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Calder Saviel
Topic Started: 9 Jun 2015, 02:50 AM (142 Views)
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Character Name: Calder Saviel
Gender:Male
Age:19
Trainer Class:Pokemon Trainer

Height:6'1"
Weight:84 kgs
Hair Color & Style:Deep brown, straight. Near shoulder length at back but a but shorter up front. Parts on the right.
Eyes:Brown eyes, slight green/yellow tint near the sclera.
Clothing/Accessories:A brown sleeveless jacket over a white longsleeve shirt with blue jeans and black trainers. Not really a fashionista of sorts, this being his general outfit.
General Appearance:A kind of angular, fair face, especially for a male. Generally a relaxed facial expression, eyebrows just slightly raised. A single silver band earring in his left ear, barely noticeable underneath his hair. A somewhat slender body despite a few years of farm work, and often sloches a bit, eyes almost permanently affixed to the ground when alone.


Hometown:Wisteur town.
Personality: Calder is a very, very easygoing person, almost too much. Prefers not to handle problems rather than let them sort themselves out. Can be a hard worker if he is sufficiently invested in the task at hand, but that doesn't happen often, if at all. Interested in learning for it's own sake. Calm to a fault, but difficult to be close to, almost because of this. Makes friends easily, but doesn't make more out of relationships than that.

Often retreats into his music, especially in times of stress or when alone, and can almost enter a blind trance when his buds are in, becoming unreactive to the world outside, but can be snapped back with the proper stimuli (A finger snap, his name, etc.)

When with friends, he opens up a bit more, and can even be a bit over the top, reacting highly to situations and stimuli, which a lot of people have found fun to provoke. Not very good at making threats or at high-tier battles, but does have some grasp on the basics of stratagems. Oftentimes when faced with difficulty, he folds easily, giving people what they want unless it’s important to him.

History:Hardly any to speak of. A family born in Wisteur didn't exactly lend itself to an exciting childhood. He grew up almost completely normally, at least by the pokémon standard. Rather than race out of his home at the average 13, however, he chose to remain with his somewhat ageing parents, assisting with the farm work more and more as time went on.

His schooling was rather basic, and he relied more on the adults of Wisteur to teach him about a lot about people, and he was imparted with lessons he would keep for life- Respect, honesty and more than a few ideals about enjoying oneself about duty, which supplemented his already lax attitude towards elbow grease. By 14, he was already a somewhat strange child by wisteur standards- Not so much hardworking rather than airheaded, spending a lot of time lost in thought, music in his ears and thoughts splitting and dividing in his mind and he chased rabbit holes into his conscious, wondering and supposing rather than working or planning.

At the age of 15, he began thinking about striking out on a journey of his own, taking an active interest in pokémon training. As a farmer, most of the pokémon he'd worked with were farmers rather than battlers, and his experience was very limited. Occasionally, he'd meet a trainer wandering through, oftentimes lost, or on their way to a more exciting town- Wisteur wasn't known for it's burgeoning battle scene- but it was enough to fuel Calders interest, and with every rare trainer who passed through, he learned more about the ways of pokémon training and battles.

Finally, at age 19, his parents sold off the majority of their farm, being too old to continue their work as farmers. While this brought them comfortable wealth to continue living alongside any pensions, Calder found himself uncomfortable with the sudden lack of work, and thus, he struck out with barely 6 pokeballs, a standard issue 'dex and some saved up poké to his name.

From Wisteur, he began his journey south, towards the familiar, but slightly more exciting city of Kotoba…

Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Posted Image Journal
Posted Image Holocaster
Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Ralts
Caught at Level 5



Gender:Male
Type:Psychic/Fairy
Ability:Synchronise
Height:1' 4"
Weight:14.6 lbs
Health: Weak
EXP Rate:Slow
EXP Gauge: (6/10)
EXP Gained:
Level:5 0
Division: D10
Total Stats:
  • Attack: 5
  • Defense: 5
  • Sp. Attack: 11 (24%)
  • Sp. Defense: 8
  • Speed: 10

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Growl
4.Confusion

Unique Moves:
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Item:N/A


PC Box: Stored Pokemon



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Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by Cider, 10 Jun 2015, 04:21 AM.
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Nooope

Heya Cider! We already got acquainted and I'm technically takling to you right now in the Cbox, however as the rules above here states, because this is still a WIP, I will be moving this to "Incomplete Characters".

When you have believed that you completed this application simply just post a reply right here and then we can get crackin and it will be moved back to "Character Applications". Until then, good luck!
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Thanks for the update! I think it's waaaay more complete than it was before, What should I improve?
Edited by Cider, 9 Jun 2015, 04:16 AM.
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Alrighty Cider! I'm glad you could make it to the critiquing portion of making a character. What you have is already so good, and I'm here to help you spiff up your chara even more so you can gain your 2 approvals. Then onto rping! But first things first,

Let's begin!

For starters, please change your weight into lbs.

Then add a little more to your Eyes description. Add details about the eye brow shape and general eye shape, if he wears glasses/contacts etc.

For you Clothing/Accessories, I love how you added his general outfit, but what else does he wear? During the Summer/Winter seasons, does he remove/add any layers? What kind of shoes does he wear? Socks? Watches? Ahaha, go all out with description, especially since you don't have a picture of him.

The same goes for your General Appearance. What is his skin tone? Does he often smile? Does he have any other distinguishing characteristics, like his walk? Description, description, description! If you need any assistance finding an image, there are many site members that would love to help you. Even if it's just to use as a reference image to be able to describe your character more.

Your Hometown should also say, Wisteur Town, East Godai.



Now onto Personality!

First of all, I forgot to say how much I love the name Calder~ Anyway. Your personality is great, but again, I have a few more questions to help you flesh it out even more.

Beginning with his laid-back attitude, does this often cause stress for him once deadlines approach and pass? What tasks does is he able to sufficiently invest himself in? What are his passions? Additionally, what about him allows him to make friends so easily? Does he have a certain irresistible charm/humor? Why does he not decide to further chase his relationships?

What kind of music is he into? Does he create music himself, or just listen?

As for when he is with his friends, when does he associate himself with them? Does he have a lot of shallow friends and only a couple of close friends? What is his relationship with pokemon? SO many questions that can be answered, and I hope you have fun fleshing out his personality even more!



Onto History!

Wow. I'm impressed. ^^ But at this point, I'm sure you know what I'm going to ask. Yes. More questions!

What did Calder do in the first 13 years of his life? IS this when he gained his passion for music? How early did he begin to work on the farm? Did he have a good relationship with his parents? The neighbors? Was he always so lax? The same goes for the rest of his history. "Wisteur standards" does not really cut it, since not necesarilly apply to all the trainers in the area. What caused him to begin pokemon battling, since he was apparently inclined to work. How did his parents/farmer friends react to his decision to stop helping them and go onto a life of battling? Was this the cause of his parents being unable to work too? I'm just barely breaking the surface here, so don't be afraid to elaborate!


Now for your PokeProfile!

You almost got it!
  • Your EXP Gauge should be (7/9).
  • EXP Gained should be 0
  • Total Stats should be 45
  • Your percentage is correct, but you still have 15 stat points to allot to the other stats! Yay!





Phew! So that may seem like alot Cider, but if you stick with what I have to say I promise that you'll receive your next approvals soon, and I also promise that your rp experience with you character will be much more rewarding! Make sure you post here with the changes you make, and another mod or I will be able to respond~ Hope to give you my approval soon, bud!


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