wave. The reason being that even if you're able to make far more complicated techniques despite being at a lower rank, (which is what the Oni trait does), it doesn't mean that those techniques will have the same lethality or power they'd have if you actually were at say, Rank 23, 22 or 21.
I like The Snake Awakens, but I do gotta ask what exactly is, aside from the speed, allowing your dislocated limbs to slice? Since it sounds like a blunt strike to me all things considered.
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LordBunnyBone
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Oct 21 2017, 07:36 AM
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The Rookie
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I believe I have a different interpretation of the Oni Trait so I rather not haggle over it and removed it completely. So this character is as normal as it can be now.
Any other problems with the app and i'll fix.
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Mr. Prince
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Oct 21 2017, 02:46 PM
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Just Dance
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous  |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Pressure Isle |
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Junez Laxus Caliuco  |
| Strength: 173(130+43) | Accuracy: 171 (137+34) | | Speed: 200 (150+50) | Stamina: 156(125+31) | | Fortune: 175 | Location : Pressure Isle |
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| Name : Azuel Ocean | Beli :96,450,000  | | Faction : Pirate | Reputation : 15,000,000 | | Crew : Electric Lion Pirates | | Crew Position : First Mate | | Fame : 0 | | Vessel : |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Dawn Island |
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Zaine
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Oct 22 2017, 01:12 PM
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Ball of Sunshine
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This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly.
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