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X[A]Denryu Solmaine Hextebarh //Done\\X; [Reaped][Accepted]
Topic Started: 28 Apr 2013, 05:18 PM (424 Views)
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Character Name: Denryu Solmaine Hextebarh
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Gender: Female
Age: 15
Trainer Class: Engineering Student

Height: 5'7'
Weight: 176 ibs
Hair Color & Style: Thick, impossible to tame, coalblack colored with navyblue highligts hair, that goes all the way down to the end of the neck, while the bangs are clinging to the middle of her throat. The hair has a few curls, that points up, and is almost impossible to get down again.
Eyes: Long, sultry and intimidating eyes with a soilbrown color. The eyelashes long and thin, being ravenfeatherblack. Shadowblack, halfthick eyebrows with a straight line from start to end.
Clothing/Accessories: She has 3 different sets of clothes with her: The first one is a leafgreen t-shirt with a lot of dirtstains on it, but no original logo, size small. The pants from set one only goes to her kneecaps, has 4 pockets – two in front top and two at the butt, with its brightorange color. With set one she is mostly wearing groundcolored sandals and a loose, earthbrown belt by her waist. The second set is a combination of a bloodred longsleeved jacket with a pair of sharp rivets on both shoulders; a sheeveless, poisongreen shirt inside; a babypink ballerinaskirt with waistlong, green tights and a pair of holeblack boots that goes at the top of her ankles, with a metalplate on the boothtips and a line of sharp rivets on the back of the boots. Her last, and third set of clothes are a bathing suit; a bikinitop with a coalblack background and shockingpink polkadots. The underpart of the bikini has the same 'logo' as the top part.
General Appearance: Her face is soft and round, but with a sharp chin. Her cheekbones are lightly marked and emphasizes her strong charisma. Her expression is mostly filled with a lot of willpower, a sneaky smile and the promise that she will not be submissive to anyone. Both ears are pierced at the bottom, decorated with a black butterfly-formed earring. Her lips are typically babypink, long and armor-shaped with a matte surface. She is slim, with a small waist. But her legs are a little wider than seen on normal girls, because of her daily workout, so her muscles are strong enough, when she is going to take the engineer-exam in the future. Her stomach is flat and has light markings – which is the muscles beginning to show. She has a darkbrown mole on the right side of her hip which is shaped like a heart. Her nails is always painted shadowgreen, but never perfectly, with a lot of scratches on the surface.

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Hometown: West Godai, Stoutfist City
Personality: She is an incredibly honest girl, with a tendency to annoy people around her deliberately when bored. She is easy-tempered, and is incredibly stubborn, especially in front of strangers and those she doesn't trust entirely. Take her food, and she will go berserk, throwing anything near her at the 'thief' – always hungry for more to eat. Confronted with brainpuzzling problems, she becomes shockingly concentrated and patient, in contrary to her normally impatient behavior. She is not that intelligent, but has a fantasy so enormous, that people often mistakes her as so. When surrounded by comfort and trustworthy individuals, she allows herself to be a bit more feminine than normal, even though she quickly ruins the 'comfort' by herself, when it gets boring.
History:
She was born in the city of hard work, the ever-growing Stoutfist City at West Godai. Mostly populated by men, it was a rare situation, when the Hexterbarh family of 2 parents and 4 brothers got them a new baby; but this time, it turned out to be a little girl. They named her Denryu, a manly name for a boyish girl, that quickly grew up to be a lot like her big brothers. Her natural beauty made her extremely popular already in kindergarden, and she would always be surrounded by a lot of boys – even though in the earlier years, she was just seen as one of the guys. Her masculine personality and behavior never changed, to her moms grief, even though her body began to point towards feminine curves and a ladylike face. When she turned 11, the boys began to disrespect her. Telling her, that she wasn't one of them anymore. Angry with their 'betrayal', she began to revenge herself instead of crying: pouring flowers on their desks, so the others would laugh, and paint their locker with pink hearts. Soon the boys, who had abandoned her from their 'group', took her back with a big apology; understanding that she wasn't changed in any way. But still as masculine and sneaky as she had always been. At the age of 13, her parents wanted her to become a trainer, travel the world; but she declined, told them, that she had another dream. They were utterly surprised, when it turned out, that their only daughter wanted to become an engineer. She worked out every day, preparing for the day, when she would travel around Godai – but not because of wanting to become a champion. Just an expert, pokémonfriendly, female engineer. And so she grew, became 16, before she finally decided that her studies should now truly start. Reading about whatever she could, that had to do with engineering, she now longed for experiences, that could only be obtained outside the city. So she hugged her parents, cried tears of joy with them a last time, before fully packed and with a huge smile on her face, waving them goodbye, as she leaved Stoutfist City and her beloved family.

When she was 13, she was as told before, not interested in becoming a pokémon master or in the end, a trainer at all. Only caring about her dream, where she would build the most fantastic structures with her bare hands and incredible fantasy, she did not see the beauty of catching, training or just having a pokémon by her side. It was a pain in the eyes of her family, who wished for her to become a famous trainer, known for her amazing willpower and physical strengt. But so it happened, she bumped into an old man, who realized that she was partnerless - finding this unacceptable, he forced her into accepting the pokéball he gave her, before mysteriously disappearing. She returned home, arguing with her parents about the Slakoth, that she was forced to raise by some crooked man. But they did not let her abandon the pokémon; her dad telling, that she needed protection, when she would travel around Godai.
It took her a long time to understand and accept, but as she spend more and more time with Slakoth, whom she had named Monty, she grew fond of the lazy pokémon. Willing to travel when turning 15 years old, so that she could see the great monuments of engineering for herself, she understood, that she could be an engineer and trainer at the same time; starting to open her heart for the possibility of loving pokémon.


Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Total EXP Gained: 0

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Slakoth
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Monty
Gender: Male
Type: Normal
Ability: Truant
Height: 0.8 m
Weight: 24 kg.
Health: Intermediate
EXP Rate: Slow
EXP Gauge: (7/9)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D6
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 13 (24%)
  • Defense: 14 (26%)
  • Sp. Attack: 8
  • Sp. Defense: 11
  • Speed: 9

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Scratch
1. Yawn

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by Marshie, 29 Apr 2013, 03:02 PM.
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Hello. Welcome to Godai. I am Magma. And I will be helping you through your app. (until another mod shows up of course :3)

I think you have either a double bold tag or a broken bold tag somewhere in your clothing section.

The other thing I noticed wrong was, and don't worry mistakes are fine, is your exp gauge. It should read: (number of level/number of next level). With a rate of slow, it should be (7/9).

I'm not picky about the length of your personality and history. But that's why I'm just a novice mod. *sadface* If another mod asks for more detail, don't feel bad. They are just trying to turn you into your character for a more exciting experience here. Enjoy your stay and welcome, once again, to Godai. ::watermelon::
Edited by Magma, 28 Apr 2013, 07:36 PM.
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Got it fixed~
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Tiny thing, you put the number 55 inside the bold coding by Total Stats. Just make sure that the [/b] is before the number.

Also, I'm just a little confused about her motivation. If she didn't want to be a trainer at 13 to be an engineer, why is she traveling around with Monty? You might want to clear that up in your history.
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Edited again; hoping there ain't more failures this time. :3
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Alright! That all makes sense now~

And before you even say it, this isn't a fail~

Histories are supposed to be summaries of events, not actual scenes. The primary trait of this being that summaries do not have dialogue. You describe how something happened, you do not write it out as if it's happening, if that makes sense. Just summarize those last two chunks into a description of the encounter with the old man and with her father and you'll be golden~
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Fourth time is the lucky time? (I hope..)
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Brilliant~ Officially Approval 1/2~
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Approval 2/2. Welcome to Godai.

Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp.

This topic is now closed without further ado.
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Your character has officially been put up for Reaping. If you wish to make use of their belongings for another character, please submit a modification. If not, please post in the GTN so that others may make use of the character.
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