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Akira De-Yaru
Topic Started: 18 Jul 2015, 09:21 AM (161 Views)
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Character Name: Akira De-Yaru
Nickname: Aki
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer

Height: 5'4
Weight: 97lbs
Hair Color & Style: White, Long and spikey.
Eyes: Smoke grey.
Clothing/Accessories: Aki wears a set of red goggles upon his head as a accessory. He never actually uses them, they are simply for looks. His normal clothing include a pair of blue ripped jeans, a white shirt covered with a black denim jacket.
General Appearance: Akira is a simple boy, his face is that of someone young. He has no marks that define him as a person and would be what people considered ordinary. He is not someone who is remembered easily. Other than the color of his eyes, that is. His smoldering grey eyes are something not many people can forget, looking into them could be compared to looking into the depths of hell itself. Lifeless and dull, he doesn't seem to show any emotion. His hair is always worn pushed back due to the goggles on his head. His clothing seems to be worn slightly, his jeans are ripped up the knees but then again? He travels, wouldn't everyone look a bit beaten and torn if they traveled?

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Hometown: Tiensee town- South Godai
Personality: His personality is something that changes like the weather. At one point, he can appear to be happy and then? He can revert to his normal sheltered self. He tries to hide his emotions more than anything, even if he is a bit of a hot head at times. He will try and conceal himself from other people. Only trusting in a select few.
History: could feel the weight of his cloak pressing down on his shoulders. It was a lovely day in Tiensee Town for a trainer, the sharp bite of spring combining with the bright sun to create a faint chill. Akira's leathers and cloak wrapped his skin in a gentle warmth, but his shoulders were still hunched down.
His feet moved from wild weeds to the small clearing of beaten earth around the Inn. For the first time, he looked up, his eyes a smouldering grey. They widened when he spotted the woman standing outside of the Inn. She had short, shining gray hair and a wrinkled, round face, which was curved into a small smile. Her dress was a plain dark green with lace about the front, exactly what would be expected from a respectable matron. A Pidgey floated gently behind him, letting wisps of pink smoke drift off into the sky. There were a few more Trainers standing to the side of Akira, leaning up against the Inn or standing sharply straight as they preferred. They were all in Trainer gear and Akira felt his heart pick up a second beat as he saw the Captain among them.

His own footsteps hesitated for half a second, and then, before Sigi's questioning tendril could even touch his mind, he kept walking. He didn't look at the Guardians, but kept his eyes on the Lady until she was standing a few feet before him.

"My Lady Greene," he said, and bowed his head slightly. His eyes peeked up from under his eyelashes, the dull glassy look replaced with a flash of gold.

"Welcome back, Guardian De-Yaru" the Lady said, "You've done well, I'm sure. Now, there was something I had to talk to you about...what was it? Oh, yes, your gift."

A sharp jolt ran down his spine. Akira blinked twice and then rolled over his shoulders, glancing up at Sigi, who had settled in a position over her right shoulder. He sent a feeling that was nearly as confused and stunned as she was.

Why would I have a gift? Well, I guess Grandmother might've sent me something, but if she did, why would the Lady be giving it to me? he thought, shifting his weight as the old woman's face went blank. He could feel, through Sigi, that she was speaking with her Musharna, but the shielding the powerful psychic had was far too strong for him to even catch an inkling of what they were speaking of.

"Here we are," Lady Greene said. A pokeball floated out of an open window in the Inn and down into her outstretched hand. Akira's legs tensed and his heels lifted off the ground. A cramp twisted in his left calf and he pressed his foot flat against the earth until it stilled. The pokeball opened with a gentle tap of the Lady's hand and a small creature appeared before them. The pokemon blended in well with the dirt for a moment and then the sun seemed to turn to her directly. It shone down on her fur and it burned a brilliant black in the halo of fierce light. The curls around her face and her tail -

"I ask that you take this humble Houndour as a gift for your effort in the Rose Bowl," the Lady said, offering the pokeball to Akira. She was smiling warmly and the Guardians behind her were trading grins; it was clear that the words were a mere formality.

Akira's hands were shaking and he noticed this without thinking anything at all about it. Her mind was too filled with other thoughts, so filled Sigi couldn't get a foothold to say anything at all. She's giving me another pokemon. She's giving me a Houndour - they're common, as common as sand - for what I did in the Rose Bowl. And all the Guardians are watching me and she's giving me a Vulpix, some plain little thing that anyone can get, he thought in a circular pattern that escalated with each repetition. After a few seconds it reached a crescendo and Akira's voice trembled as she spoke, shouted.

"No, I won't take her. I won't - I don't want - "

His mouth had barely finished shaping the words when he saw lines of disbelief etch themselves over the Lady's face. The Guardians had suddenly turned restless, like Houndours waiting to be released for the hunt. Akira took one last, wide-eyed look at the scene before turning neatly on his heel and running, his cloak swirling behind him to sweep away his footprints.

Slowly, the Houndour followed.


Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Houndour
Caught at Level 5


Nickname:Jet
Gender: Female
Type:Fire/Dark
Ability: Flash Fire
Height: 2ft
Weight:2.38lbs
Health: Healthy
EXP Rate:Slow
EXP Gauge: 7/9
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats:55
  • Attack:6 # (%)
  • Defense:12 # (%)
  • Sp. Attack:17 (31%)
  • Sp. Defense:8 # (%)
  • Speed:12 # (%)

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Leer
2. Ember
3. Howl

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


Journal

Adventure Log
 
Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by BlueAkira, 18 Jul 2015, 09:32 AM.
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Hey there Blue! Welcome to Godai! I can tell you tried pretty bloody well here and it shows! This is pretty good actually. However, we do have a few guidelines and rules pertaining to this particular forum.

While this is your first RP forum, we do encourage newcomers to stick and grow as a writer. The rules may seem daunting and what we ask may seem 'farfetch'd' (HAH! ba dum tsst!) to most. However we assure you it is in our best interest to allow you to better invent your character(s) and allow you to think more critically in order to assist in reach your maximum writing potential. In the end, everything is all up to you! ♥

That said, I highly recommend that you review the following:

  • Please review the "Character Application Template" one more time. Remember how you got the template to fill out? (which you did great) Scroll up and do not skim to see how to Properly fill out the categories. There are Two beautiful examples provided, one of which is named "Luna".
  • Especially look for what is not allowed (such as dialogue and such) in the "History" portion and how to properly fill out the "Pokedex" portion.
  • Then, this is optional but still recommended - please also check out "Common Application Mistakes"
  • Lastly, I also highly highly recommend checking "Accepted Characters" to see how others have done their Applications for quicker acceptance. I would most preferably tell you to check out the "Eyes", "Hair", and what needs to be bolded and not be bolded.
Because there's just a little bit too much to be corrected, we'll stop here until you've made some more changes. If you have any further questions, please don't hesitate to ask or PM us!

Good luck! ♥
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Will correct all of this when I return from work! Any specifics would be appreciated as the common mistakes page is some what vauge!
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Ah! Sort bout that, but no worries there! As long as you look at the others I've listed you'll pass over the common mistakes easy! Take your time. I look forward to your edits~~ <3
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