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X[A]Kylar OdeanX; [Reaped][Accepted]
Topic Started: 5 Apr 2013, 08:56 AM (399 Views)
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Character Name: Kylar Odean
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Gender: Male
Age: 17
Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer

Height: 5'9"
Weight: 147 lbs.
Hair Color & Style: Black hair which flow forward.
Eyes: Sharp, emerald green eyes.
Clothing/Accessories: Kylar wears a purple hooded jacket with too many extensions for comfort. He walks with skinny jeans and black sneakers. He has had black-rimmed glasses ever since he was ten.
General Appearance: Kylar has pale skin which he inherited from his mother. He is in between the lines of moderate and fat when it comes to body shape. He has long legs, which make him seem tall and almost no muscle. Still, he has no trouble in the casual physical activities. Since he lives in Winterhart, which also gives his pale skin, he has adapted to holding his arms to keep warm. This has become his quirk even if it's not cold, albeit less shivering.


Hometown: Winterhart Village, North Godai
Personality: Kylar Odean is intelligent. He was born intelligent, but his own timidness and selflessness clouds that realization of himself. He does find himself in danger if he doesn't analyze correctly. His friends always tease him for being too safe and not going out of his comfort zone. This is true, because Kylar is very cautious and does not do anything without thinking first. This leads him to being annoyed if his friends don't follow him and he is thoroughly annoyed by people who don't use their brains. Despite this, he is very shy and would rather flee from people than make friends with them.

History: Kylar Odean was a shy kid with his shyness blocking his other talents. He lived with his mother and father whom both have work with the former being in a daycare center and the latter working for the mines so most of the time, he was alone. He wasn’t scared, though, because he has Dribto the Drilbur guarding him. Dribto was one of his father’s Pokemon which he didn’t need so he assigned it to guard Kylar when at home. Kylar grew attached to Dribto (with him being the one who nicknamed it) and felt abandoned when he evolved into an Excadrill and people started taking it seriously.

When Kylar started his school days, he was the object of bullying almost every time. He was bullied because of him being intelligent and a teacher’s pet, but they didn’t know that he was only sticking close to the teachers because he knows he doesn’t have enough of a family because his parents were always gone. At Recess times, Kylar wouldn’t spend time with friends but rather with his teacher’s Pokemon making seem like an outcast. This bullying and not spending time with friends almost forced him to become a loner and doesn’t go along with friends. Despite this, he seems very tranquil being by himself, but he also wants to know what it feels like to “hang out” just for the experience.

When he was going by himself after his daily games of playing by himself, he saw a Ralts up on a tree branch desperately holding on for life. Knowing that his physical abilities would render him incapable of climbing up that tree, he just resorted to making a soft landing for the Ralts. He piled up several snowballs on top of one another until he made a large lump of snow, to which the Ralts fell down on. The Ralts was incredibly sick when he got it, so he hurried to the house when his Mother was fortunately there. Together, they tended up Ralts wounds.

Kylar grew to love the Ralts, nicknaming it “Epto.” He always brought Ralts along and instead of pretend games, he actually trained with Epto, perfecting his Confusion attack. When Epto had enough experience, he went on a battle with his father Machamp. Epto was no match to the Machamp, and this left bothe Kylar and Epto discouraged, thinking that even battling he was no good. His parents comforted him by saying that it was not about the skills in battling, but the bond between Pokemon that one pulls through. With that, Kylar became encouraged to travel so that he can bond with more Pokemon, especially Epto.

When he reached the appropriate age of 17, he left his home and started his journey to meet Pokemon, with the secret hope of meeting other trainers along the way.


Inventory

Dians: 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
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Ralts
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Epto
Gender: Male
Type: Psychic
Ability: Synchronize
Height: 1' 4"
Weight: 14.6 lbs.
Health: Weak
EXP Rate: Slow
EXP Gauge: 7/9
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats: 45
  • Attack: 6
  • Defense: 9
  • Sp. Attack: 12 (27%)
  • Sp. Defense: 8
  • Speed: 10

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Growl
5. Confusion

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Edited by Septentrione, 6 Apr 2013, 03:56 AM.
Keifael Chrystosom
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He's pretty good~ a few things though.

At 5'9 and 97 pounds at the age of 17, Kylar is, quite frankly, anorexic and on his deathbed. The healthy minimum weight for a young man at that height is around 140 lbs, though anything from 130 would be appropriate. If you want him to be more "average" than anything, closer to 145-150 would fit best.

Your history, while being over 300 words and technically appropriate, it's really... well, short. What did his parents do? Did he have a happy childhood? Tell us about his family, his school life. Was playing with Dribto and catching Epto the only major events in his life?

Also, it might help if you could elaborate on how he's Intelligent without being Cunning. Does he just know trivial knowledge and has no skill to apply it? And though this isn't really a problem and doesn't need to be fixed, I must say that the whole "Doesn't like people, only likes pokemon" theme is incredibly cliche.

Next is with Epto, his EXP gauge is a little wrong. The Left number is how much EXP he had at the level he was caught at, in this case 5, plus how much EXP gained he has, in this case zero. Therefor, your EXP gained should never match the left number of your gauge. The right number is the amount of EXP needed to be the next level, in this case 6. So on the table, you should look at level 5, how much EXP he would have for the left number, and then at level 6, how much EXP he needs. It's definitely not 114.

Next the moveset, the numbers indicate the level that the move is learned, not a numerical order. So Confusion should have a 5. next to it.

You forgot your total stats number. But other than that on your stats, you're golden! Kudos, that's usually where we have the most trouble~

I know this seems like a lot, but you've definitely got a great start~ Stuff with the pokemon is tiny, so don't fret about that, and there wasn't any problem with what you wrote either, just what you didn't write, and that's tiny as well. It'll be great to see what more you can give us~
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Alright, thank you. I fixed it already. I still don't know if the Exp Gauge is right, though.
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It's not there. You see on the EXP table how it says level 1, level 2, level 3 etc on the left? And you see how Ralts has a "Slow" EXP Growth Rate?

So, go to Level 5 on the Table, the level he was caught at, and go over to the "Slow" Column, and that's how much EXP he has right now, the left number. It should be something small.

Then, go to Level 6, the next level, in the same column, and that's how much exp you need to be the next level, your right number. It should also be small, but bigger than the left number.

You are using the EXP Table on our site right? With the Quick link up top?
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Fixed! Sorry, I was using the one from Bulbapedia. :/
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Awesome Possum ~

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Approval 2/2
I can't wait to see him in action >w<



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