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| X[A]Cody ParkerX; [Reaped][Accepted] | |||||||||
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17 Sep 2014, 05:57 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Trainer Profile Character Name: Cody Parker Nickname: Ursaring Gender: Male Age: 23 Trainer Class: Breeder Height: 5'8 Weight: 220lbs Hair Color & Style: Cody keeps his head shaved, but it is sandy blonde in color when he grows it out. Eyes: His eyes are cobalt blue. Clothing/Accessories: Cody is all about comfort when he travels, preferring loose, even slightly baggy, cargo pants, usually purple in color, a light v-neck shirt, and a purple pull over hoodie. More often than not he is bare footed, but when he does wear his shoes, they are always black combat boots. General Appearance: Cody is a naturally large guy, born with broad shoulders, and big arms. While he is, as he calls it, average size for his height, he is honestly shorter than most his age. He has long fingers with square palms, and wide, hairy feet. He is slightly on the chubby side, but with his broad stature, it is hard to tell at first glance. Hometown: Scurarte Town Personality: Cody tries to be laid back most, if not all of the time, and is even passive when it comes to fighting, until someone hurts those he cares about. While he does not show it very often, Cody has a very short temper, much more so when he sees someone hurting Pokemon, believing it to be the worst of all crimes. He hates causing Pokemon pain, and tries to catch Pokemon in ways that prevents him from having to harm them. However, when it comes to battling other trainers, he tries to knock their Pokemon out as quickly as possible. Cody is, much like his nickname, a giant teddy bear. He loves Pokemon, and loves taking care of them. Planning to be a breeder like his parents, Cody has studied for many years on how to take care of all different kinds of Pokemon. However, he is gentle towards people as well, and tries his best to keep his temper under control at all times. When it comes to women, Cody is usually bashful at first, until he gets to know them, then he is a a fun loving idiot. Cody is pretty neutral about most things, believing that its not his job to fix other people's problems, if he doesn't know them personally. This. however, only goes so far. Cody will not stand by and watch a man harm a woman in any way, shape, or form, nor will he allow them to hurt children. Another thing that really irks Cody in the extreme are when people do not take responsibility for their actions, to the point where he will simply walk away from them, and never speak to them again. History: History Inventory Dians: 7Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 5 Ooh Shiny!: 1/30 Nursing:1/15 Making Friends: 3/15 Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 3
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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18 Sep 2014, 01:45 PM Post #2 | ||||||||
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Alright, not bad, just need to clarify a few things. Firstly, you should expand on his history to include social events in his life, who his friends were and stuff they did together. Also, with the way you wrote his family, the laid-back part of his personality clashes with the strong power obsessed. Anyone coming out of that family would be high strung unless they were openly defying them. Try to write his personality to be a little more plausible. Edit: Also, your starter is not shiny Edited by Mr. Johnapillar, 18 Sep 2014, 02:01 PM.
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18 Sep 2014, 03:40 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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Done and done | ||||||||
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20 Sep 2014, 05:27 AM Post #4 | ||||||||
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I still feel like the personality is a little off. I feel like you need to include specific examples within your history that show when his ruthless side comes out, like perhaps one instance in his childhood that really stands out and will help explain how he developed into the person he is today. | ||||||||
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22 Sep 2014, 06:38 AM Post #5 | ||||||||
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Done. Edited by GenGara, 22 Sep 2014, 02:55 PM.
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22 Sep 2014, 05:25 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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Gen VI pokemon have only existed in Godai for about 6 months. You'll need to fix these events in your history. This is noted on the Starter List. | ||||||||
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22 Sep 2014, 07:03 PM Post #7 | ||||||||
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Fixed. | ||||||||
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23 Sep 2014, 01:44 AM Post #8 | ||||||||
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Approval 1/2 | ||||||||
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23 Sep 2014, 11:47 AM Post #9 | ||||||||
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Nice work dude, thanks for the patience. 2/2 Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp. This topic is now closed without further ado. |
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4 Sep 2015, 03:11 AM Post #10 | ||||||||
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Blerrraaaugh -fire-
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Your character has officially been put up for Reaping. If you wish to make use of their belongings for another character, please submit a modification. If not, please post in the GTN so that others may make use of the character. | ||||||||
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