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Cheyenne Greer
Topic Started: 14 Oct 2015, 07:23 PM (127 Views)
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Character Name: Cheyenne Greer
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Trainer Class: Pokémon Trainer

Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 115 lbs
Hair Color & Style: Honey blonde and simply straight. It's grown out just past the shoulders and left in a loose style with the bangs swept to the side. Overall, her hair is fine and reflects light quite well.
Eyes: Light blue - round and bright, with no makeup applied - with thin eyebrows.
Clothing/Accessories: Cheyenne prefers to wear tomboyish clothes more than anything else; usually picking out shirts and jeans over dresses whenever she shops. She otherwise doesn't worry very much about the color, but she tends to have a preference for anything in the color of blue or red.

As for outfits she tends to wear, she had packed up a few sets of clothing to wear, depending on the current season. In the Fall and Winter, Cheyenne wears a buttoned-up flannel shirt - either red or blue- over a gray undershirt along with a pair of her well-used jeans and work boots. If the weather is especially bad, she will add a blue, fur-lined hooded jacket along with a gray beanie she wears under the hood and a pair of black gloves. In the case of Summer and Spring, she usually unbuttons the front of her flannel shirts and rolls up the sleeves to her elbows, and also switches her boots for a pair of white sneakers. In the hottest months of the year, she'll replace her flannel with loose, white or sky blue T-shirts. Occasionally, she will also take to wearing cargo shorts, as well, revealing the white socks to wears to match her sneakers. In case of bright sun, she has a pair of sunglasses in her pack.

She isn't much for accessories, however. Something about jewelry and such never really appealed to her. One would be lucky to even see her wearing her Holocaster around her neck using the provided lanyard that came with it.
General Appearance: Growing up on a ranch has kept Cheyenne healthy and in decent physical shape, though obviously not to the extent of extreme musculature. The years of working outdoors has also given her skin a noticeable tan. Her face is thin and marked by a somewhat long nose. She holds herself in a good posture while she is active, right down to the straight back and the squared shoulders, giving an impression of her confidence. She also tends to have a soft smile on her face in a way that seems to be her neutral expression.

Hometown: Vlostik Town, Western Godai
Personality: Cheyenne is, at her core, a strong-willed person. She exudes a confidence and stubbornness about herself that refuses to back down from a challenge. The active lifestyle she originated from carried over into a 'can-do' attitude that almost encourages these traits. She also possesses a slight competitive streak, particularly in the case of being challenged directly. She, of course, does not intend to be rude in any way; she really does try to be friendly to others.

She cares very deeply for Pokémon. She will never consider mistreating a Pokémon.

History: Born and raised in rustic Vlostik Town, the only life Cheyenne ever knew was the life of a rancher's daughter. There was only her, her older brother, and her parents living and working on the ranch, which was rather small in comparison to the others in the town. However, life was easy enough as they were able to bring in enough profit to continue work and to support a comfortable family life. Being the youngest, she faced the expected comparisons to her elders. Responding to this as well as the work her father wanted her to assist with, she became very active to fit in with what was expected of her. Spending that much time with her brothers affected her, as they would compete with each other and against her, teaching her to mimic that behavior so that she could prove herself to them. Unfortunately, education was not a central focus in the family so, once their first round of schooling was complete, the siblings took to helping on the ranch full-time.

At the age of eight, she saw a Pokémon battle for the first time in her life; a day she would remember to some degree for a long time. It was the evening after a long day in the field, when the family would have their television time, and for a lack of any other programs for the day, they settled on the annual Pokémon tournament. about blah blah blah stories at the campfire about how awesome Pokémon trainers are. She wants to work on the ranch with her father and brother, but mother is a bit of an Arceist about it.

It was hard work living on a ranch. She had to wake up early every morning of every day to help feed the Pokémon, move them where they need to be, as well as other... more awkward things for a kid to experience for the first time. On the other hand, spending countless hours around the family became enjoyable. She really did enjoy the outdoor life. She grew fond of spending time with her older brothers, who would watch out for her and teach her new things; this helped a lot when not returning to school put some distance between her and her friends. It ultimately didn't worry Cheyenne much, as she found the simple life more pleasing than sitting in a classroom for another six or more years.

At the age of thirteen, she tells off the Sanders kid for Arceist stuff. Talks to brother about wants and dreams. Talks to dad about it.

The next day, dad says he's selling the ranch to the Sanders. As their neighbors were family friends, it was negotiated that her family could retain ownership of their home and also work for the Sanders by their choice. her brother chose to follow further education, Cheyenne decided that if she could do anything, she wanted to travel around Godai as a Pokémon Trainer. This did mean returning to school herself to complete the required courses and taking the test - which she admittedly barely passed - but before she knew it, she had everything she needed and taking a young Mareep she helped to raise in tow, she packed up for her journey with her family's blessing.

Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
Posted Image PokéDex
Posted Image Journal
Posted Image Holocaster
Trainer AdvancementAdvancement Points: 0
Tier 0:
- Title:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Mareep
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Puff
Gender: Male
Type: Electric
Ability: Static
Height: 2' 0"
Weight: 17.2 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (6/8)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D9
Total Stats: 50
  • Attack: 8
  • Defense: 9
  • Sp. Attack: 13 (26%)
  • Sp. Defense: 10
  • Speed: 10

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Tackle
1. Growl
4. Thunderwave

Unique Moves:
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Item: None


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


Journal

Adventure Log
 
Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by Bolin, 8 Nov 2015, 11:22 PM.
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Alrighty Bolin! So this is a pretty darn good start to your profile. I hardly see anything that needs to be changed, but rather elaborated! That said, let’s begin -

First, I’d like to direct you to ”Accepted Characters” on both the application itself and the things we tend to comment underneath. This’ll help give you an idea of what we tend to look for even if we don’t state it in yours!

For her ”Hair [...]”, what else can you tell us about her hair? One more sentence should do - is there a specific type of blonde? Does she ever tie it into a pony tail or do something else with it? Does she have bangs? So on and so forth.

Same goes with her ”Clothing [...]”. Is that all she wears? No other clothing sets or a style: preppy, gothic, comfortable, tight, loose, etc clothing? If she does wear just one set then please state it but beware of hygiene and bacteria accumulation. And how about hot weather - what does she wear? No other accessories what so ever as well aside from a beanie and gloves? Etc.

For her ”General Appearance”, perhaps a few more sentences as well. Does she have a specific walk by any chance? Any limps, or is one foot larger than the other? How about her shoulder frame? I’m just throwing things out there; no need to be that specific! However, does she also make a first impression by any chance? Why or why not? Etc.

Let’s now heavily zoom into her ”Personality” and ”History” -

Starting off with her ”Personality”, you’ve hit the minimum which is great and this is a great skeleton to base her of! But, I’d like to see quite the bit more elaboration. What else can you tell me about her? Remember to ask the questions of “Why”s and “How”s when reviewing this again. Like the first sentence: how and why is she a “strong-willed” person? What exactly are these “challenges” that she won’t back down of? Are there any limits to what she will or won’t do? What are these “active lifestyles”? There are so many varieties; what you think is an active lifestyle may not match with others! For example, my active lifestyle is practicing kickboxing and playing badminton; while my friend’s active lifestyles include constant socialization and clubbing with others where as I do it alone. What does it mean when Chey is “rude” and what does it mean for her when she’s trying to be “friendly”? Same with “nurturing”; what does she do? Why does she do anything that she does? Most importantly, what are her strengths and weaknesses that affect her in a psychological manner? How about her morals, beliefs, and ethics? Is there something she refuses to waver from? Are her standards high or low? How does she view herself, mankind, and Pokemon cound? Heck, even the world? Favourite motto? Oh my so many questions! You get it!

The exact same thing applies to her ”History”. While delightfully strong, it feels like it’s missing some major aspects from her ”Personality”. Because Chey’s Personality is lacking, her History will also follow suit - but that’s okay! Once you add more meat to the category above, this will do the same. As a reminder, Chey’s ”History” should compliment her ”Personality”. What else did Chey experience in her life time, especially as a child? How was her relationship with those who weren’t tied with her family? Did she make any friends at school? How did she feel being taken away from school? Was school not enjoyable? I can only assume, but don’t let me do that ‘cause this is your character! What other experiences or situations did she find and how did any of them warp, solidify or change her world view? How did she feel through all of it? So on and so forth. There’s not much else I can say, sadly, but I look forward to seeing much more meat on those bones!

We’ll stop here for now and continue on later.

To reiterate, if you’re in need of some inspiration, check out ”Accepted Characters”. Until then, if you have any questions you know how to reach us! Please post a reply once any changes have been made. Can’t wait to see what you’ll add! ♥
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