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| [Accepted]Adelaide Smith [Ready to be checked]; Done | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 22 2017, 10:48 PM (122 Views) | |
| baconx2 | Oct 22 2017, 10:48 PM Post #1 |
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海贼王新世界 Account Name: baconx2 海贼王新世界 Name: Adelaide Smith Nickname: Miss hits erself Age: 21 Gender: Female Race: Human Height: 5 feet 5 inches Weight: 140 pounds Faction: Pirate Crew: N/A Reputation:0 Profession: Fighter Vessel: free Rank Ichi ship Hometown: Zombie island [tentatively] Physical Description: Adelaide is a slim and lean girl with silky brunette hair. The one part of her which remains untouched from her training, luscious and thick with an exuberant shine in the sunlight. Although she sports some of the natural curvature of a womanly, ala the hourglass. Her bust is a C-cup and her thighs are somewhat thick. She has deep brown eyes with a tint of black spilling from the core of her pupil. She generally has fair exuberant skin, but upon closer inspection one might find bruises of a deep purple riddling her arms. Her body is often scuffed up with tings of roughness from ill healed scrapes and cuts which form a subtle rough and flaky exterior. Her teeth are white,but there's signs of yellowing from ill maintenance. Her butt is round and plump, but taught from all her physical training. Her belly button is an innie as is with her private parts. She doesn't have any extra body hair in her arm pits and private area, due to maintence. She has thin eye brows which become thick without maintenance. Her hands are scarred, with deep gashes which never healed correctly. Fingernails cracked and chipped. Size 7 shoe. Clothing She's generally dressed in a full body cloak with white trimmings at the edges. It covers most of her body from head to toe, with a musty maroon with deep staining from dirt and the elements. Her white undershirt has long sleeves which extend a little too far past her wrists, and its color is barely recognizable as white. She has thin maroon vest over her undershirt which is for holding small things like her keys or bullets with its many little compartments. She has a skirt which used to be frilly as it almost extended to her knees, but now its full of holes with deep blotches of grey which no longer come out. She has white musty socks which reek of sweat and ocean air. Her cloak has a hood that extends 5 inches past her cheeks. She wears regular panties and a push up bra. Accessories: A necklace made silver with a single pearl hanging at the bottom of it. Extra N/A picture ![]() Personality Adelaide is a woman of powerful convictions, leading her to be a hyper polarizing figure. She lives by her principles and will not hesitate to sever a bridge when she has been wronged beyond repair. In that way it can be hard for her to establish friendships due to her inability to push past certain differences in people on a fundamental level. But contrary to her strong beliefs and being a hard headed stubborn mule, she genuinely wants friendship and companions. The stark difference for her is when fairness isn't adhered to in a relationship of any kind, that it's grounds for severance to prevent further abuses. Adelaide has a penchant for greed, in all aspects of life. Whether it be a shiny jewel or perhaps the egg of an exotic animal, adelaide tends to take what she wants. Although it's not by any means necessary, she does live outside of the code of ethics amongst thieves or the law established by the world government. She tends to be a bit self centered and generally acts in a pragmatic way toward others and has a self centered streak when it comes to helping herself. This leads her to be aggressive in chasing her dreams and being extremely competitive when it comes to winning. Her general attitude is to try try and if you fail once more, try again. Pressures to succeed and fail do sometimes get to her as she is aware of the fact that almost is a death sentence, but in general she's never unwilling to get up and do it over if there's an opportunity to do so. When it comes to her attitude toward others, her general conception of marines them being an affront to her liberty and the pursuit of happiness. Pirates she looks on with a cautious and weary eye, lest she fall for their general disregard for the lives others. If marines represent oppression through law, the pirates rule in a vacuum of societal order, being their foil. In general she has a deep fascination with fishmen and the like, wanting to meet other beings with sapience. Her thing is the world is a treasure trove of an irrevocable treasure trove of experiences, both good and bad. Sometimes the bad does cloud her judgement as it's infinitely easier for her to focus on the wrongs in life rather than the rights. History Perhaps the most jarring thing about Adelaide's upbringing stems from her family business and the day she lost her ability to swim. At the age of nine Adelaide was once an aspiring deep sea treasure driver, who dreamt of finding gold and riches at the bottom of the ocean. To meet that end she practiced swimming with her family and friends, who mostly kept an eye on her in the shallows of zombie island. Her determination was something her parents assumed would fade as did all childhood dreams did, because afterall it was predicated on the idea of a norand brank, a man who died at sea and lost his treasure to the ocean's maw. What was supposed to be a cautionary tale, excited the young girl who had a peculiar interest in the gold rather than fate of the man who the cautionary tale was about. These dreams however, died with her accidentally ingesting a terrible fruit. Most of Halloween island was spooky as can be, with colorful designs abundant and strange looking snacks for all to see. One she found particularly interesting with its queer features, jagged stripes of red and black coursing through its rough skin. Though it was oval shaped as a pineapple, it had the particular look of being a spring of sorts. The fruit was tough, she had to stab it with all her might to open it up. The juicies flowed profusely, predicated by a loud crack. She held her nose shut with one hand and picked up a piece within her other hand. At the sound of the front door gave a shrill eek, swiftly sliding the odd fruit into the kitchen drawer and throwing the piece of fruit into her mouth. Her father came in with a smile, initially taking the smell in the room as the smell of sea water and something odd his daughter brought home. But upon closer inspection he noticed the dirtied counter adelaide's stuffed cheeks. He rushed over, trying to stop from swallowing, but her nerves got the best of her and she choked it down as she fell off the stool. Her father had a look of utter terror and rage, unsure of what to think as his daughter gagged and coughed on the floor. " It's okay honey, just breathe. Did you taste that wierd looken fruit"? Adelaide saw the distress in his face and she quivered, averting her eyes and balling up expecting to be yelled at. Her father pat her head as she was reeling from the awful taste of the fruit and he smiled, with a hint of sadness. " That was an important fruit for daddy, but it's okay if you ate it". Her father broke the bad news to the young girl, shattering her dream of ever being a world class sea diver. She raced to the beach, gently placing her toe into the ebbing tide. It had done exactly as he had said, the ocean rejected her. She felt an innate horror at the slightest tough of ocean water as her strength waned. She fell back with tears in her eyes, longing for the ocean which no longer wanted her. Even as she stared out at the horizon in horror, she could feel the instability of her body begin to rear its ugly head. Simply leaning on her arms as she said caused them to compress involuntarily. As she said she tried to pull away and found her arm shooting out against her will, slapping back into her face. She grimaced and stared at her hand. She made a fist and grit her teeth. " Alright body. You want a war? THEN YOU GOT A WAR". Weaponry & Equipment Weapon Name: Pistol Weapon Class: Proficient Description: A revolver with an steel barrel and wood stock. It has a chamber that holds 6 rounds. Perks (Points): N/A Price: 6 million ![]() Stats 34 Strength: 8 Speed: 8 *Stamina: 10 (8+2) Accuracy: 8 Fortune: 8 Distributive Points Earned: 0/0 Beli Earned: 4,000,000/5,000,000 Bounty Beli Earned: 0/0 (For Bounty Hunters and those claiming Marine Bounties) Sources Purchases Traits (3/3) Random Devil Fruit (2 Traits) - A character may take this trait to be granted a random Devil fruit. This fruit can be declined if taking at character creation. Random Devil fruit that are taken after creation must be kept. This trait cannot be taken more than once per account and if the devil fruit is declined there is a 1 month wait period for another roll. Bear (1 Trait) - For every 4 points put into stamina (up to a maximum of 75), the score increases by an additional 1. Devil Fruit Name:Bane Bane no Mi (Spring Spring Fruit) (T5) Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to turn any of their body parts into springs. These springs can be used to increase the pressure of punches or be utilized for better movement. They can be relatively difficult to control in this manner though. Techniques: (5/16) (Max Tech Rank:4) Bane Bane no mi - Rank 4(Free) Type: Offensive Range: Self Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to turn any of their body parts into springs. These springs can be used to increase the pressure of punches or be utilized for better movement. They can be relatively difficult to control in this manner though. Wind up Punch - Rank 4 Type: Devil fruit Range: melee Stats: Description: Adelaide compresses the muscles in her arm using her spring powers to throw a stronger punch. Spring board - Rank 1 Type: Support Range:Self Stats: Description: Adelaide compresses her legs into springs to launch herself in one direction like a cannon ball. Edited by baconx2, Oct 23 2017, 08:37 PM.
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| Mr. Prince | Oct 22 2017, 10:55 PM Post #2 |
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CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE ROLLED Spoiler: click to toggle Please post confirming or denying this fruit. If you chose to deny it you will wait 30 days before you can roll again Edited by Mr. Prince, Oct 22 2017, 10:56 PM.
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |
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| baconx2 | Oct 22 2017, 11:09 PM Post #3 |
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I accepterino. |
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| baconx2 | Oct 23 2017, 03:12 AM Post #4 |
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I winged the techniques and weapon. If there's something wrong I'm ready to fix em. |
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| Fresh | Oct 23 2017, 04:13 AM Post #5 |
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Please put your account name where the account tag section is. Also if you can please fix your physical description area to have the tag, and add a clothing section please. Personality and history is pretty good Your stamina should be 10 (8+2) because of your Bear Stamina trait. The techniques won't come with Stat Boosts, also your base technique won't have them at all as you upgrade. Other than that the techniques themselves are fine. |
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| baconx2 | Oct 23 2017, 04:30 AM Post #6 |
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Okie dokie, I think it's all fixed |
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| Fresh | Oct 23 2017, 04:36 AM Post #7 |
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Also your base DF technique should be the name of the DF and copy paste the description please, that is the free rank 4 base technique, not wind up punch >_< |
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| baconx2 | Oct 23 2017, 05:07 AM Post #8 |
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You can close this. I'm done. |
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| Fresh | Oct 23 2017, 12:16 PM Post #9 |
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What I mean you're pretty much set 0-0 I went to bed last night it was like 2 am for me. Aside from that for a proficient pistol please remove 1,000,000 beli aside from that 1/2, and when you get that beli changed you'll be accepted by the second mod :) |
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| Mr. Prince | Oct 23 2017, 08:39 PM Post #10 |
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2/2 This character has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum. A moderator will re-post your character in the archives shortly. |
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers." Captain Marvelous Junez Laxus Caliuco Azuel Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards TheMostBadassHenshin | |
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