| Tyler Distance; FINISH! | |
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| Tyler | Sep 14 2012, 09:55 AM Post #1 |
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Please bold your selections so we can get a better feel for your character What is your goal in life 1. To become the Pokemon champion How will you attain this goal? 3. By loving all Pokemon,big,and small so that our bond is unbreakable You come across a Pokemon no one has ever seen before,do you 3.Offer it some food and attempt to communicate with it After you have succeeded your goal,what will you do with the rest of your life? 1.Continue to train,there's always a new challenge ahead. Name:Tyler Nickname:Ty Preftered type:Fighting,Water,Fire Job:Trainer Team: Riolu Moves Thunderpunch Force Palm Low Kick Bullet punch Description: Tyler has white ruffled hair just like a bed head,his eyes Deep blood like color,he usually wears a white T-shirt,wearing a Black jacket,wearing Jeans,he is the same height as Tamaki Sempei in Ouran host club(I use to watch it,don't judge what I watch judge the app.),and wears Blue converse shoes. Personality:Tyler is Mostly a silent type,he usually talks to Pokemon,and somehow understands them,he can be easily angered,so he only talks if you get him angry,ask what's his name,or asking a question.He sometimes act all wise and stuff even though he's 18.Tyler can be secretive,so if you want him to spill the beans,its gonna be difficult.Even if you want to know where's his secret hideout,where he can be talkitive. Biography:Before Tyler was a silent guy,he was energetic and talkative when he was young,he always asked his workaholic parents for a Pokemon as a buddy,but they always say "Tyler not now,Tyler I am working,Tyler I'm working,Tyler blah blah",he also asked his brother for one,but one day while a his brother,Visilios,was training,his Hito top accedently crashed onto Tyler,making him fall down,unconscious.Visilios looked at Tyler with horror,Tyler was in coma for a few years until he was 19.thats along time.Tyler lost some of his memories,like talking!Well he remember some words,like yes,no,my name is Tyler,how dare you,shut up,etc.Ok he forgot some words,he just forgot he was energetic and talkative.His brother,and his parents were really glad he was alive,Visilios,the gave him a Pokemon egg.Tyler left the hospital the next day,he then wanted to travel all over Kyoto.His family told him not to go because he might get into trouble with the miracle makers,but Tyler insisted,after the goodbyes,Tyler left home with the egg. While in a forest,the egg started glowing,it was hatching,Tyler looked at the hatching egg aastonished.Then, the egg revealed a male Riolu,The riolu smiled,Tyler smiled back at it,he welcomed it with berries he had in his backpack.Tyler befriended it,cared for it,and trained it,he noticed that his riolu always made a thumbs up when he's ready to fight or something.He always talked to him,and let him out of his pokeball. RP Sample: Tyler was walking in the forest with his Riolu beside him,they didn't know there was danger ahead.Fearows were perching on the tree branches,staring menacingly at the 2.Riolu looked both ways at the trees,being cautious,he stopped walking.And got into a fighting stance,Tyler noticed this and turned to his Pokemon."What's wrong Riolu?"Tyler asked,Riolu barked in cautious like."FEAROW!"the Fearows screamed in anger,they swooped down at Tyler,then Riolu usedThunder punch between Tyler and the Fearow,it paralyzed one of the Fearows,but that made the Fearows angrier,Tyler grabbed Riolu.Held him close to him,to protect him from the harm the fearows,he ran while the Fearow chased after them,scratching Tyler,pecking him,using aerial slash,Tyler and the Riolu made it out of the forest,the fearows stopped attacking,Tyler was exhausted,and was bleeding from the damage the hostile bird Pokemon did.Riolu made a.small bark noise in a questionable tone,asking if he is ok. "I'm....fine....Rio...lu.."Tyler then fell down,and passed out.Riolu had tears in his eyes,seeing his trainer like this,Tyler's cheek Scratched,the arm of the jacket torn,showing bleeding scratch marks.Riolu was scared,what if Tyler dies?Riolu wept,barking in sadness,laying down next to the young adult... Edited by Tyler, Sep 17 2012, 09:05 AM.
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| Raven | Sep 17 2012, 06:16 PM Post #2 |
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Okay, Tyler, your app is very hard to read. Is there someway you could clean it up or make things a little easier to read? Also I know you're on your phone, but just remember to proof read anything you are about to post. You're app is acceptable, but just in the future please keep these things in mind and try to clean up your app when you put it in the Character Books section. Also, don't be afraid to add more to your personality/description.
Edited by Raven, Sep 17 2012, 06:17 PM.
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