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20 Sep 2014, 03:53 AM Post #1 | ||||
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Trainer Profile Character Name: Anais Aria Gender: Female Age: 17 Trainer Class: Medium Height: 5' 2" Weight: 120 lbs Hair Color & Style: Anais has shoulder length, straight, brown hair. She usually styles some or all of it up; ponytails, braids and buns being her favorite. She always leaves two chunks of hair closest to her face (side bangs) free for framing. Eyes: Her eyes are light brown, eyebrows are small and sharp and she has long, thin eyelashes. Clothing/Accessories: Usual Anais wears a yellow, zip up jacket with no hood. It reaches her hips and has several inner and outer pockets. Her Shuppet's Pokeball is kept in an inner pocket by her left hip. If the weather is particularly hot she ties her jacket around her waist or stores it rolled up in her bag (Pokeball moved to her bag). She wears tank tops or quarter sleeve shirts, depending on the temperature, in gray or a washed out blue or purple. She occasionally wears patterns in stripes or polka dots. Her shorts are cloth and either black or maroon. She wears gray socks and black walking shoes with pink laces. Winter Her jacket is exchanged for a waterproof version with wool lining. It features a hood with fake, brown fur trim and she wears a navy scarf tucked up neatly into the coat. She wears a long sleeved black shirt. Her pants are cozy, black sweatpants or thin snow pants tucked into brown hiking boots. Hidden under her boots are a pair of pink Buneary patterned thermal socks. She owns two pairs of gloves, a simple knitted pair for common wear and thicker, waterproof ones both black. Accessories Her bag is navy with a white Pokeball motif on the front with the “button” a clasp to open the main flap where most of her personal items are stored. Its on the large side with a single adjustable strap, usually worn on one shoulder and hangs across the body. Pokemon specific items are kept in zipped up side pockets or inner pockets depending on their purpose and fragility. She wears a string of chunky green beads on her left wrist. She keeps a pale blue sunhat in her bag and a pair of thick, tan work gloves. General Appearance: Anais is a small, unobtrusive girl who keeps to herself and always manages to look tired and uninterested. Her skin is pale, she has thin lips and her nose is small and turned up slightly. Her posture is closed off as she sits and stands with her shoulders hunched up slightly and keeps her limbs close to her body. Her expressions are as minuet as possible but changes in her brow and mouth betray her mood. Look Inspiration Hometown: Oraclair Town, North Godai Personality: Anais is a compassionate person behind her stoic demeanor. Unable to let a person or Pokemon in need go unaided if her powers could help them, no matter how much she might want to stay uninvolved. She struggles with low self-esteem and severe jealousy over the success of others which can make it difficult to interact with new people. She fears she will never measure up and be perceived as "useless" or "unnecessary" in comparison with her own qualities meaning nothing in the face of it. These thoughts are most often simply her own anxieties projected onto another person. While she is aware of this behavior and has made changes to combat it she still can have trouble recognizing when she is doing it. Anais can also be judgmental and is fairly blunt about her opinions, but quickly changes her mind when proven wrong. While perfectly willing to admit a mistake, she will rarely apologize for it and has difficulty showing gratitude. Anais is organized and needs to plan her actions carefully to feel comfortable. She has a hard time dealing with sudden changes or unexpected situations. She keeps a detailed record of her supplies, daily goals and future events in her journal, along with quotes from her favorite poems and a few pressed flowers. Anais has always felt a natural affinity for Ghosts. She is uncharacteristically vocal about their protection and will not stand for their mistreatment. In her mind, her precious Ghosts can do no wrong and she would never blame them or believe a negative word about them, even if they were truly at fault. While not particularly religious, Anais practices meditation for the benefit of her powers and is Poke-Vegan. Anais had no issues cutting Pokemon products from her diet, though her family still partakes on occasion. She much prefers regular fruits, vegetables and grains particularly apples. Due to her exposure to scenes of violence at a young age through her powers, Anais is not bothered by gore or other unpleasant imagery. However she is also familiar with the painful emotions associated with violent acts, which do bother her a great deal. She would never attempt to harm someone outside self defense to avoid causing those feelings where ever possible. She deeply frowns on using violence as a display of strength for these reasons, though she also finds it unnecessary and shallow. She has some internal conflict about Pokemon battles between Trainers and how they fit into this mindset. Powers History Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0 Tier 0: Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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31 May 2015, 12:06 AM Post #2 | ||||
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Ok I need to stop fiddling with this so here she is! I wasn't sure on how to describe a medium's powers so if I've got it wrong I'll be happy to change it along with anything else that looks off! | ||||
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31 May 2015, 03:39 PM Post #3 | ||||
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Welcome back Patch! I finally get to see your character and oh my is she just darling! I’m sure you want to get accepted ASAP so let’s begin - Because I’m not too confident about how the Medium Powers work here I’ll leave that up to the other mods, but I can definitely check out the rest of the application! I know this is a bit nitpicky, but for her ”Hometown” please put “Oraclair Town” instead just “Oraclair”. Ana’s ”Personality” is simply lovely, but I feel you can definitely expand more on a psychological basis for her! For example, in what ways is she a compassionate person? Why? Always ask yourself why for her traits. Why does she fear being forgotten? Is it because she wants to make an impact on others, or she questions her own existence? Does it have to do with her powers and so on? Iunno! Not my character! Why does she obtain this severe since of jealousy for others? Is it because she feels she can do better? Or simply because she doesn’t want anyone else to be better than her? Etc. Why does she frown on the violence in terms of strengths? Can she practically feel that pain? Or she simply does not feel it is fair for others? Etc. As for her “Likes and Dislikes” unfortunately there are no bullet points allowed unless there is a reason or paragraph to accompany it. So this is a perfect time for you to expand on those points! Don’t be afraid to dish out the details! The same applies for Ana’s ”History” this is excellent but I feel a few areas can be elaborated by a sentence or two. For example how was her relationship with her parents then? Did anyone try to speak to her despite her self isolation? How about her relationship with her sister despite the one sided jealousy? In what ways did she rebel? How did she feel through all this besides jealousy? How’d she do in school? I loved how you expressed it where you described why Pup was interested in her, but how did the anger and hopelessness take place? I an assume it, but it’s not my character! What other events on Ana’s own that led her to obtain this emotional growth in this direction? Anything else? If not, why and how? That’s it for the written portion! I know it looks like a lot but honestly for Ana’s ”History” it just needs a few more to tie it together. These are just guidelines and you don’t literally have to answer them all! Then, for your ”Pokedex”, there is just one error and it’s the ”Moveset”. Basically the number corresponding to the move, means at what level it’s learned. So for example, if Pikachu learned Quick Attack at level 13, it would be “13. Quick Attack” even if it’s the 8th move he’s learned. Go ahead and check out the Pokedex to whichever Shuppet falls into (for the Generation) to see when he learns each move! Please post a reply whenever any changes have been made! I look forward to seeing your edits. You got this! Good luck! ♥ |
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31 May 2015, 07:16 PM Post #4 | ||||
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Thanks Bones! I made some adjustments and actually rewrote the history (again) addressing the things you mentioned. I wasn't completely satisfied with it the first time anyway so I hope this is a bit better. I added some more information into the Personality section and edited those errors you spotted. I'm a pretty amateur writer so I hope I managed to apply your advice well! | ||||
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31 May 2015, 10:01 PM Post #5 | ||||
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Pfft don't even worry about it; hell I can say you seem to be a much better writer than me anyways! Anyways love these changes! Personally I would add a bit more to the "Personality" but in the end I'm satisfied with the "History" by itself! Regardless - Great job, 1/2 Approval. ♥ PS - Can the second mod please look over the powers to check it once more and to confirm that it is as it should be! |
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1 Jun 2015, 12:17 AM Post #6 | ||||
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The powers are fine, just don't forget that you will need to start off 'weak' and have the powers grow, just as a Pokemon would. Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp. This topic is now closed without further ado. |
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