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Trainer Profile Character Name: Shuo Gisai Nickname: Shuo Gender: Male Age: 22 Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer Height: 6'6 Weight: 200 Hair Color & Style: Medium-Lengthed neon green hair Eyes: Deep, Dark Purple Clothing/Accessories: He wears dark black jeans with a pair of grey low-top tennis shoes. He wears a dark purple belt with a black belt buckle. Shuo wears a XL baseball shirt that comes down past his waist. It is white in the torso, and the sleeves are black and come down mid fore-arm. He wears a dark purple watch with neon green face. He wears a backwards baseball cap that is the same grey as his tennis shoes. The backpack that he carries all of his things in is a plain black backpack. General Appearance:He is an average looking man. Not drop dead gorgeous, but not unattractive either. He has dark purple eyes. He wears a pair of Black rayban-esque sunglasses. He loves his height and walks around proudly because of it. Being in shape, he can run decently fast and do some relatively athletic things that a normal person couldn't do, or at least that's what he likes to think. He walks tall with broad shoulders and a proud chest. He usually walks at a decent pace, not even meaning to walk fast. He blames it on his long legs. His abra floats behind him as he walks. It prefers to be out of its pokeball. Hometown: Scurarte Town Personality: He is a personable person despite his bloody past. He will talk easily and confidently with most people, but is slow to trust someone 100%. He has many favorites when it comes to different topics. For example: He loves the colors purple, orange, blue, and green; but if you ask him his favorite, he probably would have a hard time telling you. The same goes for food, almost. His all time favorite dish is Sushi! When he makes up his mind on a particular subject, he doesn't stop for anyone or anything. He is stubborn if you try to change his mind and he doesn't automatically agree or understand. Overall, regardless of his dark outer appearance, Shuo is a very kind man, unless you threaten him or someone he loves. History: Shuo grew up in Herbalife City. He was a happy and go lucky kid growing up. His father was a great pokemon trainer and always loved using his favorite Pokemon, Alakazam. Since Shuo basically grew up with Alakazam (Shuo's dad caught an Abra just before Shuo was born), he always wanted to get an Abra when he was old enough to own one. Exactly one week before Shuo's 13th birthday, and the day that he would be officially allowed to be a pokemon trainer, Shuo had the darkest day of his life. He happened to have a dream the night before of himself sitting under his favorite tree looking at the stars like he did every night. All of the sudden, his father's Alakazam teleported right next to him. The pokemon looked Shuo in the eyes and said, "Your Earth Is About to Crumble....Shuo." Then Shuo woke up. That morning, his parents died in a car accident. Shuo was sent to live with his grandmother in Scurarte town. Because of all the mental hardships and trauma, Shuo didn't become a trainer on his 13th birthday. Instead, he went to school like any other normal kid and grew up. He just never felt ready to be a trainer, even after countless attempts by his grandmother trying to talk him into it. Now that he is 22, Shuo has been having weird dreams again. It plays out almost exactly like the dream he had the night his parents died. Except two little things. 1: It's an Abra and not an Alakazam. 2: The pokemon says, "Your Monument is About to Rise....Shuo." After weeks of having this same dream over and over again, Shuo's grandmother has a surprise for him one morning when he wakes up. There was an Abra in the living room just sleeping there. She explained that It was the son of the Alakazam that his father had previous owned. Shuo's Aunt on his mother's side had been raising the Abra since his parents had died. Some time before they had died, Shuo's parents had given her the newly born Abra and cryptically told her to give it you when it reached level 5. It just happened to be the same time that Shuo had these strange dreams. Was the Pokemon talking to him telepathically? Were they meant for greater things? Shuo decided that day that he would be a pokemon trainer, finally! Inventory Dians: 1,000Items: Key Items: PokéDexAdvancementAdvancement Points: (0/30) - Tier 0 Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 0
PC Box: Stored Pokemon Journal
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5 Sep 2013, 01:58 PM Post #2 | ||||
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Alright, you've still got some work to do on this, I'm not sure if you're just not done or if you're unsure of how to proceed. Firstly he's not bad, but I think I need to ask you to expand on his History and Personality some more. They need to be 300 and 100 words respectively. For the personality, just try to think about any and all quirks he has that make him unique and how he'd fare in different situations. And for the history, we do allow gruesome events like that, but you need to really justify them. Make sure that everything makes sense. Why were they murdered, what did they do for their killer to want them gone so much, and who would orphan a child at that age? How did he do in school before and after the incident? Where did he live after his parents were taken away? And you could expand on his general appearance other than "average looking." How does he stand, he's very tall and quite heavy, how does that work out as well. Is he proud of his height, shy about it? Just, in general, put a little more thought into everything. Also, unless his parents had a very specific reason for it, Requiem isn't really an acceptable name, and unless he abandoned it with his parents' demise, he should have a surname as well. Make sure you clear our the Advancement Section except for the gauge and the Tier 0. You've also got a rogue [/b] after your Xtranceiver. Also, about code, make sure that there's a space between the bold coding and whatever you write next. Right now the Colons and your text are smushed up against each other. "[b]Nickname:[/b] Req" is how it should read, not "[b]Nickname:[/b]Req" Check our Pokedex for Abra's correct Moveset at level 5, all starters have combat capability. And I'm not sure if you haven't gotten to this part yet, but we will need to know your EXP. Division, One Ability, and your Stats before you start posting. The stats will require a bit of math but it's not nearly as hard as it looks, I promise. Thanks for this though~ It's nice to see you here, and don't be afraid to ask questions in the chat. It's nice to have you here~ Can't wait to see what you come up with. |
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6 Sep 2013, 07:18 PM Post #3 | ||||
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Alright~ very nice~ Approval 1/2 |
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6 Sep 2013, 07:23 PM Post #4 | ||||
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Be sure to bold Confusion and I will give the final points for your approval~ | ||||
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6 Sep 2013, 07:32 PM Post #5 | ||||
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Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp. This topic is now closed without further ado. |
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