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[A]Jasi von D; [Accepted] Future Girl
Topic Started: 14 Jun 2013, 04:38 AM (354 Views)
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Character Name: Jasi von D
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Trainer Class: Future Girl

Height: 6' 0"
Weight: 128 lbs

Hair Color & Style: Jasi has straight long white hair that extends to just above her buttocks. It splits at her ears, forming two thin strips that reach to her chest, and which border her bangs. This type of style adores the face it frames, enhancing her youthful appearance.

Eyes: Her bright blue eyes shine from the shadows of her bangs, in harmony with her healthy vision and her fine looks. Their tensity is elaborated on by her sharp eyebrow lines, and they remain small when widened in moments of heightened emotion, save for her pupils.

Clothing/Accessories: Her athletic physique is usually adorned with solid-black garments. She occasionally dresses in soft or thick silky clothing that hang from her wrists and ankles, enriching her form with an air of elegance.

She seems rather formal for her age, and in more ways than one. She is mostly fond of her heavy black uniform or suit. It is smooth and hard in feel and looks to be bullet-proof and rough. It covers everything, except what is above the neckline, and she can retain her agility without hindrance, despite its thickness and weight. Her boots seem to be hardened with alloy, and they lack laces and rubber, their soles invincible against the friction caused by a frenzy pace.
Despite its rigid, strong make, it is easily removed and can separate parts.

General Appearance: Jasi possesses a slender, hardened build. She has a Caucasian complexion that is of a light, peach-like tone.
She refrains from letting her nails extend too long and she does not usually polish them, nor does she cleanse herself in strong levels of make-up. Perhaps some mascara, some blemishing materials, blush, and lipstick - but really, just a small amount of any, if at all.

The brightness of her smiles rival the tone of her hair and the lustre of her eyes, whether she is grazing in the serenity of the morning sun, or recognizing an ingenious, insidious opportunity.


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Hometown: Winterhart, North Godai
Personality: Jasi is a rather eccentric girl. She can either be childish, her voice pitched in the tone of a minor, or she could stand within the barriers of her age. Despite her playful characteristics, she can be rather grown as well - speaking and behaving maturely, socializing with a formal flare, and appearing as civilized as her dreams.

She does not have any particular quirks and she is easy to get along with. She may come across as a naive young lass at first glance, but her curiosity is more a result of her extroverted personality and the fact that she cares. Her kindness is not a sign of weakness. She doesn't hide anything, unless duty calls her to, and also expects others to be open as well. She can get offended easily -- when faces look away without smiles and without her looking away first, when no one says as much as her, and when her questions are ignored.
She can be considered cute when mad, but never let looks fool.

Silly gestures and nonsense are bemusing to her, despite the fact that she sometimes acts juvenile herself. Stupidity scares her and she lacks tolerance for the absent mind. She would never give a word of advice. Just let them suffer in their own demise so they can teach themselves, and its nice of her, because her way would be a hard way.

Jasi is a very generous girl when kind. She does not find hardship in sacrifice, and will always offer a challenge for a prize. Expecting nothing herself, no object would then mean anything. Only a hello, good night, and a few seconds to spare. She is far from materialistic.

She can be engaging and vigorous, but even when she is silent, she monitors. If there is ever anything to talk about, she will talk about it.

She is a vegetarian for ethical purposes.

History:
Her Early Years

Her Later Years

Her Recent Years


Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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Total EXP Gained: 0

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Nidoran♀
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Neveah
Gender: Female
Type: Poison
Ability: Poison Point
Height: 1' 4"
Weight: 15.4 lbs
Health: Low
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (6/8)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D7
Total Stats: 50
  • Attack: 13 (25%)
  • Defense: 13 (26%)
  • Sp. Attack: 2
  • Sp. Defense: 13
  • Speed: 9

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Growl
1. Scratch

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Adventure Log goes in here
Edited by CyberFrost, 21 Jun 2013, 12:39 PM.
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o.o dis gon' be good...

Just a note though, Clearchime is a Senjinist Monastary (forgive us if that wasn't mentioned) So Baptism isn't exactly common there. Arceists and Meuists have that ritual but you can just use any of their churches that are dotted around the region in every city if you'd like. Clearchime just happens to be one of the oldest and largest places of religious significance, and is not the only one~
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Seth Halley Thawyer • Astronomer • Total EXP Gained: 369 • Dians: *dian* 300 • Location: Serenity Lake

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Thank you for the clarification (and the compliment?). I wasn't too sure if baptism is exactly what I wanted in the end, but for lack of a better word or placeholder...

A lot of things you see in my history as of now are scantly detailed and certainly not final (and I'm sure you know that.) I just threw a whole bunch of ideas together for the sake of not forgetting anything that may prove to be a significant addition to a final history, or at least help conjure a better idea or more.

I'll keep what you typed in mind, as that will help too. So thanks bro. :)
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Yes it was compliment~ And don't worry, if you have any other questions, feel free to PM me~
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Seth Halley Thawyer • Astronomer • Total EXP Gained: 369 • Dians: *dian* 300 • Location: Serenity Lake

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I believe I am finished.
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I've yet to get through her History, but so far everything looks pretty good.

Just a note, your stats only add up to 40 right now, so you can have a whole 10 more points to put on your other 3 stats~ I was wondering why Neevah would be so slow lol~

Once I can tackle that monster you presented us with, I'll see if there are any other details that need changing~
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Seth Halley Thawyer • Astronomer • Total EXP Gained: 369 • Dians: *dian* 300 • Location: Serenity Lake

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Really!? She can be even STRONGER!? Damn sickness, can't even add properly lol
1 + 1 equals 11 right? Or... no? j/k

EDIT: I do recall thinking her "4" speed was a little odd... I keep forgetting to trust my instincts!
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Alrighty~ Now I've had time to get to the history. Dear lord my brain was not prepared to actually have to read something critically. This is good though, don't worry.

My general suggestion about writing would be to not break up your paragraphs like you do. Most of those short choppy little bits can be combined. It would help a lot with organizing your thoughts into more consumable blocks so the reader can look at it and go "Oh, that's what all that is about" instead of having to try and piece it together like a puzzle.

Also, some concrete age markers like "Jasi did X at age Y" would help a lot in determining if her life events line up with typical Godai canon.

Thirdly, Mercury isn't a radioactive in most common forms, and the only radioisotope that has a long enough half life is HG 194. And even if it did decay, the amount of Mercury in electronic devices is incredibly minimal and the amount of positrons that people might get from it would be infintely less than a CAT scan, which are perfectly safe. If you're thinking back to how cell phones can cause cancer, that's because they use Radio waves to communicate, and they only do so when sending and receiving information. I'm sorry if this sounds nit-picky, actually, it is, I just like to try and keep things as realistic as possible... (he said in a pokemon roleplay...).

But... all of those are so small and nit picky that I'll still go ahead and give you the first half of approval~
1/2

If another mod hasn't come through to give you the second half by next Monday, I'll expedite the approval process.
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Seth Halley Thawyer • Astronomer • Total EXP Gained: 369 • Dians: *dian* 300 • Location: Serenity Lake

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1) That's a good find. I felt that this wasn't right either, but it had not been mentioned until now, so I ignored it - but now I know for sure. Some paragraphs still relate to the previous to the point that separating them would risk confusion, as it would entail dissociation when that is not the case.

2)I may have avoided that so I wouldn't have to worry about it. You can as easily assume that her timeline fits with the canon, or I can, anyway.

3)You are right. I could have been more detailed, but I thought it would have strayed away from the actual biography itself. Again, you are right. What you said here is strongly relative to what Jasi learned. I tried to implement this information in a way that you can decide for yourself if it's fact or fiction, and how deeply any viewpoint goes.
I wasn't too concerned about suggesting such a concept in a serious manner since you've guessed it, it's a world separate of our own and a Pokemon world. Wouldn't expect it to matter so much.

Thank you!
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Eh. You have a tendency to ramble on a subject and go over information in a vague fashion. First part remind me of the bible. >>

But that isn't a bad thing, depending, just a personal dislike in writing for me. XD Have fun on Godai~

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