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Lianna Kibo
Topic Started: 29 May 2015, 11:27 AM (156 Views)
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Character Name: Lianna Kibo
Nickname: Lynx
Gender: female
Age: 16
Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer

Height: 5’ 11”
Weight: 170 lbs
Hair Color & Style: Unruly blonde hair that falls to about shoulder height, though never quite in a straight line. She has a habit of tying beads and feathers she finds to individual strands, though they often fall out, meaning that the most she has managed to keep at once was three or so. When she washes it, it becomes a brilliant gold, but that almost never happens.
Eyes: A muted green, her rounded eyes are the most expressive part of her face, and often carry a mischievous glint. Because she wears no makeup, they sometimes appear smaller than others’. She has often been teased by how her blonde eyebrows are nearly invisible, but they nonetheless make her face all the more expressive.
Clothing/Accessories: When warm weather allows, she prefers green sleeveless tee shirts with wide, shallow necks and brown cargo pants. It seems like all of her clothing has small rips and other signs of wear, and are all covered in mud and grass stains. Though she prefers to go barefoot, she dons a pair of muddy brown hiking boots if absolutely necessary. A leather cord holds a sizable tooth or claw that she claims she got from a huge skeleton she found deep in the Skytouch forest. She actually bought it at a shop. Her earrings are amalgamations of feathers and beads. During cooler seasons, she is never seen without a certain dark green sweater, which has been patched multiple times and often has bits of sticks and leaves stuck in it. When the weather becomes absolutely frigid, she dons a long, dark green coat, and brown silk leggings can be seen through the rips in her pants. She loops a long white scarf around her neck, which is matched by her white wool gloves and a fluffy hat that seems to enjoy falling off.
General Appearance: Though naturally tall and broad-shouldered, years of playing and hiking outside have added lean muscle to her steady frame. These years outside haven’t given her a tan- she is naturally too pale- but she sports an impressive collection of freckles. Her gait is more of a lumber than a walk, but if necessary she can become as stealthy and light-footed as a forest creature. Like her clothes, she is often covered in grass stains and mud, plus the half-healed scratches, bruises, and stings that result from romping through the woods. Obviously, she sticks out in the crowd, and her height and bulk intimidate some people, who are even more shocked by her intelligence.

Hometown: Scurarte Town, Eastern Godai
Personality: Charismatic, intelligent, and adventurous, she loves seeking out new experiences and exploring the forests around her hometown, where she can avoid other people. She sees most people as noisy and self-absorbed, and dislikes the way they always think they have to talk. Pokemon, on the other hand, don’t expect favors or force her to listen to them. She admires their loyalty and how they are in tune with nature. Kind and caring, she has a soft spot for small Pokemon, and has earned the trust of many wild Pokemon after she helped them. She doesn’t make many (human) friends, but when she does, she is caring and loyal, helping or standing up for them whenever she thinks they need it. Despite her dislike of people, she is open and honest with those she’s on good terms with, and has a deep capacity for trust. This can sometimes lead to trouble, as she occasionally lets trust cloud her judgement. She is upbeat and cheerful most of the time, but her bad moods have become well-known by her peers. She has never forgiven anyone who has broken her trust, holding grudges for years on end. It actually isn’t too difficult to get on her bad side, and a desire for petty revenge has fueled pranks much crueler than she is normally capable of. She has learned how to utilize the way people see her in order to manipulate them, and finds it amusing during her darker moods to use them for her own ends.
History: Born and raised in Scurarte Town, she has always had a love of the forests that surround it, often playing among the leaves all day. She has always wanted to go on an adventure as a Pokemon trainer, much to her parents’ dismay. They have tried to talk her out of it countless times, thinking it too dangerous for their only child. They hoped that she would become a scientist, where they argued that she could change the world from the safety of a lab. She found the thought of being cooped up in a lab all day with noisy machines and other people incredibly boring and unpleasant. She would much rather be outside following her dream, a team of Pokemon by her side. Her parents’ constant disapproval only made her more determined to become a trainer to spite them.
She and a boy called Danny (Daniel Tasukete) met in the woods one day while he was pursuing a rare Pokemon he had seen. They had been in the same Elementary school class for all three years, but she had been so shy that they had never talked. She offered to help him look for it, and they became fast friends. Though they found the Pokemon and caught it (Danny’s Snivy, Sheng) they had wandered too deep into the forest and were lost. Though they were eventually found by a search party, her parents would constantly use this event in their arguments as proof of the danger of being a trainer.
As the two grew up, Danny helped her overcome most of her shyness. Though she still felt that people were noisy and obnoxious, she learned that there were some exceptions to that rule and made a few more friends. Throughout the rest of Elementary school, she and her friends all made plans to become trainers together. Her parents still pressured her to give up her dream, but now she had friends to encourage her to become who she wanted to be.
Elementary school ended, and she and her friends were excited. Though her parents expressly forbid her to go, she went with them anyway to get their trainer’s licenses. Furious, her parents forced her to stay home while the rest picked theirs up a week later, and though Danny delivered hers later, she was crushed.
The next year, her parents forced her to attend Secondary school, hoping to send her to the GSUC later on. She signed up for classes on Pokemon training against their wishes. Over time, most of her friends went off on Pokemon adventures or simply grew too distant, and she suddenly found that the only person she could talk to was Danny. Fueled by built-up spite and teenage rebellion, she began making plans to run away. With his help, she earned money to buy what she would need to go on an adventure of her own.
She was having difficulties with classwork, even occasionally skipping school if she felt she needed to. This made a noticeable impact on her grades, and her parents were furious that she was ruining the future they had planned for her. After a particularly rocky semester, during which she barely passed the required classes but did impressively well in her training class, they became so angry that they forbade her to see Danny or go to the forest, along with dropping her out of all but the required courses. They hovered and nagged at her every second, until she became so frustrated she felt like she was going to explode.
What began as a daydream became her goal- to run away and become a trainer. Because she still saw Danny at school, the two were able to hatch a plan. She would travel through the Skytouched Forest to Kotoba City, where she would wait for him to finish the few weeks left of the semester. Then he would travel to Kotoba by rail and the two would start their adventure. Once she felt like she was ready, she left at night, leaving a short note for her parents, who she realized were only doing what they thought was right. Still, the moment she left, she felt a rush of happy adrenaline. She was finally following her dream.

Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
Posted Image PokéDex
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Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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(Shinx)
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Narren
Gender: Male
Type: Electric
Ability: Rivalry
Height: 1’ 8”
Weight: 20.9 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (6/8)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 14 (25%)
  • Defense: 10
  • Sp. Attack: 9
  • Sp. Defense: 10
  • Speed: 12
    Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1: Tackle
5: Leer

Item:
  • none

PC Box: Stored Pokemon


Journal

Adventure Log
 
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Edited by BrambleBush, 30 May 2015, 08:39 PM.
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Alrighty Bush! Welcome to Godai~! It’s a pleasure to have you here and this is a rather great start to your profile! Love the details! There’s just a few things to edit, but that’s alright I’ll guide you through them -

First, unfortunately you can not start with Eevee. We actually have a “Starting List” and that can be found in ”Godai Resources” by simply scrolling down within the {{Quick Links}}. The same can be said for properly filling out the ”Pokedex” found in ”Character Application Template” where there are two filled out examples that give you /literally/ the exact way to fill it out by simply scrolling up!

That said, let’s begin -

For her ”Clothing [...]” this is good! However please add in maybe a sentence or two of what she would wear during cold or hot seasons.

For her ”General Appearance” this is beautiful, but maybe another sentence or two of what people’s first impression of her would be?

Then, for her ”Personality”, you’ve definitely hit the minimum there! But I feel especially with your style, you can in /much/ more! Why is she naturally charismatic and adventurous? What about it makes her be this way? For example does she like the adrenaline rush she gets when doing something she loves, or the smiles from other people when she is able to bait them into doing whatever she wants? Etc. Iunno! Not my character! What are these “other subjects’ - and why would she be awkward and shy? Is it because loud people ring the eardrums in her ear? It doesn’t sound like it’s from the activities or else it might contradict with her being adventurous but of course even that part falls on a variety of definitions. What else can we know about her? Any other weaknesses aside from the one? How about morals and beliefs maybe? What’s her view on Mankind or Pokemonkind? Does she tend to hold people close to her heart? Friends? Family? Something she would never budge from no matter what? If not, why and how? Don’t be afraid to dish out the details!

The same can be said for her ”History”; this is good! But again I feel you have the ability to add in much more to make her a wholesome person! I felt this was more on what she did, and not necessarily her experiences that impacted her to become this wonderful person she is today. Remember that her ”History” should compliment her ”Personailty”. In what ways, events, obstacles, experiences came before her that shaped her to be this gal you described? There’s an awful lot of parentheses here and can easily be integrated within the paragraphs with even more details. How did she crakc underneath - what went through her mind from before to the after? How did she feel? What other ups and downs did she go through that allowed her to achieve this personal growth to make her a solidified character? What about friends? Her relationship with them and her family? Strained? No? A little bit? Iunno. Why wasn’t she disheartened? What went through her mind that allowed her to continue forward? How did she make or meet this friend named Danny? What did he mean to her and vice versa? So on and so forth. Don’t be afraid to flush out those details!

That’s it for now! If you have any other questions feel free to PM any of the staff and we’ll get back to you ASAP! Whenever you have made any changes, please post a reply to this and we will see it soon! You got this and I look forward to your edits. ♥
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First of all, thanks for the input! I have absolutely no experience.
I've made some significant changes, and I hope they give a better view of this character.
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Not a problem Bush! We all had to start somewhere! Hell, you did much better than me when I first started, but I digress -

I am liking these changes! This is totally fine for me, however can I ask you to add in a few sentences on Lynx's "Personality" for any morals or beliefs she holds close to her heart? Or perhaps a life motto she goes by? For example one of my character is to always strive to be better at each passing day. What about Lynx?!

After that, I can give you your first approval from me! You know the drill once you make any changes. ♥
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