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Trainer Profile Character Name: Nicholas Marks Gender: Male Age: 16 Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer Height: 5'5''(ft'in'') 165.1(cm) Weight: 115(lbs) 52.2(kg) Hair Color & Style: Dark Blond, Eye-Lengthened in front, up over the ears, and just above shoulders in the back. Eyes: A mix between Green, and Brown, they turn green when he is really happy or excited, and brown almost all the other times. Hs eye-lashes are short. His eyes give a serious vibe, and might even look mean at times, even if he is at a neutral expression, however when he is feeling a strong emotion, you can usually tell from his eyes. Clothing/Accessories: Black jacket, whit polo-shirt underneath, dark blue jeans, small digital watch, and pair of sunglasses (never worn, only used if needed) General Appearance: Caucasian, he has a serious expression, but a calm and collective vibe. He is a bit short for his age, but if mocked for it, he would say he prefers being short. He has a high metabolism, which stops him from growing much, and gaining much weight, and at the same time he has a small build, smaller than a lot of guys, but he is happy enough with it. At a glance, he doesn't seem like much at all, but looks can be deceiving. ![]() Hometown: Weswell Town, West Godai Personality: Nicholas is a quiet slightly introverted type. Always lost in his thoughts, and often breaking from reality. He tends to seem lonely, but he never really is. He just doesn't tend to socialize in crowds, or unless it's necessary. However on the flip side, if he finds interested in a topic or knows what he is talking about, he can suprise people buy jumping into the conversation. He likes to think logically over emotionally, and would rather think things through than do what he wants. Secretive or unexplained things tend to catch his curiosity as he either tries to discover and find an explanation, or reason one himself. History: Nicholas was born and raised in Weswell, he grew up with his father, who had taught him that knowledge is everything in the world, and that you can do anything when you have the smarts to do it. This pressed Nicholas to grow up working hard in school, but what he longed for was a chance to go out in the world and learn by experience. When he was about 10 years old, he told his father, and he quickly pressed him to learn all he could before heading out into the world. Sadly delaying his adventure, he stayed home to learn about pokemon, batteling, and even practiced a few skills to help him, those skills being building a fire, mild cooking, and minor things like reading the town map. His father then told him that he would find him a pokemon someday. However weither it be out of fear of letting his son go, or simply the inability to actually obtain one, this never seemed to happen. Until one day, Nicholas had been given a Sandslash from an old minor who discovered it in one of their rubble-waste pits. Thus Nicholas was allowed to set off on his journey, with a few gifts from his father being a pokedex, and holocaster. Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0 Tier 0: Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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27 May 2015, 06:28 PM Post #2 | ||||
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Alrighty Hidden! We’ve already been acquainted so let’s begin - First off, I would like to ask you to put a space between your colon “:” and the information provided. (i.e - Gender: Male) But most importantly, I’d like to direct you once more to the following: ”Common Application Mistakes”, ”Character Application Template” (by scrolling up as there are two lovely examples that literally tell you how to fill it out) and finally ”Accepted Characters” to see what you may or may not be missing! I say this because we do have a minimum word count, a proper way to fill out let’s say ”Eyes”, ”Hometown”, "Pokedex" and so on and so forth! I’ll let you review that before commenting further just incase you’d like to add in more or whatever you feel the need to. Please post a reply when any changes have been made! Good luck! ♥ |
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Alrighty Hidden! We’ve already been acquainted so let’s begin - First off, I see a few of these changes and I guess you’re ready; there’s quite a bit to change here but you got this! Please delete the parentheses around your labels since just like the other profiles here, it is not necessary. Then, for his ”Clothing [...]” is that all he wears 24/7? If so then state that he only has one type of clothing all year round. But on a realistic basis, keep in mind the amount of bacteria and infections he can get! But if he does have more clothes at is disposal, perhaps you can elaborate on the type of style he likes? What about what he wears wearing cold or hot weathers? Is there anything else he carries? Not even a backpack while traveling? Etc. For his ”General Appearance”, we don’t really have the word “Caucasian” here, as the same thing goes with “Chinese” for the proper name usage, please ask Mr. Johnapillar since I can’t remember them off the top of my head. Just to correct this part real fast, having high metabolism isn’t the cause for him being short; it tends to be due to his genetics, environment and calcium intact. Not only that perhaps add a bit more on how he walks or holds himself? As well as elaborate on what it means for how “he doesn’t seem like much at all”? In what ways and qualities does this allow for him to “not seem like much at all”? Body language? Posture? Words he says? So on and so forth. However, most importantly let’s zoom into his Personality and History - For his ”Personality” constantly ask yourself “why”s and “how”s. Why is he always lost in thought “often breaking from reality”? How does he do this? For what reasons? Is it because he is tired of reality due to it being boring or some other depressing factors that cause this? Does he do this during school or even during important tasks? Iunno! Not my character. Think on a psychological level - don’t be afraid to flush out the details. Why doesn’t he want to socialize in crowds? Just because someone is an introvert doesn’t define the “do”s and “don’t”s someone has - it is simply their personality and what they like to do, so elaborate! In what ways can he actually “surprise” someone? What do he do or what does he say? I say this because for example, some people in this country may brag to me that they finished Calculus in High School expecting me to be surprised, but that’s hardly the case when in most Asian countries that should be something you learn in your first year of High School if not by the time you graduate Middle School. So give examples! Not only that but what are his morals or beliefs? A set life motto perhaps? If not, then why? What else can I know about him? That’s hardly to go off on - so don’t be afraid to type more! The same can be said for his ”History”. Please remember that we have a Word Count like I said on the first post and can be said in the same template area. However to save us both time I’ll quote it here: But to get you started on it a bit, think of how his ”History” is able to compliment his ”Personality”. What experiences or events or even obstacles did he go through that turned him into who you say he is today? How was his relationship with his mother and father? How was he throughout infancy to adolescence and what went through his mind during these stages? What about friends? How did he obtain any traits that he may or may not have? How did he grow as a person? So on and so forth. Because your ”Personality” is lacking, it is only natural for your ”History” to be the same way, but that’s completely okay! If you’re in need for any other inspiration please check out ”Accepted Characters” for a better look. We’ll stop here and focus on your ”Pokedex” some other day. If you have any other questions you know how to get us! When you have made any changes please post a reply as per usual. You got this, good luck! ♥ |
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