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12 Aug 2013, 10:43 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||
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Trainer Profile Character Name: Toyoyuki Luna Nickname: Sana Gender: Female Age: 16 Trainer Class: Psychic Height: 5'6'' Weight: 110lbs Hair Color & Style: Short brown hair, with a single long ponytail (Dyed brown, natural color being dirty blonde) Eyes: Mood Eyes (Usually ocean blue) Clothing/Accessories: Luna wears a bright pink v-neck shirt, covered by an all black vest. She has two earrings, a matching set that resembles a lunar moon ( a gift she received from her mother on her 10th birthday, to represent how special she was to them). She has a matching skirt that compliments her shirt. General Appearance: The girl is fit for her age, despite not being one to regularly exercise. She has a spiral tattoo upon her right arm's shoulder that runs down to her elbow. ![]() Hometown: Oraclair Town Personality: Luna is usually down to earth. Although she is an emotional young girl, she tries to keep her emotions in check due to having the gift/curse of being a psychic. She's troubled by this burden as it usually gets in her way of becoming a pokemon trainer. She enjoys quiet nights where she gets the chance to observe the stars. And although she enjoys her peace and quiet when she's alone, she'll gladly pass that up to help a person in need. History: Luna grew up within the town known as Oraclair. Home to many psychic's including herself it became the perfect fit for her family. Living within the outskirts of town her family typically stayed to itself with her parents wanting to simply live a peaceful life and settle down. However as Luna grew older they discovered her psychic powers would run wild whenever she grew upset or became emotional. Fearing that this trait would only gradually worsen, they decided to send her off for fear of there small house-hold's peace being disrupted. Sending her to the boarding school within town they had high hopes that the school with help her in controlling her gift. However little did they know that despite the school's agenda and goal, Luna's peers would have a bigger impact upon such things. Over the first few weeks of school she made a few friends within the classroom. An odd bunch of students who all had psychic abilities. At first the group gave Luna a hard-time, until they finally managed to cause Luna to use her powers for mischief. It was during lunchtime and someone had tossed their juice-box at her and she somehow managed to deflect it, sending it to one of the kids which triggered a food fight. Ever since that incident Luna became a welcomed member of the group. Whenever anyone needed someone to talk to she was the one to go to, especially when it concerned school work, Luna never allowed herself to fall behind her work. Several years passed and Luna begun to realize this wasn't for her. Although they helped her refine her control somewhat, and gave her lessons on pokemon, essentially for her it wasn't enough. One night she addressed her issue with the headmaster, requesting to continue her training while going on a pokemon journey. Granting her request the headmaster gave her a starting pack of key items to assist in her "outdoor" lesson. Offering her one of the pokemon that was caught to be the school's mascot it was none other than Abra. Gladly accepting the pokemon Luna slept that night away with thousands of thoughts flooding her mind. Deciding that saying good-bye's to her friends would be to sad, she left the next morning to begin her adventure. Yet little did she know she would only cause her friends to grow to hate her. Inventory Dians: 2,894Items: Key Items: PokéDexAdvancement Points: 6 Advancement Points Seeing the Sights: 3/15 Making Friends: 2/15 To be the Best: 1/15 Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 22
PC Box: Stored Pokemon
Edited by Bones, 18 Jun 2016, 06:14 PM.
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12 Aug 2013, 07:40 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||
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I'm not a mod but I wanna help you First, your history may be a bit touchy since it involves a gym leader. Probably not since there's few topics here that has their involvement but nonetheless just keep that in mind. I do enjoy seeing another psychic~ Now, your Abra...the numbers to the left of Teleport etc is the levels they learn the skill. So it'll be like 1. Teleport 5. Confusion And your Unique moves are actually for techniques taught via TM or move tutors. Skills gained by egg are in the Moveset. But starting pokemon cannot have moves from breeding, just whatever they have up to lvl. 5 ![]() So those few adjustments and you will probably be good to go! |
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12 Aug 2013, 10:05 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||
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Thanks I'll add in the corrections right away.
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13 Aug 2013, 01:27 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||
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We technically don't allow other members to critique but Everything Zai said was correct so all is well~ Unfortunately though, and this isn't your fault, Delphine's personality doesn't work with the history you provided. She's a little too stuck up to take on the role of a tutor. The Delphic Temple's psychic training grounds are run by someone else entirely, Delphine just uses it as a gym arena for her own needs. But there isn't any written information on that anywhere and I can see how you jumped to different conclusions. So don't worry about it. I'm sorry to have to ask to you to edit your history a little bit on that case. It would be nice if you could expand her history a little bit to know about her relationship with other kids in school and how she did as a child aside from being a psychic. That would help you not only understand her a little better, but help us to as well~ Also, your stats add up to 60, which is 5 extra points, so you need to take those off. I'd suggest doing it on Attack because The family doesn't natually learn any physical attacks lol~ Also, your EXP gauge should read (6/8). EXP Gained is Correct, but your gauge still needs the EXP to be level 5 for it to be read and calculated correctly. Otherwise I think you're good~ Glad to see you here. Pop into the Chatbox to say Hi sometime~ |
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13 Aug 2013, 08:25 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||
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Ahh okay I'll adjust it now. | ||||||||||||
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14 Aug 2013, 10:17 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||
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Alright~ looks good to me~ approval 1/2 | ||||||||||||
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19 Aug 2013, 10:43 AM Post #7 | ||||||||||||
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Approval 2/2 | ||||||||||||
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Rosibelle Gold Stars: 3!!!
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19 Aug 2013, 10:45 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||
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Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp. This topic is now closed without further ado. |
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Rosibelle Gold Stars: 3!!!
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