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[A]Charles Braddock; [Accepted]
Topic Started: 7 Sep 2013, 06:24 AM (200 Views)
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Trainer Profile

Character Name: Charles Braddock
Nickname: Charlie
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Trainer Class: Pokemon Trainer

Height: 5'3"
Weight: 105 lbs
Hair Color & Style: Brown; Slightly longer and unkempt bowl cut
Eyes: Brown
Clothing/Accessories: Charlie's most distinguishable article of clothing is his olive green jacket. He also carries a brown messenger bag. Aside from that, the rest of his clothes are pretty standard, i.e. a shirt, jeans, and some walking shoes.
General Appearance: Charlie has a tiny stature, something that to this day remains a sore point for him. He is scrawny and short, and combined with his childish appearance, it is easy to mistake him for a young teenager.

Charlie has a roundish face with big brown eyes, a small nose, and thin lips. His brown hair looks similar to a bowl cut, only it is about an inch longer and nowhere nearly as neat.

Lastly, he is always seen in his green jacket. This jacket reaches a couple inches below his waist.

Hometown: Scurarte Town, East Godai
Personality: Many people find Charlie condescending and arrogant. He just has a certain way of inflecting his voice that gives an air of snobbishness, whether he means it or not (though in many cases, he does, in fact, mean it). Charlie hates being made fun and told he is wrong. If there is one thing that triggers his berserk button, it’s criticizing him. He does have a grasp of his weaknesses though, and will willingly give up or run away if he believes he is not adequately prepared for the situation. Charlie can also often seem distant if the conversation does not particularly amuse him, thereby enhancing his selfish, snobbish image.

Contrary to people's first thoughts concerning him, Charlie is a generally a patient and kind person (that is, when he’s not being insulted or criticized). He does not mind going out of his way to help people and Pokemon, as long as he finds it warrants his time. He is much more forgiving than the average person, almost always willing to offer somebody a second chance. Compared to others, Charlie is a slow person; he usually will feel no need to rush himself, and will often find himself late to many occasions.


History: Scurarte Town was a boring, old town. Besides a few of its quirks, there was really nothing to do. Every day, since the day Charlie was born, was the same. And as patient as he was, even he couldn't stand the repetitiveness of the small town life. Charlie's parents were environmental activists for the Rottshade Woods. And for as long as he could remember, his parents brought him and his older siblings to help clean up the polluted woods. Of the three children, Charlie was the favorite of his parents. He was the only one of the three to actually care for conserving the environment.

But as much as Charlie loved his daily routines, it was never enough. He had always longed to explore past the woods. But his family were small town people. And for much of his childhood, Charle could only dream about what the outside world had to offer him.

Charlie's simple life was first shaken up by the running away of his older sister, Betty. Stubborn, independent, and adventurous, life in Scurarte Town was even more difficult Betty. One day, she came home with a Hoot-Hoot. Several weeks later, she and her bag was missing, and a note was left on the table. In her letter, she explained how she was going off to become Pokemon trainer. And how she was going to beat the gym leaders and the Elite Four. Their parents were angry, and for good reason. How dare Betty just run away! Rottshade Woods was an incredibly dangerous place, and probably the only thing Betty had to defend herself with was her freshly caught Pokemon and a few repels. In response, Charlie's parents were even more adamant about involving Charlie, and his older brother, Hank the second, in actively protecting the woods.

Every couple of weeks or so, Betty would phone in. She'd check up on the family and spoke of her adventures. She talked about her new Pokemon, her gym battle defeats, and some strange Pokemon contests. For the next five years, Charlie would fawn over his older sister. He'd wait and wait for her weekly phone calls and occasional visits. As time went on, Charlie dreamt more and more of the outside world. Each day, he hoped for something to change his life.

And soon enough, something happened. After an eventful counter in Rottshade Woods involving him and Hank II being chased by a Zubat family, an Oddish had somehow found itself captured by Hank's dropped Pokeball. Disliked by Hank the second, Oddish was adopted by Charlie within minutes of revealing itself.

By the time Charlie was 19, Betty had become a renowned Pokemon Coordinator. Her Noctowl, formally a Hoot-Hoot, was labeled as one of the most intelligent non-psychic Pokemon alive. After a surprise visit, Betty was able to convince their parents to allow Charlie to venture off on his own. He was surely old and responsible enough. And plus, he had a strong bond with his Oddish. By the next morning, Charlie's belongings were packed, and Betty was ready to fly him anywhere he wanted.

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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AdvancementAdvancement Points: (0/30) - Tier 0
Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

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Oddish
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Ozzy
Gender: Female
Type: Grass/Poison
Ability: Chlorophyll
Height: 1'8"
Weight: 11.9 lbs
Health: Scrawny
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (6/8)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D6
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 3
  • Defense: 16
  • Sp. Attack: (27%) 15
  • Sp. Defense: 16
  • Speed: 5

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. absorb
5. sweet scent

Unique Moves:
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PC Box: Stored Pokemon


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Ok, well I am delighted to say I like your history. Not only is it letting us get some insight on your character, but you actually provided something of a flash back. Ozzy the oddish....haha~ Well, things look good on this end. Though I will say, for future reference, when you do character dialog for conversation, color code them so it'll show up easier and makes it easy for us to read~ Now then, you need one more approval and you'll be good to go~

1/2 Approval~
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Alright, So Zai's a novice mod and he must not have been aware of this. And It really pains me to have to ask you of this, but unfortunately histories are supposed to be summaries of past events, not descriptive scenes. The main difference between the two is the presence of dialogue. Sometime's it's alright, but in this case it's not. We have that rule because sometimes people can stretch their lack of substance out with dialogue to meet word count. And if I didn't have to apply the rules to everyone you'd be fine. If it's not too much to ask, I'll have to ask you to re-write it.

All the events work out just fine, and everything else is just great~ (Don't worry about Ozzy's speed either, you level up really quickly at the start here, so she'll pick up speed soon enough.)

And as a side note that doesn't have much to do with the application. When you're writing prose and using dialogue, each time a new person speaks, you make a new paragraph. Even without colors it makes it infinitely easier to read and organizes everything really well.

I'm excited to have you here though~ Can't wait to see what you come up with in your threads~
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All right, I rewrote my history. Thanks for informing me about those things, and hopefully I didn't break any more rules!
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Your character application has now been accepted! Please make sure to create a signature of your character. Once that is done, you are now free to RP! If you made a personal mistake with your character, please submit a modification process involving a revamp.

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