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[Accepted]Jara Jara no Mi; Revamp
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Topic Started: Nov 19 2017, 06:36 PM (90 Views)
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Maple
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Nov 19 2017, 06:36 PM
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Devil Fruit Name: Jara Jara no Mi (Chain Chain Fruit) (T3) Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to create and manipulate chains from any part of their body. These chains are as tough as the devil fruit technique rank. These chains can be controlled at will, and their links and ends are capable of being deformed into shapes. Being bound by these chains can cause a draining and weakening effect.
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Just a little revamp, shouldn't be the only fruit to have a recoil for just using the power in general.
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Devil Fruit Name: Jara Jara no Mi (Chain Chain Fruit) (T4) Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit grants the consumer the ability to create and manipulate chains from any part of their body. These chains are as tough as the devil fruit technique rank. Creating the chains does hurt the user however you do have full control over the chains created, whether it be constricting or fluid movement.
Edited by Maple, Nov 19 2017, 06:39 PM.
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| Stats - 1,417 | Strength: 398 (248+150) | Speed: 368 (276+92) | Stamina: 395(245+150) | Accuracy: 306 (245+61) | Fortune: 366 |
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Mr. Prince
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Nov 21 2017, 01:07 AM
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1/2
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous  |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Pressure Isle |
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Junez Laxus Caliuco  |
| Strength: 173(130+43) | Accuracy: 171 (137+34) | | Speed: 200 (150+50) | Stamina: 156(125+31) | | Fortune: 175 | Location : Pressure Isle |
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Azuel  | | Azuel phantom |
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| Name : Azuel Ocean | Beli :96,450,000  | | Faction : Pirate | Reputation : 15,000,000 | | Crew : Electric Lion Pirates | | Crew Position : First Mate | | Fame : 0 | | Vessel : |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Dawn Island |
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Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards MarvelousTrade thread. Changing hands again10 DP, 6,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30508481/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30517617/1/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30519011/1/#newAzuelhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11125396/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11129077/1/ http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30330516/3/ 10 DP, 7,000,000 Beli http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30423423/1/#new 7DP & 4,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30456054/1/#new 5 DP & 2,500,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#newSylarhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30388763/2/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30344540/2/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30455738/1/#newSaving the tourists http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30511214/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#new TheMostBadassHenshin
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Zaine
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Nov 22 2017, 04:11 PM
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Why do the chains have a weakening/draining effect just because you're bound by them?
Sounds like seastone to me.
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Maple
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Nov 22 2017, 06:58 PM
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I was going for one of those binding fruits that weaken you, a la soap fruit, washing fruit and cage fruit.
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Mr. Prince
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Nov 24 2017, 03:00 PM
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I was going for one of those binding fruits that weaken you, a la soap fruit, washing fruit and cage fruit. The soap and wash fruits have reasons why they weaken u. The cage fruit doesn't weaken u. Maybe if the cage is made of seastone it weakened devil fruit users in the show, but the cage fruit we have here doesn't weaken people bound by it. I am also curious why the chains would weaken people as well. I am fine with adding an element of something else to chains to liven it up but an explanation for that ability working that way would be nice.
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous  |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Pressure Isle |
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Junez Laxus Caliuco  |
| Strength: 173(130+43) | Accuracy: 171 (137+34) | | Speed: 200 (150+50) | Stamina: 156(125+31) | | Fortune: 175 | Location : Pressure Isle |
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Azuel  | | Azuel phantom |
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| Name : Azuel Ocean | Beli :96,450,000  | | Faction : Pirate | Reputation : 15,000,000 | | Crew : Electric Lion Pirates | | Crew Position : First Mate | | Fame : 0 | | Vessel : |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Dawn Island |
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Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards MarvelousTrade thread. Changing hands again10 DP, 6,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30508481/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30517617/1/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30519011/1/#newAzuelhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11125396/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11129077/1/ http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30330516/3/ 10 DP, 7,000,000 Beli http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30423423/1/#new 7DP & 4,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30456054/1/#new 5 DP & 2,500,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#newSylarhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30388763/2/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30344540/2/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30455738/1/#newSaving the tourists http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30511214/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#new TheMostBadassHenshin
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Maple
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Nov 24 2017, 03:10 PM
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It would be a concentrated binding energy I guess? The essence of being bound by chains? I'm fine removing the ability, just wanted something to spice it up I guess
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| Stats - 1,417 | Strength: 398 (248+150) | Speed: 368 (276+92) | Stamina: 395(245+150) | Accuracy: 306 (245+61) | Fortune: 366 |
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Mr. Prince
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Nov 27 2017, 10:43 PM
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Eh, I'm meh on this. 1/2 for the hell of it
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous  |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Pressure Isle |
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Junez Laxus Caliuco  |
| Strength: 173(130+43) | Accuracy: 171 (137+34) | | Speed: 200 (150+50) | Stamina: 156(125+31) | | Fortune: 175 | Location : Pressure Isle |
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Azuel  | | Azuel phantom |
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| Name : Azuel Ocean | Beli :96,450,000  | | Faction : Pirate | Reputation : 15,000,000 | | Crew : Electric Lion Pirates | | Crew Position : First Mate | | Fame : 0 | | Vessel : |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Dawn Island |
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Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards MarvelousTrade thread. Changing hands again10 DP, 6,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30508481/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30517617/1/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30519011/1/#newAzuelhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11125396/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11129077/1/ http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30330516/3/ 10 DP, 7,000,000 Beli http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30423423/1/#new 7DP & 4,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30456054/1/#new 5 DP & 2,500,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#newSylarhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30388763/2/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30344540/2/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30455738/1/#newSaving the tourists http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30511214/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#new TheMostBadassHenshin
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Hibiko
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Nov 28 2017, 03:15 AM
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Weren't the chains of that guy in Heart of Gold strong enough to weaken people? Pretty sure it's just my mind playing games, but I wouldn't be surprised if that was the case.
Edited by Hibiko, Nov 28 2017, 03:15 AM.
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Characters Sophia D. Clover 
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| Strength : 316 (190+126) | Accuracy : 75 | | Speed : 75 | Stamina : 276 (166+110) | | Fortune : 185 | Stat Boosters : Godly, Indomitable |
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| Name : Leon Gatlinger | Beli : 30,700,000  | | Faction : Pirate | | Bounty : N/A | | Crew : Majin Academy | | Crew Position : N/A | | Fame : Level 0 | | Vessel : Starter Ship |
| Strength : 12 | Accuracy : 38 | | Speed : 30 | Stamina : 16 | | Fortune : 24 | Stat Boosters : N/A[/center] |
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Maple
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Nov 28 2017, 04:13 AM
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Yeah I wanted it to be like that along with the chains I saw in black clover that weakened those bound in them.
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| Stats - 1,417 | Strength: 398 (248+150) | Speed: 368 (276+92) | Stamina: 395(245+150) | Accuracy: 306 (245+61) | Fortune: 366 |
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Dec 2 2017, 04:35 AM
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they do in fact not canonically drain, but do with that what you will
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Mr. Prince
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Dec 29 2017, 01:54 PM
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Bump for the new year and i'll reiterate my 1/2
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"Whenever you bow your heads, raise them high again. For you are the Power Rangers."
Captain Marvelous  |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Pressure Isle |
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Junez Laxus Caliuco  |
| Strength: 173(130+43) | Accuracy: 171 (137+34) | | Speed: 200 (150+50) | Stamina: 156(125+31) | | Fortune: 175 | Location : Pressure Isle |
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Azuel  | | Azuel phantom |
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| Name : Azuel Ocean | Beli :96,450,000  | | Faction : Pirate | Reputation : 15,000,000 | | Crew : Electric Lion Pirates | | Crew Position : First Mate | | Fame : 0 | | Vessel : |
| Strength: 316(211+105) | Accuracy: 103 | | Speed: 256 (205+51) | Stamina: 340(204+136) | | Fortune: 253 | Location :Dawn Island |
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Sylar "Sleight" Peace •Marine rank: Ensign • DP Earned: 235• Beli: 168,350,000 • Location: RellechillUnclaimed Rewards MarvelousTrade thread. Changing hands again10 DP, 6,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30508481/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30517617/1/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30519011/1/#newAzuelhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11125396/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/11129077/1/ http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30330516/3/ 10 DP, 7,000,000 Beli http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30423423/1/#new 7DP & 4,000,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30456054/1/#new 5 DP & 2,500,000 http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#newSylarhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30388763/2/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30344540/2/http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30455738/1/#newSaving the tourists http://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30511214/1/#newhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/OnePieceNewWorld/topic/30513559/1/#new TheMostBadassHenshin
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Jan 4 2018, 09:55 PM
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2/2
This custom creation has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum.
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Spoiler: click to toggle Inoko Sadismus-The SM Queen
Inoko's NPC's Reihe Blitzang- Hellcat
Reihe's NPC's Payasso Brommista- Fang Clown Paya Yuutsu Shitsui- Child of Despair
Yuutsu's NPCs Selene Saule- Lieutenant Vira D. Bathory- Blood Countess
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