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Trainer Profile Character Name: Clay Rogers Nickname: Craz Gender: Male Age: 18 Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer Height: 6'2 Weight: 180 Hair Color & Style: Long Black Straight Hair, its always very messy Eyes: Small cold blue eyes, when he stares at someone that person just gets a chill. Clothing/Accessories: He wears the same black jacket with every outfit. Only thing that really changes in his outfits is his shirts and jeans. He puts on a different witty graphic t-shirt everyday and just a different pair of dark jeans. He wears his black ring on his right hand which was given to him by his father. He also wears that cross earring his left ear all the time. General Appearance: Craz has a lean build to him. He has awful posture, which explains why he is always complaining about his back. You will rarely catch Craz smile, because he hardly shows any positive emotions. He mostly keeps that smirk on his face for about everything. He has a long scar across his back from an accident he was in when he was younger. That's why he tends to wear his jacket all the time because he doesn't like exposing the scar. You can also say the bad posture also came from the accident he was in. So he can't really help the poor posture. ![]() Hometown: Durskrim Town, South Godai Personality: He has a loner's mentality. Due to his parents being too busy with work, he found himself spending a lot of time alone. Which explains why he maybe so anti-social as well. After growing up and really raising himself he grew to just rely on himself for things. He never really seemed interested in seeking others for help. He feels like he can do things by himself even though he knows he can't. Only one thing could really make him smile when he was growing up and that was Pokemon. Just like every other kid he wanted a Pokemon of his own. He might not show it but he loves being around Pokemon. His dream was to always get out of his town and become a Pokemon trainer and just travel the region. No one to stop him, just him and his Pokemon on their journey. History: Ever since he was born, he really was just by himself. His parents had a nanny raise him while they were busy working and whenever they were home they would be too focus on work to ever give him attention. When his accident happened his parents only visited him in the hospital three times. While his nanny stayed and even slept at the hospital. While he was recovering at the hospital, his love for Pokemon bloomed. He would looking outside and just see all of the different types of Pokemon there were. He was amazed by how many there were. When he left the hospital, he spent most of his time on his laptop at home researching about Pokemon. His nanny would often find him asleep with his laptop on his lap. He would spend days just researching because it seemed like the information went on forever. His nanny and Pokemon seem to be the only things in his life that really meant anything to him. But eventually that all went downhill. His parents fired his nanny. The only person who took care of him and was there for him was gone. He never got a chance to ask why his parents fired her, and didn't even get a chance to say goodbye. He broke his laptop and threw it in the trash. His love for Pokemon went away with his nanny. He went into a mild depression for sometime. Until he finally realized he didn't have to live like this. The answer was so obvious, he wasn't sure why he didn't think about it before. He decided to become a Pokemon Trainer. He has been really taken care of himself and has always been able to handle anything that was thrown his way. So at age 16 he began to prepare himself for the Pokemon world and after his 18th birthday he will become a trainer. Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexTrainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0 Tier 0: - Title: (#/#) (Delete this for now, but this will be what it will look like when you are awarded AP) Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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29 Jun 2015, 10:50 PM Post #2 | ||||
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Hey there Craz! I know you're excited to get started, but I'm not really sure if this application is complete or not! Please consider the following:
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30 Jun 2015, 07:57 AM Post #3 | ||||
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I've edited it some, I believe it is ready unless I missed something! | ||||
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30 Jun 2015, 05:16 PM Post #4 | ||||
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Alrighty Craz! No, this is fine! There’s just quite a bit to go through but that’s alright, we’ll guide you through it. First off, I would highly recommend you check out ”Accepted Characters” once more, to get a feel of what we ask for, and what people tend to write down for their categories for quicker acceptance. Also, it can help you with any other inspirations as well! That said. Let’s begin - For his ”Weight” as well as his Height and age, being 180lb is quite large for someone described as “lean” as stated in his ”General Appearance”. Perhaps if you can change any of the categories mentioned or perhaps play around with it, you can make it more satisfactory to how you’d like him to be?! For his ”Eyes” and ”Hair [...]”, perhaps add in another sentence or two. How long is long? Why is it always messy? Is there anything else you can tell us about it? Does he style it? Is it dirty? Is it clean? So on and so forth? How about his eyes? How small is small? What do you mean it’s “cold”? What type of blue? The lighter it is, the less pigmentation there is making him more sensitive to light compared to those with dark brown eyes. What does it mean when he stares at someone the person “just gets a chill”? Does that mean they have to get a chill? How does that relate to real life? Does it mean his eyes are narrowed? Does he stare directly at a specific part of their body? No clue! For his ”Clothing [...]”, what else does he were? Is that literally it? What about hot weather or cold weather? Right now in Godai it’s Winter time, so would he not be cold? For his ”General Appearance”, perhaps a little more on what it means when he has bad posture? If someone has bad posture then the way they walk can easily be affected. So how does he walk? With a limp? Does he has scoliosis? What are people’s first impression of him? Does he even make an impression? Etc. Please check in which part of Godai that Durskrim Town resides for your ”Hometown”. Then let’s zoom into his Personality and History - For his ”Personality” constantly ask yourself “why” and “how” as you go through it again. Although you’ve hit the minimum I feel you can add in much more! There’s a lot of false justification here so be careful. Just because parents weren’t there, doesn’t mean Clay had to be anti social. There are plenty of people who have strong relationships with their parents and still become anti social. So in what ways did this ‘loner mentality’ come to fruition? Why didn’t he simply talk to the neighbors? Why didn’t get “get out there” instead of isolating himself at home. In what ways did he “grow up” and how did he “raise himself”? What did he do? How did he do it? Why was he not interested in seeking others for help? If he knew he can’t do things himself then how did he “raise himself”? I’m a little confused on that. If he never went outside, how did he interact and grow a love for Pokemon? Was it superficial as seen on TV? What else can we know about him? How does he view the world? How does he view himself? What are his morals or beliefs? How does he view people? Oh my goodness, so many questions! I know little to nothing about him! Think of him as a realistic person and more on his psychological process. Again please check out ”Accepted Characters” to get a much needed idea about what we look for! The same thing applies exactly to his ”History”. If he had a nanny, then there’s his reason for social construct no? How was his relationship to his nanny? What about his parents? Did he harbor ill feelings towards him because they left? Did his parents ever love him? Did they ever try to connect with him? Did he ever try to connect with him? What about school? What about friends? Why didn’t he go out of his way to make friends? Would he not process himself through the stage of loneliness and as a child attempt to reach out in some way, shape, or form? Again, if he had a nanny would he or she not teach him how to do things? What emotions ran through him from childhood to his teenage years? What accident was this? How did it affect him on a mental process? What about physical? You can’t just say someone got an accident and have it justify everything there. What did he obtain? Back injury? Spinal injury? Neck injury? Trauma injuries? What was it? When his Nanny passed away, how did it affect him on a psychological process? What did he do to recover? How did he cope? Where was his parents? Why? How? More questions! Remember that your ”History” should compliment his ”Personality”. It should tell us how Clay became who he is today! Because your Personality is severely lacking, it’s only natural that your History is too! But that’s okay! Once you add more to the top, this will follow suit. We’ll stop here and focus on your ”Pokedex” at a much later time. Regardless, I’m sure you get the gist! Again, please feel free to look at ”Accepted Characters” to see what other members must take into consideration! I feel you can easily get those points down so I look forward to your edits. Please post a reply to here once you’ve made any changes. Good luck! ♥ |
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