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Aaron King
Topic Started: 11 May 2015, 12:14 AM (178 Views)
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Character Name: Aaron King
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Trainer Class: Rich Boy

Height: 5'8
Weight: 146 lbs
Hair Color & Style: Aaron's hair is dyed purple, naturally jet-black. His hair is straight, and cut short, ending at the nape of his neck. He has prominent bangs, sweeping over his forehead. His hair usually has a messy, almost slightly shaggy appearance to it.
Eyes: Aaron has deep-set, almond-shaped eyes. They're naturally a forest green, however, due to personal aesthetics he has chosen to wear purple contacts. His eyebrows are rather thick, and usually furrowed in frustration. I'll be posting a close up of his face later on because I'm really bad at describing placement/size. He also has bags under his eyes, due to insomnia.
Clothing/Accessories:
Aaron is dressed casually compared to most of his social status, yet fancily compared to the average individual. He wears a gray dress shirt, usually completely buttoned up save for the top button. Over it he wears a purple sweater vest with a gold crown stitched onto it. He wears black jeans secured with a belt with a silver buckle, black leather gloves, and purple canvas sneakers.
General Appearance:
Aaron is average height for a male, and although he's on the lower end, he's definitely a healthy weight for his height. He's pale in complexion, and very lean in terms of muscular build.
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a big thanks to kiwi @ shslqxantity on tumblr for drawing the thing.
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this one was drawn by me and gives a better impression of his outfit

Hometown: Shiroshore City, South Godai
Personality:
To put it simply, Aaron is a jerk. To put it more complexly, he's a selfish jerk who puts himself first a great deal of the time. He's quick to judge and is very blunt in his speech. Surprisingly, despite his upbringing, he doesn't have a "holier-than-thou" attitude. He's just a jerk. Despite this, he has a soft-spot for Pokemon, due to his closest childhood companion being a Lillipup, and as such, treats his Pokemon rather well.
History:
Aaron was born to a wealthy family who's most notable for running a successful chain of restaurants around Godai. He's the middle child of three, and as such, was always sort of overlooked. His older brother, Ethan, and his mother are the only ones in his immediate family with any sort of significant positive relationships with him. Also worth noting is that they have a pet Lillipup who was Aaron's best friend for the longest time. As a result of this, Aaron has kind of isolated himself from most of his family, and everyone else.
The King family, like quite a few wealthy families, however, have a few internal problems. His parents' relationship has been on the rocks since the birth of Cassidy King, the youngest child, only girl and "daddy's little princess". His father's involved in a same-sex affair with the family's cook, and his mother is too busy trying to keep Aaron from drifting away from them entirely to notice.
Around the time Aaron was 15, he started altering his appearance so he wouldn't be recognized when away from his family. Also around this time was when him and Ethan really started getting close, considering how they were both being ignored in favor of his dad.
Regarding Aaron's school life, there's not much of note there. He went to public school after he insisted on it, keeping to himself and not talking to, well, anyone. He didn't want to.
Now, onto how Aaron became a trainer. He'd always had a bit of a fascination with Pokemon, probably due to the fact that his closest friend growing up was one. For some reason, he found himself growing ridiculously attached to these creatures. Remember how I mentioned him and his brother were on surprisingly good terms? For his sixteenth birthday, Ethan gave him a Pokemon. A Poochyena to be exact. At that point, Aaron realized that, hey. He could go on a journey with his Pokemon. He could finally be left alone by the people he loathed. So, he secretly took the training class, got himself licensed, and prepared to begin his new life with his Pokemon. And by that, I mean he ran away to become a Pokemon Trainer.
Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:
- Title: (#/#)
Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Poochyena
Caught at Level 5

Gender: Male
Type: Dark
Ability: Quick Feet
Height: 1'8
Weight: 30 lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium Fast
EXP Gauge: (#/#)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D10
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 17 (30%)
  • Defense: 12
  • Sp. Attack: 7(%)
  • Sp. Defense: 7(%)
  • Speed: 12

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Tackle
4. Howl
Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Alrighty Gene! I’m sure you want to get accepted as soon as possible so let’s get started -

First off this is a wonderful attempt on your application here! Just a few changes and I believe you’re good to go!

For his ”Clothing [...]” this is good, however add a sentence or two about what type of clothing or what he would wear during hot and cold weather.

Then for his ”General Appearance” I feel you can add in just a bit more to it. For example, does he have any other distinguishing parts about him such as how he walks, or if he slouches and so on? How about how other people see him based on first impressions as he is one to be rather pale?

But let’s focus more on his Personality and History.

Unfortunately, we have a minimum word count for his ”Personality” and ”History” and that can be found at the example application provided in the ”Character Application Template”.

However, if I may suggest a few things to assist you in stretching it out some more. Constantly ask yourself “why” and “how” as you expand on both sections. In what ways is he a jerk? “Jerk” has a various amount of definitions so what are examples of this? What are his morals and beliefs and why does he see Pokemon different than other human beings that have a stronger conscious and ability to do more things than the average Pokemon. What makes him so special to see himself that way and to put himself up that high? What are his strength and weaknesses? So on and so forth.

The same applies to his ”History”. There’s very little to go on. Think on a deeper level and always remember that the History is there to compliment Aaron’s ”Personality” and what events, obstacles, experiences shaped him to be this person today. Not only that but what other things happened in that huge age gap? Just because he was a middle child - did he not fight for attention? Why or why not? Why didn’t the parents try and see more of their middle child, were they even aware of Aaron compred to Ethan - why and how? What happened from the years of his childhood to age 15? Try and write in a more professional format and less nonchalant as if you’re telling a friend. Imagine writing a resume of some sort and explaining a person to another professional. How did he do in school? What was so mediocre about it? What about other friends? Why is it “probably” due to growing up with one? This is your character, you should know more about him! Don’t leave it up to assumptions and don’t at all be afraid to really flush out the details and descriptions. Unfortunately because Aaron’s ”Personality” is lacking, it’s only natural for his ”History” to follow suit. But that’s okay! Once you add more to the former, you’ll definitely add onto the latter!

We’ll stop here and focus on the ”Pokedex” another day. Once any edits have been made please post a reply and we’ll check it out asap! Good luck! ♥
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