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[Accepted]Jara Jara no Mi; Revamp
Topic Started: Nov 19 2017, 06:36 PM (90 Views)
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Devil Fruit Name: Jara Jara no Mi (Chain Chain Fruit) (T3)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to create and manipulate chains from any part of their body. These chains are as tough as the devil fruit technique rank. These chains can be controlled at will, and their links and ends are capable of being deformed into shapes. Being bound by these chains can cause a draining and weakening effect.


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Just a little revamp, shouldn't be the only fruit to have a recoil for just using the power in general.

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Devil Fruit Name: Jara Jara no Mi (Chain Chain Fruit) (T4)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to create and manipulate chains from any part of their body. These chains are as tough as the devil fruit technique rank. Creating the chains does hurt the user however you do have full control over the chains created, whether it be constricting or fluid movement.
Edited by Maple, Nov 19 2017, 06:39 PM.
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Why do the chains have a weakening/draining effect just because you're bound by them?

Sounds like seastone to me.
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I was going for one of those binding fruits that weaken you, a la soap fruit, washing fruit and cage fruit.
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Nov 22 2017, 06:58 PM
I was going for one of those binding fruits that weaken you, a la soap fruit, washing fruit and cage fruit.
The soap and wash fruits have reasons why they weaken u. The cage fruit doesn't weaken u. Maybe if the cage is made of seastone it weakened devil fruit users in the show, but the cage fruit we have here doesn't weaken people bound by it. I am also curious why the chains would weaken people as well. I am fine with adding an element of something else to chains to liven it up but an explanation for that ability working that way would be nice.
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It would be a concentrated binding energy I guess? The essence of being bound by chains? I'm fine removing the ability, just wanted something to spice it up I guess
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Eh, I'm meh on this. 1/2 for the hell of it
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Weren't the chains of that guy in Heart of Gold strong enough to weaken people? Pretty sure it's just my mind playing games, but I wouldn't be surprised if that was the case.
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Yeah I wanted it to be like that along with the chains I saw in black clover that weakened those bound in them.
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they do in fact not canonically drain, but do with that what you will
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Bump for the new year and i'll reiterate my 1/2
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