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Kamon Jiha
Topic Started: 25 Jun 2015, 01:00 PM (113 Views)
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Character Name: Kamon Jiha
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer

Height: 5'1''
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color & Style: Wild black hair that he keeps shaggy. It doesn't get in his eyes but he also doesn't have much use for it being styled. He wears it messy and wild almost all of the time.
Eyes: Deep indigo eyes that reflect his determination. Fairly large size for his boyish face.
Clothing/Accessories: His most notable pieces of clothing are his goggles and his necklace, both given to him as a youngster. He is never without these two accessories, wearing the necklace all the time and only taking the goggles off to clean himself.

Due to West Godai's heat he dresses fairly lightly. With a blue windbreaker style jacket with a red stripe up either arm that he wears open with the sleeves rolled up, doing it up when cold or needing to protecting himself from the desert winds. He doesn't wear a shirt under the jacket with the fear of overheating.

He wears loose fitting brown shorts that are durable and versatile and brown boot like shoes that protect and keep his feet ventilated. He wears white socks and a white bandages around his stomach, although they get dirty quickly he attempts to keep himself as clean as possible.
General Appearance:
Small for his age he stands at just over 5 feet, compared to his peers he is much shorter and less developed. His small size combined with his baby face gives him an appearance younger than he actually is. He tans well and because of his life in Weswell he has a healthy tan, which is one of his more attractive features. More than often he wears a smile on his face, but when in a pokemon battle he becomes serious and the determination can be seen on his face and especially in his eyes.

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Hometown: West Godai, Weswell Town
Personality:
Kamon has two distinctive personalities, normally he is relaxed and easy going but when he gets serious he becomes an entirely different person. Although not split personality he just knows how to get focused on something and make it happen. Typically he’s easy going and quick to laugh or make a joke, he’s friendly and has no problem making friends with new people. A believer in helping those who can’t help themselves he lends himself to help whenever the situation arises, if he can make things even a little easier on someone he’s made a difference in his mind.

Disillusioned to the world he sees everyone as being innately good and thus is often taken advantage of. Putting himself out there to help anyway he can has caused him to be taken advantage of on more than one occasion. His weakness is girls, especially those his age and older, he has a soft spot for women of all types. Being at the age where he naturally is becoming more drawn to them he is willing to go to great lengths for a woman he finds himself attracted to. However with this he is prone to jealousy and heartbreak, not understanding fully why he is not looked upon in the same light he seems them in. He has a reputation for being overly emotional and sensitive when it comes to matters of the heart.

When serious there is a night and day difference between what he is normally like. A look of determination and crosses his eyes and nothing will get in his way when this is the case. Although it’s rare for him to enter states such as that he is most often absorbed by intense battles than anything else. Not considering for a moment that giving up is an option once he is overcome with the urge to defeat someone he will go to great lengths, pushing himself further than he thought possible, to overcome them.

Coming with those two aspects of his personality comes a darker side of depression and passive aggressive behavior that he hates about himself. Closing himself off from the world and refusing help from anyone its just a depression that he needs to work himself out of.

History:
Growing up in Weswell was just about as exciting as it sounds. Growing up just he and his dad he Kamon was raised much like any other Weswell boy. Going to the small rural school being groomed to work in the mines with the older men. As a youngster he spent his time between living out in the country with his dad and heading into the central region of Godai to visit his mother. Captivated by the Pokemon battles he saw when he was in central Godai he quickly grew into aspirations of being a trainer. Dividing his time between his parents he always enjoyed the time with his mother more because he got to be around trainers and Pokemon moreso than he was in the country. In Weswell he only ever really saw Pokemon helping with the mining and work, it was a much smaller town vibe and there was much less frivolity and luxury out in the West.

Between worker strikes and visits to his mothers in the cities Kamon didn’t have a whole lot of time to actually work in the mines, which was something that he didn’t mind. As much as he enjoyed being around his friends and the people in Weswell there was always a longing for something greater than mining offered. As he began to enter his teenage years he was outgrown by his peers and came under considerable fire for his baby face and small stature. This added to his feeling of being ostracised moreso than he already was. But following a chance encounter with a Chimchar things began to turn around, he and the fiery chimp Pokemon developed a strong bond quickly. It seemed as though he had finally found a friend that saw him for who he was. A companion who stuck with and helped Kamon with whatever he could help with. A little guy much like his trainer Kamon began calling Chimchar his ‘bro’, a nickname that Chimchar seemed to enjoy. Together, the two of them formed a solid bond that carried them forward towards a future more suited to what Kamon was hoping for himself. Together, with his bros, the two of them set out from Weswell to begin a Pokemon adventure unlike any other.



Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:
- Title: (#/#)

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Chimchar
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Kamina
Gender: Male
Type: Fire
Ability: Blaze
Height: 1' 8"
Weight: 13.7 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (#/#)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats:
  • Attack: 11
  • Defense: 11 (20%)
  • Sp. Attack: 11
  • Sp. Defense: 11 (20%)
  • Speed: 11

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Leer
2. Scratch

Unique Moves:
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PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Alrighty there Gurren! Welcome to Godai, it’s a pleasure to meet you! This is a rather great start to your profile, but there’s just a few things to fix, but I’ll guide you through it.

First, let me direct you go to ”Character Application Template” to simply review once more, like for instance how to properly fill out the “Pokedex”. That and also, for you to check out ”Accepted Characters” to get a feel of what we look for and how others do their profiles! That said, let’s begin -

For Kamon’s ”Weight” please convert kg into lb (pounds) in order to keep the application system as uniform as possible. You may find this conversion through Google and the like.

For his ”Hair [...]” what about its length? Then, for his ”Eyes” is there anything else you can tell us about it? What does ‘fairly large’ mean? How high up are his eyes on his forehead? What about any complimentary eyebrows? Is one eye larger than the other? Etcetc?

For his ”General Appearance”, what does it mean to be “less developed”? Do you mean specific arm lengths? Calves or thigh thickness? Abdomen equivalence? Waist to chest ratio? How about people first impressions when they see him upon a glance? Does he walk a certain way? If he’s short, does he tend to walk faster than the average norm? Does he tend to blend into the crowd? Etcetc.

For his ”Hometown”, I’m just being extremely picky, but please reverse ‘West Godai, Weswell Town’ to ‘Weswell Town, West Godai’.

Let’s zoom in to his Personality and History -

Let me just say that I think his ”Personality” is just darling, but in order to make him into a more wholesome character I’ll ask the following questions. Keep in mind you don’t literally have to answer them all, but use them as guidelines to help further Kamon. Think on a more psychological process when reviewing looking at this. When does he know to become serious and what feelings go rampant in his head to allow him this sudden change of focus? For example - like me, I can easily do this but what goes through my head on a cognitive level is the fact that my entire being feels that it is a life or death moment for me even if I know it’s for a simple test. What about Kamon? What is the cognitive process that goes through his mind for him to better situate himself for the obstacle at hand? Constantly ask yourself ‘why’ and ‘how’. Why is he the easy going and quick to laugh/make a joke type of person? What does he feel from seeing the others laugh at his jokes? If they don’t, then how does it make Kamon feel? For what reasons does she choose to have this trait in his personality? It’s almost how you’ve explained it in that last sentence for the first paragraph, but don’t be afraid to go in deeper! I love everything else! However, what else can you tell us about him? What are his other strengths and weaknesses? How does he cope with other emotions that might take over aside from being happy and easy going? Is there something he can’t stand to see and will butt in no matter what? How does being taken advantage more than usual affect him on a psychological process? Again, don’t be afraid to really dish out those details!

The same applies for his ”History” thought definitely straightforward and to the point, I feel you can add in much more. What does it mean to be raised like “any other Weswell boy”? What did he do specifically? How did he allow any emotional, personal, and even physical developmental growth to happen as he goes through the stages of his life? How did he feel as he did these activities? What other experiences, obstacles, and events shaped his life to how you described him today? Whether or not they’re good or bad will shape a person no matter how dull said experience was! In what ways was he captivated? To Kamon, what does it mean to be captivated? For me, my heart starts beating uncontrollably and I obtain a strong adrenaline-like urge to run towards that goal whereas my friend simply buckles down and isolates himself in his room for days on ends. This sound like he lived a mundane life - so how did Kamon feel throughout those days? How was his relationship with his father? Mother? Friends? How was school? Most of our socialization stems to what we learned from school more so than at home since that’s how we spent the majority of our time. How was he and his teachers? Did he make friends? If not, why? How does any of this tie in with his current ”Personality”? Remember that you’re explaining nearly 14 years of his life into mere words so more about Kamon and less about how he obtained his Chimchar. Remember, your ”History” is here to compliment your ”Personality”. Give us examples and explanations to why Kamon is the way he is - what went through his life to mold him towards the positive light rather than a negative light.

We’ll stop here and focus on the ”Pokedex” another time.

Honestly I’m just looking for a few more sentences or elaboration on his ”Personality”, however the majority of the focus should be on his ”History”. I know you can do it! You know how to reach us if you have any questions. Please post a reply here to notify us if any changes have been made. I look forward to your edits! ♥
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