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Trainer Profile Character Name: Nate Shore Nickname: Gender: Male Age: 21 Trainer Class: Backpacker Height: 5,11" (1,8 m) Weight: 170,6 Ibs. (77 kg) Hair Color & Style: Dark brown, spiky Eyes: Dark green Clothing/Accessories: Nate is wearing some dark Green pants and slippers, white T-shirt, light blue backpack, containing all sort of stuff for the journey. General Appearance: Nate has a standard conformation. He is not that strong, but he can run fast and he is agile. Nate has a habbit of chewing on a licorice root and he has a scar op the left forearm, after an acid attack, from a Gulpin, when he was 7 years old. ![]() Hometown: Sedalia Town, West Godai Personality: With the exception of Poison Types and Poison type trainers, he loves to help and meet new people as well as interesting Pokemon. Nate has a great trust in faith and an enormous respect for the mysterious legendary pokémon, which he has heard so much about from travelers and from his mother. Just like Shinx, he is very competitive, which gave him the passion to battle and to be a pokémon trainer. Both Nate and Shinx have the same goal for their travel, to become strong, gain some new friends and have some great experiences! History: Back when Nate was 7 years old, he found a cute, chubby, green little Gulpin, that he wanted to play with and take home with him, but when he was about to pick it up, Gulpin spit a corrosive, orange Acid Spray all over his left forearm! This attack, and the wounds and scar it gave, has given Nate an excessive fear of Poison Type pokémons, and he has hard trusting trainers who specialize in Poison type pokémon. Nate's parents own a farm with a large pack Mareep and a few Flaaffy and a pair of Ampharos, controlled by his parents and their pokémons. There they often had strangers and travelers stay for a night. This has made Nate really acceptive and open minded for new interesting people. The stories these people could tell made Nate wish to go on his own journey someday. Since Nate was a little boy, he has been told about the mysterious and powerfull legendary pokémon, who user their great powers to rule and change the nature all over the world. One of Nate's biggest dreams is to meet one of them. Nate's father owns a female Luxray and his mother owns a male Manectric. When Nate was about 18, Luxray and Manectric made an egg, which was given to Nate and after a couple of weeks, Shinx came to the world and became Nate's best friend and first pokémon. Nate and Shinx used to help out on the farm, but as the years go by, the daily tasks became too everyday. So finally Nate decided that he would go out on his own journey in Godai, with his buddy Shinx. Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexPokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
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Okay, as I said, you do not need to fix too much. Er, first of all, you can't have any unique moves to start out with. For the percentages, you should erase every number you have in parentheses besides the attack percentage. Other than that, I would say your grammar is a little off so if you can, go through and maybe look for errors? |
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4 May 2013, 10:08 AM Post #3 | ||||
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Okay, now I've corrected those things
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4 May 2013, 10:12 AM Post #4 | ||||
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This is much better! Good job! Approval 1/2 |
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Rosibelle Gold Stars: 3!!!
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4 May 2013, 04:17 PM Post #5 | ||||
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It's a little sparse buuuuttttt alright, I'll give you the green light~ Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp. This topic is now closed without further ado. |
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