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Yoichi Moriyama; #MY BODY IS READY
Topic Started: 9 Aug 2015, 04:13 PM (209 Views)
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Character Name: Yoichi Moriyama
Nickname: Yo-Yo
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Trainer Class: Pokefan

Height: 5'8"
Weight: 159 lbs

Birthday: October 20th, 180 AG
Astrological Sign (Western): Trudusa the Jellicent
Astrological Sign (Eastern): Year of the Milotic

Color: White-gray (#D9D9D9)

Hometown: Metropolitan Avenue, Union, Central Godai


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General Appearance



Personality



General Information

Additional Information




History


Childhood

Teenhood

Metropolitan Avenue



Relationships


Relationships (Family)

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Inventory


Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Trainer Advancement

Advancement Points: 0
Tier 0:


Pokemon


Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Purrloin
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Chime
Gender: Female
Type: Dark
Ability: Limber
Height: 1'4"
Weight: 22.3 lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium Fast
EXP Gauge: (7/9)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 11
  • Defense: 6
  • Sp. Attack: 11
  • Sp. Defense: 5
  • Speed: 17 (30)

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Scratch
3. Growl

Unique Moves:
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Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by PrincessPotoo, 13 Aug 2015, 09:47 PM.
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Nooope

Forgive me if I'm wrong, but from what I read in the Cbox, is this application completed? We have no clue whether or not something is completed until the OP posts a reply telling us that it is completed!

If your character /is/ completed, simply post a reply here saying so, and we will easily move it to "Character Applications". :D
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Ahh, yes!! This app is good to go, fhakjdfsa ; A ; !
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Alright, I'm impressed! I can see you've put a great deal of work into this, so here's approval 1/2! ^^
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Welcome back Potoo! Good lord this is also nearly perfect! However I’m going to be that person and ask for just a /little bit/ more! Since it’s so short, I might as well just list them!

  • Expand just a bit more on his ”General Appearance”. Perhaps add in things like what his first impressions are on people? Is he noticeable with those appearances, why or why not? Any quirks or unique physicalities that stand out to others and maybe not him? Etc.
  • Just add a few more sentences or a paragraph in his ”Personality” explaining how he feels about himself with his positive/negative traits. Or even, are there any other morals and internal/external beliefs that he has? How does he view the world or mankind in general?
  • Elaborate more of the psychological issues going in Yoichi’s head during the downhill process of his father’s health within the ”History” @ Teenhood. I say this because based on his personality, it would appear this event is one of the more mental struggles that really challenges Yoichi’s thought process and who he chooses to be. What methods of how did he keep himself positive? Did he fail once or twice? If not, why? If so, why? How did he cope and how did he continue to progress onwards? How did it further affect his mental state for the rest of his daily activities for each following year; so on and so forth.
  • For the ”Pokedex” you forgot a % after the (30), and your "Total Stats" only add up to 50. You have 5 more points to distribute.
That’s it! Whenever you have made any changes, please post a reply to notify me! Good luck! ♥

PS - The History was just darling.
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