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17 May 2015, 10:30 AM Post #1 | ||||
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Trainer Profile Character Name: Kaede Fletcher Nickname: She is often simply referred to as 'Fletcher'. Room for future nicknames if they ever arise. Gender: Female Age: 19 years of age. Trainer Class: Guitarist Height: Somewhere around 5'7. Weight: 124lbs Hair Color & Style: Long, very blonde hair with darker roots, dyed a bit to enhance the colour. It reaches her waist almost, and curls at the ends. Eyes: A pale blue hue, and not too big or small. The constant eye makeup that she has on generally gives the illusion that her eyes are bigger than they really are. Clothing/Accessories: Clothes-wise, Kaede is one for ripped or stressed jeans, combat boots and leather, more often than not. It just so happens to be her style, and one she probably won't sway from too easily. Accessories is another big thing with this blonde, especially more than one necklace at once. General Appearance: Kaede has blonde, almost lowerback length hair, and eyes that are a pale blue hue. Most often lined with dark eye makeup. Her height is average enough at about 5'7, albeit a little on the taller side. She's got a pale complexion and a slender build. Kaede has a pretty good posture, and her walk is straight and confident. Most of her expressions derive from her eyes and the corners of her mouth. If you've done something wrong around Kaede, you'll know it. Her stony, eye-narrowing glare can be quite terrifying. When Kaede isn't feeling so positive, the corners of her lips will quirk into a bit of a frown. If riled up even further, one small area of her top lip, just beneath the nostril may end up being lifted into a slight replica of a snarl. ![]() Hometown: Sternhall City, West Godai Personality: Pretty much your typical rival personality from the pokémon games, A.K.A, hugely ego-ed characters that think they're great and end up being proven wrong later on by a failure, & maturing a bit afterwards. Kaede isn't exactly introverted, but she hasn't really made any proper friends before. Emphasis put on the word 'proper'. The blonde ended up mingling in with people who in the long run influenced her behaviour as a teenager. Kaede has no problem speaking out. If there's an opinion or statement made that she doesn't like, she will make it known. Naturally enough with her kind of prickly and moody personality, the blonde doesn't ever really bode well with overly cheerful people. Mainly it's their urge to talk all the time that can result in her getting a bit snappy. Even with all of these negative traits; moodiness, mild aggression, there are a few positive traits, such as Kaede's underlying cheekiness and playfulness. The guitarist has also got a bit of a protective streak, mainly for her pokémon. Since she is more of an introvert, her other traits aren't revealed to easily. She enjoys peace and quiet, and surprisingly enough doesn't really enjoy being the center of attention for long periods of time. Awfully chatty people get on this blonde's nerves, unless of course they're both speaking about a mutual interest. Music is a passion of Kaede's, and playing her guitar lets her release some of that anger she develops while holding back on the urge to punch someone. Don't take it that she is always a very angry sort of person, most of the time actually, this trainer is pretty calm. History: Kaede had a good childhood which she enjoyed for the most part, but as she grew she began to feel that her parents were a little overbearing. Being an only child, they were very protective of her, perhaps a bit over-protective. She didn't end up associating with the best of groups as a kid, and in school as a teen during her teenage years. The rougher kids were the ones she hung around with most, and therefore they influenced her behaviour. She ended up getting herself into all kinds of trouble in her hometown, ranging from non-stop pranks on the townsfolk to even thievery and vandalism. Kaede decided she wanted to learn to play the guitar for the first time when she was introduced to heavier music by accidentally flicking the radio to another channel. The sounds captured her attention right away, and she found herself always listening to rock from then on. It wasn't hard to persuade her parents to buy her an instrument; they thought it would calm her down somewhat. Stunky was her first pokémon, and one that she never officially captured in a pokéball until a later stage. Still, they were close companions and nearly inseparable. They met each other on the streets one night, when Kaede and her friends were kicking a neighbour's trashcan over. They didn't realise a pokémon had been rummaging around inside. Stunky was annoyed by the commotion first, until brashly approached by the blonde who had come over and tried to pet her. The pokémon didn't warm up immediately, but hung around the area. Kaede began leaving food out for her daily, and from then on they had started to bond. The dual-type seems to have acquired an almost mirroring personality to her trainer; mischievous and proud. With the way Stunky carries herself, anyone can see that the pokémon is pretty up her own ass. Kaede often refers to her pokémon as Stinker, a nickname that started as a joke first but stuck, and one she still personally finds quite hilarious, much to Stunky's irritation. Getting grounded and the like for whatever she had done didn't seem to change Kaede's attitude at all, and when told she couldn't leave the house she had always managed to somehow escape without being seen anyway. Thus, her strict parents whom she had felt a need to 'rebel' from, decided the only option was to send her away from the bad influences around her, and to go on the journey that most people her age had done in the past. That's how she came to the egoistical decision that she was going to become the most powerful trainer the region had seen, and eventually even champion. Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0 Tier 0: - Title: (#/#) Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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17 May 2015, 01:54 PM Post #2 | ||||
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Welcome to Godai Ktulu! I see you have a lot of questions here! But that's okay, please let me guide you to the following resources we have for everyone no matter how old or new:
Unfortunately you are not the only newbie here as awesome as you are (lovely profile avatar ftw!) and we hold them up to the same standard. They have gotten a lot of things on their own despite the amount of information, BUT they took a while to go through it! Don't worry, take it one step at a time and don't be afraid to ask questions. Once you've filled in the correct information, followed the word count, filled in your weight, so on and so forth - and at least attempted to understand the Pokedex, please Post a Reply and we will check your profile again! Good luck! I know you got this. ♥ |
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18 May 2015, 02:28 AM Post #3 | ||||
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Just your average seamonster
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Thanks so much for all of the feedback, because this is my first time doing a Pokémon roleplay of this much detail and I'm pretty much a complete n00b to coming up with stats. Apologies if it seems like I didn't try too hard to search for anything. Anyway, I think I've matched word counts and filled everything in this time round. (Unless I'm wrong, I have terrible luck.) And in response to your comment on my profile picture: I know, it's pretty cool right? :'D UrsulaDecay, a really awesome artist on both tumblr and deviantArt is who I got it from. |
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18 May 2015, 03:52 AM Post #4 | ||||
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Yo Kaede, I'll move this into the regualr Character Application section (I agree, the avatar is awesome!). So far, what you've got is brilliant, but we just need it expanded a little, nothing too bad!
Sorry if that seems like a lot, but I probably explained everything in more words than necessary, so it looks like there's more work to be done than there is lol. If you're stuck with anything, feel free to reply here, PM Bones or myself, or even ask in the chat if you're needing help urgently lol. Thanks for your patience, and I can't wait to see this finished soon ^^ |
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18 May 2015, 05:24 AM Post #5 | ||||
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I've expanded a bit more. Hopefully it's alright. I usually briefly come up with character ideas and develop them through roleplaying, so my brain isn't used to thinking about all these details, haha. ^^ As for Stunky's stats, I think what I already have should be okay? Attack was 25% which is between 21-27%, and Speed was 30% which is between 25-31% for Stunky. That left me with 24 to divide out among the others. I could easily be wrong, so just say the word and I'll change that to what you had suggested. xD |
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18 May 2015, 05:46 AM Post #6 | ||||
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Ah, pardon me, your stats were fine from the beginning lol. I didn't work it out correctly (maths was never a strength of mine lol). Just make sure to add the percentage into the brackets too. The only other thing I think that needs editing a little is possibly the General Appearance still. You said that her expressions are from her eyes and mouth, but what exactly are they? Does she frown a lot? Does she squint a lot? Try to explain exactly what it is she does with her expressions. We're pretty close now! ^^ |
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18 May 2015, 05:51 AM Post #7 | ||||
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I'm not sure how much more I can elaborate on her eye and lip movements, so have a look again while I hope for the best. X'D | ||||
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19 May 2015, 10:51 AM Post #8 | ||||
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Nice, 1/2 ^^ | ||||
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20 May 2015, 03:11 AM Post #9 | ||||
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Alrighty Ktulu! I’m sure you want to get accepted ASAP so let’s being for your last approval - For her ”Height” and ”Weight” and as well for that age, she’s a bit underweight for someone of a trainer or traveler as well to carry a guitar around her back. In Godai we try for trainers to be as healthy as possible unless stated otherwise in their application. However, upon looking at the rest of the details, unless she is to be thinner than portrayed, feel free to add it in! If not, perhaps adding another ten pounds will do her well. Please recheck ”Common Application Mistakes” to see how to properly fell out her ”Hometown”. Once you see it, I’m sure you’ll go “OOH!” haha! For her ”Personality” I feel this is absolutely lovely! However, I am so very positive you can add in much more meat onto Kaede to make her a much more wholesome character. Now, instead of generalizing, let’s go deeper into Kaede for which I’ll question, what exactly is her style of having a large ego - why and especially how? What will she do? How will she express it? There are just so many different definitions of having a large ego but everyone’s reason is mainly different. What are the specifics of these positive and negative traits that she may or may not like? Why doesn’t she like overly cheerful people and what specific part about them causes her to snap? Is it because she thinks overly cheerful people are fake? Or are they too loud and their laughing causes her eardrums to ring? Or is the matter completely different?! Not only that but how about her strengths and weaknesses? How do those two shape her for who she is? And if not, then why? How? How about her morals and beliefs? Is there something she goes by everyday - a motto perhaps? Is there something she’ll stick blindly no matter what? So on and so forth. I believe you get what I”m saying and I’m sure you do! Although I adore your character’s ”History”, just like Kaede’s ”Personality” I feel you can also do just a wee bit more. For example, are there any other obstacles or events that happened in her life? Remember that Kaede’s ”History” is there in order to compliment her Personality. So basically, what transpired and what mental processes went though both her childhood and teenage years that shaped her to be this person you described in her personality today? Not only that, but how well did she do in school? These pranks and troubles that she did and gone through, respectively, did she do them alone or with friends? How did her own friends shape her whether or not they were good or bad? What did her parents do to this and how did it cause a rift in their relationship for a person such as Kaede? If not, then why and how? In what ways did she mellow out over the years - since I feel that she has. If not, then also - why and how? Remember these are just guidelines to help build up your character! You don’t literally have to answer them all! For your ”Advancement Points” please delete the “Title: (#/#)”. Other than that, everything else is absolutely superb! Please post a reply whenever you have done any changes whatsoever! Good luck; you got this! ♥ |
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