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[Accepted]Mithanil's Warlock Magic Type.; Sensory Based Magic.
Topic Started: Jan 6 2018, 02:23 AM (87 Views)
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Account Name: Mithanil

Character Name: Celandine Mithanil (Not yet approved)


Magic Name: Heavenly Spirit
Description: A Supportive type of magic, Mithanil's "Heavenly Spirit" magic is one of the mind and spirit, manifesting as a gentle silvery aura that surrounds his hands. Upon touching a person with this silvery light they are marked as a target, establishing a link to their mind and soul. With this link established Mithanil can decide to manipulate their senses in a limited fashion or else transfer sensory information between him and any target he has marked. When directly manipulating their senses Mithanil can do one of two things, amplify an existing sensation the target is currently experiencing, or else mute an existing sensation to nothing. When transferring sensory information Mithanil can choose to share sensations between him and his target/s or copy and transfer memories permanently. To mark someone as a target requires Mithanil to physically touch them while surrounding his hands in their silvery light, and Mithanil can have a number of targets equal to one target per every fifteen Fortune Mithanil possesses. When the targets are willing the duration is indefinite, but when a target is unwilling the max duration is equal to Mithanil's Fortune divided by the target's Fortune, rounding up to the nearest whole number.
Edited by Mithanil, Jan 6 2018, 08:07 AM.
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Bounty HunterBiomedical ScientistNo Ship or Crew153 (138 + 15) DP & 6 Traits
Strength - 30Speed - 45Stamina - 30 Accuracy - 48
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[c]Spirit's Vessel – Rank Variable
Type: Support
Range: Defined by Rank
Stats: N/A
[c]This technique exists to define the maximum range of all of Mithanil's Heavenly Spirit techniques and has no other use besides this.


[c]Amplify Sensation – Rank 12
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
[c]Once Mithanil has established a connection to the target he can cause some sensation they are currently experiencing to become much more intense. A gentle breeze can feel like a gale, a papercut can feel like a sword slash, and a comforting hug can feel like bliss. At this level the effect is not strong enough to hinder or help a target, merely cause them to feel more intensely, making it no more than a parlor trick.

[c]Mute Sensation – Rank 12
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: -2 Accuracy
[c]Once Mithanil has established a connection to the target he can cause some sensation they are currently experiencing to become muted and diminished. A burn can be numbed to a dull ache, bright light dimmed to a comfortable level, and loud music deafened to quiet background noise. At this level the effect is not very strong at all, but the reduction in sensation distracts the target's mind, reducing their Accuracy very slightly.

[c]Blackout – Rank 80+ (an Extended Branch from Mute Sensation)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: -70 Accuracy
[c]Mithanil causes an established target to completely lose all visual sensation, resulting in a temporary total blindness so long as Mithanil continues to will it. This sensory deprivation severely distracts and confuses the target, resulting in a heavy reduction in Accuracy as they stumble blindly.

[c]Personal Hell – Rank 80+ (an Extended Branch from Amplify Sensation)
Type: Offensive
Range: N/A
Stats: -70 Accuracy
[c]Mithanil causes an established target to have all of its senses amplified far beyond what it is capable of comprehending or tolerating. The sound of their own heartbeat is like cannons being fired directly next to them, a candle's flame is like staring into a thousand suns, normal air pressure is like a mountain crushing against them. The severe sensory overload is incredibly painful, potentially causing the target mental damage as they fight to remain sane. A target of this technique can choose to immediately fall unconscious to prevent mental damage.

[c]Share Memory – Rank 50
Type: Support
Range:Melee
Stats: N/A
[c]Directly touching a target's head (or wherever the target's brain is located) Mithanil focuses and strengthens the connection between him and the target, peeking into their mind so deeply as to reach their memories. By doing this Mithanil can extract information from the target forcibly if need be. An Unwilling PC has the option to OOCly deny this technique's effect, but NPCs do not.

[c]Share Sensation - Alpha – Rank 20
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: +10 Accuracy
[c]After establishing a connection with one or more targets Mithanil causes their senses to be shared, choosing which targets receive sensory information and which targets transmit, with each target potentially doing one or both or none of the above. Sensory information is not pure and it is somewhat affected by the transmitting target's or targets' personal opinion on the sensation. A masochist being tortured may transmit pleasure through this technique, while someone who dislikes the taste of chocolate would transmit revulsion when eating a chocolate bar. The sensory data is transmitted in such a way that it is seamlessly taken in by all receiving targets, increasing their accuracy slightly.
Edited by Mithanil, Jan 6 2018, 08:08 AM.
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Bounty HunterBiomedical ScientistNo Ship or Crew153 (138 + 15) DP & 6 Traits
Strength - 30Speed - 45Stamina - 30 Accuracy - 48
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Well... That's the exact problem about your magic style, Mith: this gives you way too much power. There are absolutely no limits to your magic style, no counters other than preventing you from writing on anything and no actual weaknesses other than the fact that you need to focus on your writing, which can be easily dealt with if you have a character build who is solely based on Speed and Accuracy to dodge every attack sent towards you all while writing properly.

The thing with an ability is that it has to have a limit to it. Compared to the other magic styles we currently have, this is downright insane. It is simply too versatile.

Edited by Hibiko, Jan 6 2018, 04:43 AM.

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Would perhaps a limitation of range be suitable? Melee range for the initial placement? Perhaps full concentration required so he's defenseless while writing?
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No. None of these solutions actually fix the problem that this magic style presents, which is ultimate versatility.

The reason why we had to nerf Witches was because they were too versatile in the sense that they could just use a bunch of different magic styles all at once without any limitations whatsoever safe for a Catalyst. They were the subject of a massive discussion and it was concluded that a new system was needed for them entirely. So, now, they have to pay additional magic styles with Trait points.

This magic style just encompasses the limitations we have set on Witches, mainly because you can get every single magic style that there is with this one only. You can create any elemental effect you want and more with written words only. That literally is stronger than any Devil Fruit that we currently have at the moment because it gives you more abilities than a Myth Zoan.

I am sorry, but unless you find something that completely limits its current ultimate versatility, this will not get an approval from me.

Edited by Hibiko, Jan 6 2018, 05:22 AM.

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Severely modified the Magic to be more limited, taking it in a completely new direction from before.
Edited by Mithanil, Jan 6 2018, 08:08 AM.
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This seems approvable to me now as you have limited it to an effectiveness of a sensory type DF.
Still gonna give it a bit more thought first before i give it my 1/2 in case there's something i'm overlooking
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Ok, this seems much more approvable than the Scriptures style you had shown me yesterday. I do think that some of the effects techniques such as Blackout or Personal Hell may be too powerful for their rank, given that it may completely overpower certain chars, but given it's more or less just an Accuracy debuff and also countered by Cyborgs / Automatas / Bio-Mods, I don't mind it as much as some of the previous techniques you have shown.

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This custom creation has been accepted and will be relocated to its proper sub-forum.
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