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[A]Saruwatari; [Accepted]
Topic Started: 31 May 2015, 06:42 PM (553 Views)
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Character Name: Saruwatari Nasagi
Nickname: Saru
Gender: Male
Age:17
Date of Birth: December 14th, 183
Trainer Class: Guitarist

Height: 5'9
Weight: 131
Hair Color & Style: One of the two most distinguishing traits about him, Saruwatari has long since grown used to his red hair sticking out. Being an almost offensive bold shade of red, the hair, when not in a ponytail, gives him a remarkably feminine look when coupled with his thin figure. Red silken like strands of hair form bangs in the front along the corner sides of his jaw; otherwise being combed to the sides as best as possible. With his hair being naturally straight, it often hangs down between his shoulders near his mid back in a way that keeps it from getting in his way while performing idle tasks. He rarely shifts between the two styles of how to sport his hair however, having not cut it in a few years, sans a couple of trims to keep it healthy. In the mornings however, his hair is prone to clumping to the upper right top side of his head suffering severe cow licks do to a preference of slumbering upon his right in a fetal position.

Eyes: Similarly to his father, Saru has inherited a condition known as Heterochromia. At birth one of his eyes developed a separate shade and pigment to the other. With one eye a stark cobalt shade of blue, and the other a light amber brown, his gaze sometimes makes others uneasy until they become used to the notion of it given it's rarity. When wearing articles of clothing that match the color of either eye it often brings out the true definition of their color to a greater intensity. It would be easy for others to be taken aback on first interactions, and admittedly Saru has often found himself tired of answering the question "Why are your eyes different colors?", or hearing about how "pretty" his eyes look. Familiarity breeds contempt in almost all aspects of human life, with the tedium of repeated incidents like this being no exception. However this also at times messes with him, if only slightly. With different eye colors handling intensities in light alternately from one another he sometimes finds himself dizzy somewhat easily by intense lights or constantly shifting lightning as his eyes adjust at different intervals.

Clothing/Accessories: Perhaps his favorite article of clothing is a dark metallic silver trench-coat made of poplin. Though the waist is cut back around the coat to project the tail end behind him, it's something he'll seldom be seen without upon his person. It's dotted in golden shaded brass buttons with thin metal chains to serve instead of straps which would bind it closed to the small buttons affixed as additional methods of covering up ones body. It's collars are fashionably popped as any angsty teen would enjoy; though him simply for the covering over his neck as his skin is fairly sensitive to the solar radiance which most worry not over.

Beneath this he wears usually a series of slightly torn or worn under shirts, universally white in color. His colossal array of jeans, all three of them, are almost a cross between standard jean pants and parachute pants. The cuffs are shredded along with various tears at the knees that would seem to be a designers choice; however are victim to one too many trips among the waters Cascadia is known for. Rocks had a way of helping his tumbling blunders from being too safe. His red and black sneakers were a gift just prior to departing for his venture, and well adept at shock absorption for running or climbing in rugged terrain. The base is red with the sides covered in a black rubber like strip while the tongue also runs at an obsidian black.

In addition to these however he also wears black finger-less faux leather gloves. Despite enjoying the feeling of the leather without the obstructive nature on his grip it's actually simply the aesthetic he likes. Saru also wears a necklace given to him by his mother on his fourteenth birthday, containing an image of an outstretched hand. Though to most an odd if not eerie choice of symbol it has great meaning to him in his struggles to work with the psychic powers the boy has a fair aptitude for. A reminder to never close a hand in defeat, but outstretch it for a second attempt when failing. Though seeming slightly cumbersome, he also carries around his only real possession. A guitar he's played for many years, learning how to strum the melodic strings at the young age of ten and developing the talent into a proficient skill set as time passed. It's an electric Ax guitar with marble white streaks designed along the front and back with a standard light brown polished guitar neck.

The case is a slightly heavy black one that has a solid lining with thin metal hooks latching the case shut when not being used. The soft black interior is almost like the carpet of a floor to the house within; small compartments tucked into the side like pockets that house guitar picks of assorted colors and small maintenance tools and supplies for on the spot repair should it suffer damage. Resting along side the guitar case, and upon his back is a small traveling backpack designed to hold the various essentials for long distance travel. Given his singular choice of clothing however this allows for more essential items and limits the weight he travels which is already stretched somewhat by his guitar.

General Appearance: Seeing Saru for the first time might prompt a standard scoff or response at seeing a teenager who enjoys the stereotypical aspects of growing youth. Torn clothing, slightly baggy, a few chains, and long hair. The silken crimson thread like hair often hanging straight down, it forewarns a sensitivity to the sunlight from pale skin and red shaded hair. Supplemented by his lack of any real facial expressions in most circumstances might even prompt others to avoid him as opposed to desire a meeting. In general he simply appears to move at his own leisure while the world drifts on down the stream of life. His stride, and the way he carries himself drips with a natural sloth that implies a greater desire to admire the road traveled by far more than the destination(should he ever actually reach it) he sets forth towards. A lackadaisical expression often belittling the fire within simply waiting to erupt; something which is likely to catch most people off guard.

Though his baggy clothes and multiple layers courtesy of his trench coat mask it well, Saruwatari is a fairly good looking lad. His body is slightly lean, but decently muscled from the hobby of swimming and taking to walking about with his guitar case on his person almost constantly. His build is unmistakably athletic, though even so obscured none the less by his fashion style. With somewhat long lean legs to support his casual step it emphasizes the slow pace he takes to life by making smaller steps despite his easily feasible lengthy strides.


The boy's hands often either nestled within numerous pockets in his coat or jeans is a common sight, though on rare occasions one will surface to tempt gravities wrath with blatant defiance in the form of telekinetic manipulations of a pokeball sent astray into the air through hovering rotations; failing this at times simply resting upon a black strap covering his chest that is used to keep his prized guitar from falling to the ground.


Allignment: Neutral good


Hometown: Cascadia City, North Godai

Personality:Upon first impressions he can seem like an uncaring individual or almost stoic towards even the greatest of life's surprises. A lack of emotion filled expressions to give context of his reaction to any situations or even convey thoughts easier, while seldom raising his voice. This stems from a duality in his life. At a younger stage he spent his time out of the house as often as possible. Energy abounds and exploring feverishly to find a new species of pokemon or some fantastic legendary to bring home after befriending as children naturally are sure they can do, only to stumble into some fairly disastrous situations. The worst of which involved him falling into the rushing currents of river only to break his leg when he attempted to stand and was sent tumbling through a rocky river bed by the rushing waters that swept him off his feet. Having experienced such situations with vivid memories burned into his mind, initial excitement is partially lost to him of most situations unless something unique, new or outstandingly response provoking. He's not fearless, simply not surprised in most cases.

However the other source of this facade takes roots in his gift. Being a psychic he attempted , through his mothers guidance, to master the arts of telekinesis. Unfortunately his shifting attentions and excitable nature made focusing very difficult and resulted in solid potential being squandered on repeated attempts of the same thing with no real success given his refusal to shift his mindset from the scatterbrained excitable one he would continually cling to. He was easily disheartened for many years, often simply denying this side of himself any form of practice. Upon a heart to heart from his parents, and a gift in the form of a necklace from his mother however he renewed his practice with a rather insatiable hunger and vigor to accomplish new personal milestones. The ability to levitate small objects within a few feet being a personal feat and great source of pride for him personally. Due to the level of inner calm and discipline he had to manifest though, and his habit to maintain it so he can perpetually practice; his mind is in a state of inner calm quite reliably. That is..atleast what he would tell others and how he acts. The reality stretches somewhat further and is more complex.

Friends who get to know him more will see the vivid reactions and wild emotions he was once known for, with beaming expressions and a constant grin. This shows the unwavering confidence he's developed over the years in himself, thanks in no small part to his parents. This also gave birth to a somewhat nurturing side within him towards any form of struggle he sees. Patient, and willing to assist in progression for it's own sake; be it people or pokemon. Though this is not a masculine personality trait he holds no shame in showing it given the help and comfort it could bring others, as it once brought him.

Though not essentially inquisitive compared to others his curiosity does tend to get the better of him at times. With a solid grasps on his genuine interests though in pokemon, music, swimming and a wanderlust he can't really suppress any longer he tries to narrow his curiosities into those categories. This mindset has also allowed him to develop considerable knowledge in those fields of interest, combined with dedicated time spent centering himself mentally. This has given him ample opportunities to properly collect his thoughts and cement his ideals and stances on many things as well as dwell upon already learned subjects. This portrays him as a very sure individual, and better compliments his intelligence.

" Enjoy the little things in life. Some day, you'll turn around and see that they were the biggest things of all. " These were the parting words of his father when he left home. Though Saru already lived by a wordless creed similar to this, his father's nudge towards that path in life was all he ultimately needed to guarantee how he would carry himself. Slower to arrive at the destination, he's more certain to enjoy the path he's traveled. In most circumstances he see's the world around him rushing by, with humanity bustling and scrambling to reach their greatest heights; most people climbing over one another often enough sadly. This inclination towards the slow lane also gives him a greater appreciation for the cycles of nature, and how the world around him works at it's own pace. Pokemon never rush in hurried frenzies to accomplish grand milestones or make history, much to his respect and admiration. This mindset sometimes gives him a biased favor towards pokemon in the field of blunders as opposed to his fellow man.

History: Growing up in Cascadia seemed Symbolic as nostalgia induced reflections influenced Saruwatari more and more. The great currents of Godai ran through it only to find the waters cleansed in rapid currents and sent to fresh bodies by extension at this central focus of the waterways within the landscape. The most wild and rapid of waters, chaotic and unpredictable always found a calming new start upon certain points within the city it's self.

When Saruwatari first started to show his potential as a Psychic, his parents were thrilled, having both been psychics themselves. However attempts to teach their son this gift were almost deflected as the boy failed to understand the magnitude of which this discovery was. His cognitive development might have been greater given psychic activity and his awareness slowly tuning into things more, but his rather shifting focuses and interests gave him little time to dwell on it.

He was always finding some excuse to brave the outdoors as any scamp might and delve into every small hole or trod down self-made paths with the determination of an avid explorer. Though his parents encouraged this, they also disapproved of how it out-shined his desire to practice the latent psychic powers he had seemingly inherited from them both. However he often squandered it with his inability to focus directly. His lifestyle in schooling also reflected this. Though he had a fairly large group of friends and performed well, it often turned into a matter of if he performed. Procrastination or even blatant neglect of his obligations so that he could further enjoy the world around him was an ever rising issue.

However fate was content to throw not only a wrench into these plans, but possibly the entire toolbox. One day while Saru was clambering about along one of the faster rivers within the reaches of Cascadia City, he noticed a vaporeon. This pokemon was not new to him, but so rare that he felt an insatiable desire to get a closer look. Attempting to make his way through the river in a somewhat careless manner caused him to stumble into the rushing waters with his feet being swept out from beneath him. A floundering attempt to grip something, anything, resulted in him trying to grab a root sticking out from the river's bank side wall. This unfortunately made his situation worse, for the root not only broke moments later but left him to helplessly tumble through the river. As his body was tossed and thrown about he hit the rivers side and even the floor of the river with his skin suffering lacerations from the sharper rocks.

The vaporeon had saved the floundering boy, but not before his leg broke thanks to the currents wrath and how he'd been tossed about. Within sight of Cascadia city, the pokemon had actually dragged the unconscious boy to the city where he was noticed and spotted mere moments later. The notion that his own curiosity had been the result of such things haunted him for a time. This however would serve to bring him closer to his parents.

Physical therapy was a struggle for him. Partially broken from his ordeal, the boy was quick to give up. However His mother, who he had often tried to encourage him to try his hardest was very determined to see him recover. She wished to see him grow stronger from an otherwise horrible experience. Though not as nurturing emotionally as his mother, his father certainly encouraged him too. He was quick to remind Saru that life would throw it's entirety at him when he least expected it. He would have to rise to meet the challenge if he was going to see the sights he so often dreamed of. As he recovered though the boy showed some fear of the waters still.

With this in mind, and to this end they tried to focus his interests. Swimming in safer rivers as a healthy one, along with musical practice to bring out a bit more artistic interest would eventually aid him in bringing out the best results of that third and most difficult trait. Swimming would firstly help him conquer his somewhat newly found fear of the water. It would place a terror of his mind firmly behind him and allow him to better understand the process of growing as an individual. Swimming gave him a goal to focus his exertions on and get into the habit of bettering himself constantly. Combined with the refreshing sensation of entering the crisp waters and he had himself in a solid environment. Then there was the art of music. Some tried multiple instruments before finding their niche. He was lucky to find that he immensely enjoyed the first one he tried. The guitar.

That his constantly wandering mind could find focus in the art of dancing his fingers across metal strings to generate melodious tunes worked wonders for his mental calm. He had two great outlets to finally attempt perfecting his third talent. His inner telekinetic gifts and psychic powers. It was a greater struggle than he would have imagined. The level of focus to simply levitate an object to the height as if he were lifting it from the ground was far more intense than implied. Here once again though, his father and mother helped guide him. Perhaps it was easier for them, given their aptitudes for the gift as well, but it was well received help. Where Saru struggled to reach for his goals, his mother helped guide his hand. She encouraged him to focus on single red and white pokeball he was attempting to lift. It would stagger, falter and sometimes drop but over time he gained the confidence and inner quiet to rise it upwards.

When it came time to draw it to him, he found himself lacking the fire to draw it close. Here his father encouraged him. "When you struggle, move forwards. Lean into the strife, and relentlessly persist." Imagining his outstretched hand moving to grasp the sphere, he slowly found himself able to draw it to him. Perhaps a minor accomplishment, but one none the less. With time passing by Saru began to grow quieter. More content to observe before acting, and reflecting inwards after said actions.

His personality change over the years was better received by his friends and teachers both. His grades soaring as he actually applied himself, and his friends often encouraging him to display his psychic talent through small trivial things like occasionally levitating pencils or books(when he grew proficient enough) was a welcome break to the dull tedium of the day.

However as he grew older, Saru started to notice something around him. Most of the friends he had grown with were starting to leave. Be it to further advance talents of their choosing or take up careers as Pokemon trainers; it did not change the fact that his generational crowd was thinning.

Within these realizations were the first seeds planted, that would develop into his desire to travel as a Pokemon trainer. His parents had been content with their pokemon as pets sure, but he couldn't just sit around home. He had to see what it was like outside of Cascadia with it's flowing rivers. Just as the water returned eventually, it had to first leave. It was with this mindset that he solidified his desire to hit the road; and see just where it'd go. He'd just have to follow his heart and hope he wasn't wrong.

After going through the necessary processes he had to to register as a pokemon trainer, albeit a bit taken aback by the youth of most of the other trainers who entered as he did, he sought out to recieve a starting pokemon from the lab of Professor Leigh Raymond Marshall. At first, anxiety tugged at him from within as to whether or not he would take a liking to his partner and vice versa. He'd already decided on a partner sure; but he had to do his best to atleast earn it's respect. So he worried, intially. The number of choices had caught him off guard, and it was only through a slight interest in the pokemon's appearance and from remembering hearing about it on a T.V program that he hastily..if not hurriedly exclaimed Cyndaquil to be his desired partner. This new situation, and the gravity of it was able to utterly shatter his usually slow and calm approach. If anything, he'd felt rushed. Those worries and sensations vanished the moment that the tiny foot and a half pokemon appeared before him in the blinding flash of light the pokeball released. It was so..tiny. Almost adorably so.

There he had stood blinking a few times with the dancing lights of his briefly dazed eyes narrowing in on the fire type that looked back up at him with it's mouth open like a small o. Outstretched hands shakily lifting it, Saru had declared that it would be his partner only to lift it up as if to show it to the world. Though it had dangled there, the Cyndaquil hadn't objected; which was certainly better than his fears might have directed him to think the first metting would go. He noticed however that the Cyndaquil seemed to have an aversion for returning to it's pokeball, shying away from the sphere when ever the new trainer aimed it to him to call it back. To this end he was inspired with a solution based upon having seen a trainer once do it with their own pokemon; though it had been a smaller one and a rattata at that. Lifting the small fire type up he promptly plopped him down upon his head. His new pokemon in his hands,(Or on his head) Saru dubbed the Cynadquil as Cinder and left to travel Godai with his new partner.

Inventory

Dians: Posted Image 12,502

Items:
Posted Image 3x Pokéball
Posted Image 1x Ultra Ball
Posted Image 5x Super Potion
Posted Image 1 x Potion
Posted Image 1x Super Repel
Posted Image 1x Blue Apricorn
Posted Image 1x Black Apricorn
Posted Image 1x Red Apricorn
Posted Image 1x Green Apricorn
Posted Image 1x Pink Apricorn


Posted Image 2x Antidote
Posted Image 1x Revive


Posted Image 1x Wiki Berry
Posted Image 1x Mago Berry
Posted Image 1x Iapapa Berry




Posted Image - Subway Ticket Anywhere

Posted Image HM01 Cut
1 Posted Image Common Roll of Choice (Next Encounter)
1 Posted Image Uncommon Roll of Choice or Lower(Next Encounter)
1 Posted Image Elusive Roll of Choice - Any Time x1
1 Posted Image Rare Candy

+ 1.7 Continuous Happiness Multiplier.

Key Items:
Posted Image PokéDex
Posted Image Journal
Posted Image Holocaster
Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 244
Tier 0:
Gift Giving: (6/20) AP
Oooh Shiny: (13/30) AP
Genetic Key: (3/20) AP
Silver Tongue: (12/15)
Paternal instincts: (9/20) AP

Tier 1:
Seeing the Sights:(10/15) AP
TBTB: (7/15) AP


Tier 2:
Making Friends: (0/20) AP
TLC: (16/30) AP


Tier 3:
Nursing: (8/20) AP

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 243

Cinder
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(Quilava)
Caught at Level 5


Nickname:Cinder
Gender: Male
Type:Fire
Ability:Blaze
Height:2’ 11”
Weight:41.9 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (97/104)
EXP Gained: 91
Level: 22
Division: D6
Total Stats: 286
  • Attack:58
  • Defense: 40
  • Sp. Attack: 74 (26%)
  • Sp. Defense: 40
  • Speed: 74 (26%)

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Leer
1. Tackle
6. Smokescreen
10. Ember
13. Quick Attack
20. Flame Wheel
Unique Moves:
- Cut (HM Move)
-
-
-

Item Held:Posted Image - Luck Incense






Lily
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(Mawile)
Caught at Level 12


Nickname:Lily
Gender: Female
Type: Steel/Fairy
Ability: Intimidate
Height: 2' 0"
Weight: 25.4 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Fast
EXP Gauge: (117/123)
EXP Gained: 90
Level: 23
Division: D7
Total Stats: 276
  • Attack: 69 (25%)
  • Defense: 69 (25%)
  • Sp. Attack: 50
  • Sp. Defense: 50
  • Speed: 38

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Fairy Wind
1. Growl
1. Astonish
5. Fake Tears
9. Bite
13. Sweet Scent
17. Vice Grip
21. Faint Attack
No Unique Moves



Luxio

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(Luxio)
Caught at Level 22

Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Height: 2' 11"
Weight: 67.2 lbs
Health: Intermediate
Division: D7
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (106/118)
EXP Gained: 14
Level: 23
Total Stats: 276
  • Attack: 69 (25%)
  • Defense: 52
  • Sp. Attack: 30
  • Sp. Defense: 55
  • Speed: 70

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Tackle
5. Leer
9. Charge
11. Baby-Doll Eyes
13. Spark
18. Bite
23. Roar

No Unique Moves



Masamune
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(Absol)
Caught at Level 22

Nickname: Masamune
Gender: Male
Type: Dark
Ability: Pressure
Health: Intermediate
Division: D5
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (114/118)
EXP Gained: 22
Level: 23
Total Stats: 322
  • Attack: 106 (33%)
  • Defense: 55
  • Sp. Attack: 2
  • Sp. Defense: 59
  • Speed: 100

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Feint
1. Scratch
4. Leer
9. Quick Attack
10. Pursuit
13. Taunt
16. Bite
19. Double Team
22. Slash

No Unique Moves

Item Held: Posted Image Chople Berry



Nova

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(Growlithe)
Caught at Level 20

Nickname: Nova
Gender: Female
Type: Fire
Ability: Flash Fire
Height: 2'4 "
Weight: 41.9 lbs
Health: Low
Division: D8
EXP Rate: Slow
EXP Gauge: (129/142)
EXP Gained: 20
Level: 21
Total Stats: 231
  • Attack: 62 (27%)
  • Defense: 32
  • Sp. Attack: 62 (27%)
  • Sp. Defense: 32
  • Speed: 43
    Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Bite
1. Roar
6. Ember
8. Leer
10. Odor Sleuth
12. Helping Hand
17. Flame Wheel
19. Reversal
21. Fire Fang


Poochy

Posted Image
(Poochyena)
Caught at Level 25

Nickname: Poochy
Gender: Male
Type: Dark
Ability: Quick Feet
Height: 1'8"
Weight: 30 lbs
Health: Scrawny
Division: D10
EXP Rate: Medium Fast
EXP Gauge: (176/189)
EXP Gained: 6
Level: 25
Total Stats: 225
  • Attack: 68(30%)
  • Defense: 53
  • Sp. Attack: 1
  • Sp. Defense: 50
  • Speed: 53
    Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Tackle
4. Howl
7. Sand-Attack
10. Bite
13. Odor Sleuth
16. Roar
18. Snarl
20. Swagger
24. Assurance


Unique Moves:
- Sucker Punch (Egg Move)


PC Box: Stored Pokemon



Adventure Log

Journal

Beyond a simple Q&A - + 17EXP, Posted Image 1081, 7AP, + 1 Posted Image Potion
Lining the pockets! Saru Pokemart - - Posted Image 1900 ,+ Items1 Posted Image Super Potion, 6 Posted Image Potions.
Close to home + 26EXP, + Posted Image 1,224, +17 AP, - two Posted Imagepotions,- one Posted Image pokeball.
Day on the Town - + 103 EXP, + Posted Image 5,781, + 56 AP, + Posted Image HM01 Cut - 1 Posted Image Potion +1 Posted Image Subway Ticket Anywhere +1 Posted Image Potion
Thread of the Month +1 Posted Image Elusive Roll of Choice - Any Time x1

Delimas Event post + Posted Image 7186

Delimas 2016~! - - Posted Image 8000, + 1 Posted Image - Great Ball, +1 Posted Image - Ultra Ball, +1 Posted Image - Super Repel, +1 Posted Image - Max Repel, +1 Posted Image - Blue Apricorn, +1 Posted Image - Black Apricorn, +1 Posted Image - Red Apricorn. +1 Posted Image - Green Apricorn, +1 Posted Image - Pink Apricorn, +1 Posted Image - Luck Incense

Delimas 2016! Tree#3 = +1 Posted Image - Wiki Berry,+1 Posted Image - Mago Berry, +1 Posted Image - Iapapa Berry,+1 Posted Image - Antidote, +1 Posted Image - Paralyze Heal, +1 Posted Image - Revive , +1 Posted Image - Potion
Provisions before the Conquest - - 1800 Posted Image #, +3 Posted Image Great Ball

Over the river and through the...Field? - +97#EXP, +*dian* 7,930, + 164 AP, Posted Image - Antidote, +1
+5 Posted Image Potion
+ 1.7 Continuous Happiness Multiplier.
+1 Posted Image Common Roll of Choice (Next Encounter)
+1 Posted Image Uncommon Roll of Choice or Lower(Next Encounter)
+1 Posted Image Rare Candy
+1 Posted Image Chople Berry
-1 Posted Image Potion
-4 Posted Image - Great Ball
-1 Posted Image - Max Repel
-5 Posted Image Potion
-1 Posted Image - Paralyze Heal
-1 Posted Image Super Potion
Edited by DrakeX, 19 May 2018, 12:21 PM.
Saruwatari • Guitarist • Total EXP Gained: 146 • Dians: *dian* 6372 Location: Djenganti Monastary

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Alrighty Frost! Welcome to Godai! I’ve seen you around on the Cbox but anyways glad to have you here. I’m sure you wanna get accepted ASAP so let’s begin -

First off for his ”Height” and ”Weight” around that age and how he was described as feminine and athletic, please add in around ten to thirteen pounds of your choosing to make him a bit more healthier for trainers in Godai unless specifically specified or else he might a tad bit underweight!

I must note that you did a great job well down for his ”Eyes”!

Oh, I would suggest checking/proof reading your profile. There’s very few, but I caught a few spacing errors.

I must also say that I absolutely adore his ”Personality”, however I feel there’s one aspect missing that could tie this together! My suggestion would be pretty much what his morals and beliefs are? A life motto that he lives by perhaps? Something he lives by and won’t budge no matter what? Or even perhaps his views on Mankind, Pokemonkind, or even how he feels about himself as a whole? Something like that!

Okay, so I also think his ”History” is darling but to be blunt, there’s still not much I can tell to how he grew up to be this wonderful person you described for his ”Personality”! How was his relationship with his family? You noted that there was a time he broke his leg - how did that play into his history? For most children it would be a traumatic event for them, however Saru definitely keeps pushing on - why is this? How? What were - if any at all - inner turmoils or adrenaline rushes that went through his head before he was forced to mellow out? How was his childhood in a nutshell? There are things he did but not necessarily the emotional to personality development within it. How did he feel when he was noticing the world changing around him? How did he feel when the prospect of him having these psychic powers settled in? How was his upbringing? School? That’s most important too. What about school - how about his socialization? That’s a huge part in our personality development as well. Small things like these! Honestly I’m just looking for a paragraph or two, since the last two large paragraphs are practically him obtaining his Cyndaquil compared to small segments above. More Saru and his psychological process in order to solidify his current personality as described above! I know you can do this easily.

Lastly, for your ”Pokedex” perhaps check out one more time the ”Common Application Template” provided. There are two examples by simply scrolling up and it will literally tell you how to fill out your Pokedex! You’re very close but the % will play a large roll, and especially the EXP Gauge. Also, if you would like, check out ”Accepted Characters” for further assistance!

Please post a reply when any changes have been done. If you have any other questions you know how to get us! You got this; good luck. ♥
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31 May 2015, 09:53 PM



First off for his ”Height” and ”Weight” around that age and how he was described as feminine and athletic, please add in around ten to thirteen pounds of your choosing to make him a bit more healthier for trainers in Godai unless specifically specified or else he might a tad bit underweight!

// I added 11 lbs.

I must note that you did a great job well down for his ”Eyes”!

// Danke ♥

Oh, I would suggest checking/proof reading your profile. There’s very few, but I caught a few spacing errors.

// I believe I caught/fixed them all? I can't see anymore at-least.

I must also say that I absolutely adore his ”Personality”, however I feel there’s one aspect missing that could tie this together! My suggestion would be pretty much what his morals and beliefs are? A life motto that he lives by perhaps? Something he lives by and won’t budge no matter what? Or even perhaps his views on Mankind, Pokemonkind, or even how he feels about himself as a whole? Something like that!

// Again, danke >~< .I inserted a bit near the end about a quote from his father and his views/morals on lifes pacing. If that's not sufficient just let me know and I'll add more!


Okay, so I also think his ”History” is darling but to be blunt, there’s still not much I can tell to how he grew up to be this wonderful person you described for his ”Personality”! How was his relationship with his family? You noted that there was a time he broke his leg - how did that play into his history? For most children it would be a traumatic event for them, however Saru definitely keeps pushing on - why is this? How? What were - if any at all - inner turmoils or adrenaline rushes that went through his head before he was forced to mellow out? How was his childhood in a nutshell? There are things he did but not necessarily the emotional to personality development within it. How did he feel when he was noticing the world changing around him? How did he feel when the prospect of him having these psychic powers settled in? How was his upbringing? School? That’s most important too. What about school - how about his socialization? That’s a huge part in our personality development as well. Small things like these! Honestly I’m just looking for a paragraph or two, since the last two large paragraphs are practically him obtaining his Cyndaquil compared to small segments above. More Saru and his psychological process in order to solidify his current personality as described above! I know you can do this easily.

// I added a bit through out his story to make the breaking of his leg play a larger role in his life. Both as a personal development and the reason behind his choice of hobby in swimming. I made sure to mention schooling as well and socialization with other kids, both prior to and after his personality develops further.

//Ah...as for the Cyndaquil bit being two paragraphs. I confess I find Cyndaquil to be the pinnacle of adorable(Raw masculine statement right there) and went a tad overboard on writing the experience.


Lastly, for your ”Pokedex” perhaps check out one more time the ”Common Application Template” provided. There are two examples by simply scrolling up and it will literally tell you how to fill out your Pokedex! You’re very close but the % will play a large roll, and especially the EXP Gauge. Also, if you would like, check out ”Accepted Characters” for further assistance!

// I believe I fixed it all? I used the template and a few completed ones to reference it. If I need to make anymore changes just let me know!
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Yeeeee fabtacular edits! I love how view on life~!

If there's one more thing to fix is that there's a random "[ / b]" tag on the bottom of the profile. And if you can unbold the numbers in your stats!

Regardless -

1/2 Approval. Mighty fine job. ♥
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Woot! ♥ Changed those little things you mentioned as well! -Hype intensifies.-
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