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W.I.P Visilios
Topic Started: Sep 18 2012, 06:29 PM (225 Views)
Visilios

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What is your goal in life?

1. To become the Pokemon Champion

2. To find and catalog every Pokemon in the world

3. To be the most successful Breeder in history

4. To rule the world

How will you attain this goal?

1. By working hard and training everyday

2. By making friends so that me and my Pokemon grow stronger through teamwork

3. By loving all Pokemon, big and small so that our bond is unbreakable

4. By cutting everyone else down so that I'm the only one left standing

5. By traveling and exploring every mountain, cave, river, ocean and beyond

You come across a Pokemon that no one has ever seen before. Do you...

1. Catch it!

2. Observe it in its natural habitat

3. Offer it food and attempt to communicate with it

4. Fight it so that my Pokemon will become stronger

After you have succeeded in your goal, what will you do with the rest of your life?

1. Continue to train, there's always a new challenge ahead

2. My goal would never be attained within my life time

3. Help prepare the next generation for the future

4. Do everything in my power to ensure that I stay on top

Name:Visilios

Nickname: The crusher

Preferred Type:Fighting

Age:24

Job: Pokemon fighting type gym leader,and Tyler's brother

Team: (the pokemon they have/use)

Hitmontop

Gender: Male
Moves
Triple kicks-Fight-10
Rapid spin-Normal-40
Gyro Ball-Steel-5
Close Combat-Fight-5




Lucario

http://i637.photobucket.com/albums/uu97/rayqazer/_lucario.jpg
Gender:Female
Moves
Aura sphere-20
Protect-Normal-10
Metal Claw-Steel-35
Close Combat-Fight-5

Sawk
http://i1125.photobucket.com/albums/l589/TheVulgarity/GP/Sawk_NB_variocolor.gif
Gender:Male
Moves
Close combat-Fight-5
Karate chop-Fight-25
Earthquake-ground-10
Reversal-fight-15



Machamp

gender:Male
moves
Dynamic throw-Fight-5
Cross chop-fight-5
low kick-fight-20
Karate chop-fight-25


Throh

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d191/adods/PokemonSprite/538.gif
Gender:Male
Moves
Ice punch-Ice-15
Fire punch-Fire-15
Storm throw-Fight-10
Stone edge-Rock-5
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Mienshao

Gender:Female
http://i592.photobucket.com/albums/tt4/GOAfox9/Pokemon%20Spirits/Mienshao.gif
moves
Aura sphere-Fight-20
Drain punch-Fight-10
High-jump kick-Fight-10
Dig-ground-10
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Description: (picture can be substituted for text)
http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s370/Azra-234/anime-boy-47130012930.png
Visilios hair is actually snowball white,eyes,crimson red,and has a Black bandana wrapped around his neck. [/spoiler]

Personality
Tyler is a competitive,jealous kind of guy,never afraid to speak out his mind when he is angry,he is also easily angru,so people think he has anger issues,but he isn't angry when he loses in a battle,but when the miracle manera defeated his pokemon,he almost lost it,he tried to to punch the leader,but the other trainers has to pull him away and calm him down.SO warning:never get Crusher angry.He can be a taunter sometimes,taunting others to battle or just taunting,he can be soft sometimes,well only to his Little brother,his pokemon,and some people.I am bit saying yes mean to everyone,he just treats some people as aquatainces,or as friends.His pet peeves is being pranked,that leads to Angry Crusher,and his 2nd pet peeve is having his Pokemon made fun of.If someone he cares about is In danger,he risk his life to save them,even if he has to die.
Biography:
Visilios was 10 years old when his parents gave him his very first fighting type Pokemon,a Tyrogue.He always played with it,and train with it,until he was 17 years old,just becoming a gym leader,his Tyrogue evolved into a Hitmontop,Visilios was so pumped that his Pokemon evolved,that something terrible happened,while Training,his hitmontop lost control of triple kick,and hit his little brother,and got him unconscious.Visilios was horrified,He picked up his younger brother and ran to a nearest hospital,where a Bouffalant charged at him,the Bouffalant was too close when Visilios could get his hitmontop and his 4 other Pokemon.Until a blue and black like dog came,and used Aura sphere at it,making it fall.The Pokemon turned around,looking at Visilios,which he realized its a lucario.Thanking it,He got up and continued to rush at the hospital,realizing the lucario is fallowing him.
He ignored it,and finally got to the hospital.While he called his parents,his brother was in th ER,the female Lucario,looking at a Blaziken with its trainer.Visilios was done with his phone call,he then noticed the lucario still here,he asked it of she wanted to be part of his team,she nodded,using a pokeball,capturing the lucario.Its not everyday a lucario saved a trainer from a bouffalant.7 years later,a friend of visilios who has a blaziken came to visit Visilios,they were talking until their Pokemon walked in,lucario was carrying an egg,the blaziken smiling.The 2 humans were wide eyed,and looked at each other,then the Pokemon,each other,Pokemon.The trainer left,a few hours later,the miracle makers came,and defeated the angry visilios.They took over his gym,visilios and the trainers retreated with their Pokemon.

RP Sample: (Show us how you plan to RP your character)
"Beedrill use pin missil!" The wasp like Pokemon obeyed its trainer,and shooted pin missile at the lucario."Dodge it!"Commanded Visilios.
But the lucario was too tired,and was slow,the pin missiles hit her a few times.She panted,looking at the also tired beedrill,everyone looked at the Pokemon,wondering who will win.Will it be Visolios?Or the trainer?Then suddenly,Lucario fell in exhaustion.Everyone cheered in excitement "Lucario is unable to battle,the victory goes to Beedrill!" the referee announced,the trainer whooped happily,Visilios sighed,and smiled."Awesome job lucario,take the Time off." Visilios returned his Pokemon to its pokeball,he walked over to the trainer and gave her the gym badge,congratulating her.When everyone left,even the trainer.
Visilios exit out the gym,making sure it's locked,he went for a stroll around the town,the dark blue sky shining beautifly with its stars and moon,the noctowls hooting in harmony,the wind swaying the trees back and forth,it was paradise to visilios,but what stuck in his mind was his brother in the hospital,still in a coma,he sighed and hoped Tyler will wake up from his deep sleep.it was amazing that he was still alive since its been almost 6 years.Visilios then started to walk to the inn where he sleeps.
Edited by Visilios, Sep 22 2012, 10:10 PM.
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Alex
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I'm sorry but your app has been denied, but here is why.

Your Personality needs a little bit more body to it, try adding things that aren't positive about Visilios like what are his pet peeves or weaknesses etc.? Your RP Sample is pretty small as well, two paragraphs maybe even 3 would be the minimum for a legitimate RP Sample.

You have as much time as you want to work on your app, take your time.
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~Approved~ just passable.

Be sure to post your character app in the Character Books section, have fun RPing!
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