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Trainer Profile Character Name:Mikaias Evergreen Nickname:Silverius Gender:Male Age:17 Trainer Class:Conduit (description in history) Height: 6'0" Weight:158 lbs Hair Color & Style: Blonde hair caress his head, at a medium length. It lays flat against his head. It has small waves running through it. The intensity of the blonde changes throughout his head, the end of hair being the darks and the roots being the lightest. Eyes:Pale Blue Clothing/Accessories:On top of his lays a grey skull cap, he allows some of skull cap to stick off from his head. His wears a grey shirt with a plaid jacket, that he calls," The Lumberjack". Finally his legs are graced with loose jean. Chucks are wore on his feet.[/b] General Appearance: Mikaias has a different appearance than most. He is muscular and he is hardy look to him. He wears a single silver Pauldron over his suit coat with his emblem on it. Without getting to know him one might assume he is insane. He walks like an insane and it is said that he has the banter. Also He has scars on his right and left hand but mostly on his right. ![]() Hometown:Kotoba City, Godai Personality: Mikaias is a extrovert, and despises being alone. He often keep all of his Pokemon out of their balls so he can be with them. Mikaias is also a romantic and is trying to find a girl to be The World's Greatest Pokemon Trainer/Breeder Couple. He is a leader and tries his better to lead to the best of his abilities. Other than this he suffers from White Knight Syndrome, the need to be heroic and do the right thing usually caused be a previous evil, and other recurring mental plagues. These are only noticeable when you known him for a long time. He is trying to achieve mental clarity. Finally he is a ENFP, The ENFP personality is a true free spirit. They are often the life of the party, but unlike Explorers, they are less interested in the sheer excitement and pleasure of the moment than they are in enjoying the social and emotional connections they make with others. Charming, independent, energetic and compassionate, the 7% of the population that they comprise can certainly be felt in any crowd.. Although Mikaias is not open minded. Once he has a opinion he sticks to it. History: His father was the Conduit Grandmaster. A Conduit is a Pokemon trainer that generally search for four types Pokemon: Electric, Dragon, Psychic, and Ghost. The Conduit's purpose is to combat the "teams", in addition it acts as a defense against poacher and Pokemon Slavers, in addition they try to achieve harmony with Pokemon, making them a behave as one mind. The Conduit Orders main enemy was a poacher team, named Team Aero, and their leader Magnum. Magnum want to capture Mikaias and his father, Vorrok due to their psychic abilities. One misty morning, Magnum and Team Aero enter without anyone's knowledge into the Conduit's base. He and his team placed incendiary bombs in base. Then he detonated them from the top down. His plan worked, because he finally got the attention of the Grandmaster. Team Aero was defeated but Magnum stood, Magnum unleashed his Aggron, Calamity. Mikaias wanted to help but, he was seven and didn't have a Pokemon. Finally, the battle was decided not by true battle but, with the flaming debris coming down their heads. He decided that all of the event that transpired were his fault, which was the beginning of his White Knight Syndrome. The New Grandmaster, Rorin, decided that if he could take a step back off Order then maybe Mikaias would be okay. Rorin decided to become his legal guardian and send him to school. School was not interesting to Mikaias. All he care about was the Order's business. This angered Rorin, so he suspended him. This made Mikaias more focused in his school work and school in general. For the first time in his life he acted his age. He became every popular at his school. When he was in his "troubled years" a Pokemon Trainer Couple came to his school, they explained their abilities based only their partner ship. His excited him and he became a romantic. He could got anyone he wanted but, he decided that she had to perfect. This feeling expanded more and more of the years. When was ten and found a Gastly just staring at him. The Gastly was frightened and it was lost. Mikaias was comforted it, but it did say anything. He played with it for 7 years after that day and it said nothing. On the anniversary of that day, Rorin entered his room and placed the Pauldron of the Conduit, on his shoulder. Rorin told him to left this place, become a full fledged Conduit, and collect the badges. When Rorin left, Gastly finally spoke. Since then, Mikaias has give it the name: Silence. Mikaias packed his clothes and left the citadel. He smiled back at his home. He knew when he returned, he wouldn't have everything he everything he ever wanted, but everything he needed. Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer Advancement Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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8 Jun 2015, 01:14 PM Post #2 | ||||
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Hey Atkins! I guess I'll call you that in order to stop confusion between you and the other Silver lol. Anyway, lets get started ^^
We've got a little bit of work to do, and I thank you for your patience. It may be beneficial to read through the regarding the Stats again, as this will walk you through step by step. Maybe also take a look at a few accepted characters, here (I & I) are two of my own characters which you can use as an example of how to complete things like the pokedex. Lastly, take a look at the Common Application Mistakes page which will explain some of these posts and help you out a bit more. Let us know on the chat or post a reply to let us know when you've updated everything above. Thanks for your patience, and I look forwards to seeing Mikaias accepted soon ^^ Edited by Riffraff, 8 Jun 2015, 01:16 PM.
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12 Jun 2015, 08:20 PM Post #3 | ||||
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[url=Character URL here]Mhttp://w11.zetaboards.com/Pokemon_Godai/topic/11182688/1/#new[/url] • Pokemon Trainer • Total EXP Gained: 0 • Dians: *1000* • Location: Queen's Beckoning, Godai. CHARACTER’s Pokemon
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13 Jun 2015, 08:56 AM Post #4 | ||||
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Hey! So, most of Riff's comments still hold. You have a bunch of broken code. What truly is an ENFP? Personality still needs more fleshing out. Same with History. And the PokeProfile I don't mean to be rude or curt, but it would really help if you read and truly took a look at other characters' profiles. Look at their format, content and overall readability. Go section by section and if you need a step-by-step help, next time I see you in the CBox, just say "Help me with Mika!" and i'll know what you mean. You can also PM me, or any mod for that matter, ookay? ;> I love Mika already, but he can be soooo much spiffier! So, please check out other profiles. Once you do that, please respond back here once you need our assistance again. Edited by Wremn, 13 Jun 2015, 08:57 AM.
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13 Jun 2015, 11:15 AM Post #5 | ||||
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I'm not seeing much change, Atkins. Recheck my reply which I mentioned before, because we still need the clothing, hair, and general appearance expanded. Use my older reply as a check list and try and take it step by step. I know you can do it, and thanks for your patience ^^ |
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13 Jun 2015, 05:04 PM Post #7 | ||||
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Okay. There is a lot more work to be done as far as formatting, grammar, and overal content, but I will let the other mods handle that. You cannot make such bold sweeping moves to alter or augment the setting as you have done. We do not need or want any lore of a new group of people called "Conduits" and if we did, the amount of work you and I would have to do to include them is more than we can offer any individual member. The same goes with this Team Aero. They cannot exist in our setting. Including them is asking for exception from our entire site plot. Moving to more general terms, you write like you're doing storyboarding for a shounen anime. That is to say, you make very general ideas that are needlessly epic and do not include much if any depth to a character. We can work with you on this issue, but you need to be a little more willing to take our criticism and make changes. Until then we cannot accept your character. |
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