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X[A]Corvin McAlister (Complete)X; [Reaped][Accepted]
Topic Started: 18 Jul 2015, 07:39 PM (445 Views)
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Character Name: Corvinus McAlister
Nickname: Corvin
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Trainer Class: Camper

Height: 5'8"
Weight: 165lbs
Hair Color & Style: Corvin's hair is a fiery copper toned red-orange, and it falls down past his shoulders when he doesn't do anything with it. If he is not wearing his signature beanie, which happens to be the color of his eyes, he typically has his hair in a high pony tail.
Eyes: Corvin's sea-foam green eyes are often described as "little half moons" in shape., though is isn't sure what that means. Corvin's fiery-toned eyebrows can be described as very "talkative," meaning that they usually give away his mood. Unlike most guys he keeps them trimmed, and well groomed.
Clothing/Accessories: Corvin typically wears blue jeans, a light brown, blue, or white short sleeve shirt, and hiking boots, with socks of course. Other than that, he keeps a backpack with him at all times that he stores his camping gear in. During the Winter, and in colder parts of Godai, Corvin wears a hoodie that has been insulated with Mareep fur, as well as a sea-foam green beanie for his ears. Corvin's backpack is forest green in color, though it has purple straps for his arms.
General Appearance: Corvin's skin is a very bright white color, even though he spends all of his time outside. This is because of his being what is regularly called a "Ginger." He has bright, fiery orange hair, and freckles of the same color covering his nose, and cheeks. He has more scars, and defining marks, than most kids his age, but that is because of his camping life style, not due to being attacked, or abused. Corvin has a severe limp in his left leg due to his accident, and is often seen using crutches to get around. Despite his limp, Corvin is always moving with what can be described as a "pep" in his step.

Corvin


Hometown: Scurarte Town, East Godai
Personality: Corvin is an extremely happy and outgoing kid. Corvin puts a real effort into being happy, having learned the hard way that for him, optimism and a positive outlook will help things to turn out alright. Depression and futilism got him nowhere, but when Corvin worked hard and fought for something he desperately wanted, he came out the other end a better, more accomplished person! And all it took for Corvin to do it was the courage to take a chance on himself, and believe that things might turn out okay. Since learning that lesson, Corvin has always worked hard not only to improve himself as a trainer and a person, but also to make the people and Pokemon around him feel better, too. Despite this, happiness and optimism are not defining traits of Corvin's characters so much the pursuit of those things in himself and others could be. Some of the things that can, no matter what, make Corvin happy are sea salt ice cream, bacon, and seeing Pokemon he has never seen before. He loves the outdoors, and refuses to sleep inside any building, even during bad weather, unless the people or Pokemon he's with need it.

Most people who deal with Corvin would say that he is good at heart, believing every one deserves respect, and kindness, until they prove otherwise. Expanding on that belief, he is wholeheartedly against exploiting Pokemon. This means that he believes they should not be put on "display" in contests, or other such ways. Some are confused by the idea that he holds this belief but still battles with his Pokemon, but Corvin doesn't battle for glory or recognition; rather, the act of battling is a way of making his Pokemon stronger and better, and helping to improve the bond he forms with them, too! Battling, for Corvin, is a deeply personal way of empowering the relationship he has with his beloved partners. He is a firm believer in "living the way nature intended," which is why he tries to befriend his Pokemon before using a Pokeball to capture them.

Kindly and good-natured though he may be, Corvin is very protective of his worldview, which attempts to assume the best in everyone and believe things will turn out alright. Corvin's response to this worldview being threatened is a true display of his character. When it is threatened, such as when Pokemon are abused or Corvin himself is bullied or made fun of (especially for his limp,) or even when Corvin finds himself trapped in a hard situation where he can't escape, his temper flares and he begins to act up, sometimes even violently. Corvin takes no pride in it, but he is exceptionally good at finding the small weaknesses in a person's emotional armor, and can exploit them to hurt people with a few rash words should his temper escape his control. On rare occasions, Corvin has been known to explode with physical violence. When this happens, he usually sobers quickly thereafter, and attempts to make amends. The only thing more frightening to Corvin that his worldview being threatened is being the person to threaten it. Corvin also fears riding bikes, being in deep water, and dragon Pokemon, and doesn't deal well with the threat of losing the use of his legs again well.
Corvin loves all kinds of Pokemon, though Flying types are his favorite. However, he is afraid of Dragon type Pokemon, and Pokemon resembling spiders. While Corvin does identify as "straight," he is still young, and does not know exactly what he likes in people of either gender. Corvin learns best by watching examples and trying to imitate results, which can make the process difficult because of how his lifestyle often keeps him from other people to present learning opportunities. Failing that, Corvin practices persistently, and tries hard until he succeeds.
History:

History


Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:
- Title:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Spearow
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Sniper
Gender: Male
Type: Normal/Flying
Ability: Keen Eye
Height: 1'0''
Weight: 4.4 lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium Fast
EXP Gauge: (7/9)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D9
Total Stats: 50
  • Attack: 15 (30%)
  • Defense: 6
  • Sp. Attack: 6
  • Sp. Defense: 6
  • Speed: 17 (33%)

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Growl
1. Peck
5. Leer

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


Journal

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Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by GenGara, 14 Aug 2015, 05:04 PM.
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Hey Gen! We've got a few edits to do, so lets get to them so we can get Corvin into Godai! ^^

  • For his Clothing, is that all he wears? Does he wear the same thing in the extreme heat or cold of Godai?

  • For his General Appearance, maybe talk about his body language and etc a little more. For example, his posture, the way he walks, just what makes him look completely different to every other person who he might encounter.

  • His Personality is pretty good, but I think you need to include some more of his traits and such. Does he have any other big fears? Is there anything that can make him happy, sad etc? Does he have any characteristics or traits which make him unique?

  • His History is pretty good too! However, there are a few things that I think might need expanding and adding. Firstly, the accident is quite a big thing that happened to him in his life, but he's walking now almost as if it didn't happen. Even though it did take him a few years to recoup, I think he would still be in a position where he would need something like a cane or crutches to support him. It could be worth maybe moving the accident back a year or two to give him that extra time to strengthen himself back into a near-perfect condition.

    Maybe expand on how this accident affected the rest of his life too. Did he have to be homeschooled or did he drop out of school completely? Did he do anything to try and rid himself of the depression? It would also be really good to mention the way he learned of his other likes and dislikes here. Naturally, the dragon thing is done down to a tee, and the spider thing can be understood, but it would also be nice to see how he learned of his likes and such.

    That's all I think needs touching upon for now. Sorry if it seems much, but I'm sure you can do it! Thanks for your patience, and we'll take a look once you've edited Corvin once more. ^^
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Ummm how's that? :)
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Alrighty Gen! With an already approved character, I'm sure it won't be any trouble to add extra details.

I'll just be short an concise with what I would like to see changed~

  • Make sure his height says 5'8". You forgot the (")

  • Eyes: First of all, explain his eyes more. What shape are they? Ovalish? Roundish? How about his eyebrows?

  • Hair Color & Style: What does his hair look like when he does do things to it? Is it always concealed by some head-garment?

  • Clothing: Describe his backpack. Does he always wear a head-piece as depicted in the picture?

  • General Appearance: How does his limp affect the way he carries himself? Does he lug himself around like a sad camper, or does he still have a kick in his step despite the limp?

  • Personality: As a happy-go lucky kid, how does Corvin take to those who restrict or even frown upon his personality? As a fourteen year-old with depression (that is a very specific and intricate diagnosis), how does this affect his relationships/how he interacts with others? Depression is a state in which a person actually does not feel. Thus if you were to label it as depression, then his happy-go-lucky attitude would only be happy to an extent. To what extent does he find interest in the activities he is pursuing? Does he mostly keep to himself and have hobbies that he participates on his own? Does he actively push others away or pursue their attention? As the youngest of 8 (wowzas) how does this affect the way he acts? What are his aspirations/what makes him truly happy? How does he consciously act to defend his beliefs even when he isn't fired up?
    Stuff like this seems like alot to add, but with depression being a factor in the equation, it leaves alot of open-ended questions. Even if he isn't "depressed" answering the questions and adding a couple of paragraphs would be beneficial.

  • History: The facts are there, but how did the events in Corvin's life cause him to grow as a person? Was he pampered before he had to put on responsibility both in school and in tending to the pokemon? Onto the incident and it leading to depression, how did Corvin deal specifically with being disabled? In pushing his parents away, how did this affect him mentally in addition to emotionally? Were his other siblings any help at all in this time? How exactly did his sister assist him in a way no one else could? What did he spend his hours doing, as a depressed child? And as an adolescent teen, how slowly did he grow accustomed to being able to walk and function again? It seems like I'm asking alot, but all I really want is a few more sentences to the paragraphs you already have, describing the why along the what.

  • As for your Spearow:
    • His ability should be Keen Eye
    • His Speed stat should be 17.


So that's it! It may look like a lot, but you got this! If you need any clarification or have any further questions regarding anything, just respond to this thread and/or PM me directly. You'll get your approvals soon~
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his ability is keen eye but i will make the edits soon i am at work on a flip phone. Oh and he isnt deppressed any longer. I should clarify that
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Oh oops. I misread his name as his ability. *facepoms* Respond here when you've made your changes then~
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Personality is done, i will keep working on the rest of it.

Everything is done.
Edited by GenGara, 12 Aug 2015, 06:45 AM.
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Thanks for the extended patience. Sorry to keep you waiting for so long. You've done everything I've mentioned, and pretty much everything Wremn mentioned.

Here's approval 1/2

Again, sorry for keeping you so long.
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I'll go ahead and accept this since I feel it's good on my end! Thanks for being so patient! ♥

Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp.

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Your character has officially been put up for Reaping. If you wish to make use of their belongings for another character, please submit a modification. If not, please post in the GTN so that others may make use of the character.
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