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Letilo Theeden
Topic Started: 22 Oct 2013, 02:06 AM (396 Views)
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Trainer Profile

Character Name: Letilo Theeden
Nickname: Leo
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Trainer Class: Psychic

Height: 6’ 1”
Weight: 120 Pounds

Hair Color & Style: Leo has hair that is black as the night sky. Usually his hair is mess and all over the place, but it fits his personality very well.

Eyes: Bright green with a tinge of yellow.

Clothing/Accessories: Leo likes to wear brown cargo shorts that are pretty baggy and fall a little past his knees. On his upper body he wears a grey tank top. He prefers to be barefoot whenever possible. When it’s too cold for his normal clothes he wears a pair of dark grey jeans that fit him pretty snug with a studded belt just to make sure he doesn’t sag and prevent them from falling off. On his torso he wears a black long sleeve t-shirt accompanied by a grey sleeveless jacket. His feet are covered by jet black shoes and socks to pull the outfit together, of course that's only when shoes are required.

General Appearance: Leo is very lean. He has long arms and legs making him look like a twig, but he is still muscular enough to lift a little more than his own weight. Leo has great posture when he stands. His back is straight and he walks with confidence. He tends to slouch a bit when he sits though, often he realizes he's slouching and tries to correct himself. He usually has on his jacket’s hood if he’s wearing it. Leo always has this look about him that most people have when they are trying to gather their thoughts. It isn’t a confused look but more of a concentrated look. Usually Leo’s fingers are moving on their own while his arms stay at his sides.

Hometown: Cascadia City, North Goldai

Personality: Leo is a very spiritual young man. He likes to take hikes while barefoot and just feel the soil beneath his feet churn with every step. Everything is living in his mind and through meditating he feels he can communicate with everything around him. He also loves to run around and be hyper, so his meditating balances out his hyperactive nature. When his curiosity puts him into situations he doesn’t feel he can handle alone he just meditates and gathers his thoughts and feelings from other living things around him. He is a great problem solver when he puts his mind to it. Because of Leo’s spirituality most think he is fine with interacting with other humans, but Leo is terribly shy. He would much rather connect with a person emotionally than have a full on conversation. Leo usually prefers to be alone, but sometimes he longs for companionship which he usually looks for in the life around him.

Leo has a rather peculiar outlook on life. He doesn't believe in fearing anything because the worst thing that will happen is death. Death isn't a scary thing for him, he has accepted death as a part of life. He knows everything has a cycle and when his cycle is over he will die just like everyone else. He expects things to be hard, painful, emotional and devastating, but he knows that's what everyone goes through. When conflict arises in Leo's life he doesn't stress over it, instead he reflects on past conflicts and thinks of a way around this one. Life can be hell when everything worries you, so Leo chooses to not worry about anything and just live happily through his cycle of life.

Leo is shy but is capable of holding a short conversation. He doesn't usually start them, but if he does then you can be sure he's not gonna stop. When talking to people he usually doesn't know what to say though because he was taught to speak with his emotions and most of the people he came across were not true to their emotions. They would talk about all this gossip or nonsense that Leo just felt was unimportant.

History: Leo was born an only child into a very large family. His mother and father didn’t necessarily want a baby at the time but they figured they would give it a shot. It was very apparent from birth that Leo did not fit in with the rest of his family. Everyone in his family was talkative, outgoing and always the center of attention. Leo was the exact opposite. It made no sense to his parents why he would hide away from large groups. It enraged them when they would try to talk to him and he would sit quietly. Leo's parents only knew of one other person in their family that was similar to him and that was his grandmother. They tried to raise Leo to the best of their ability, but sadly the child proved to be too big a task for the young couple to handle.

After 3 short years Leo was given to his grandma. She wasn’t a very old woman but she was just old enough to be considered wise. She knew Leo was coming long before anyone else had even thought he would exist. This is because she was a practiced psychic and could control her precognitive abilities. However this ability was taking a large toll on her mental health. Slowly her brain was deteriorating and she knew by the time Leo was age 16 she would no longer be living. Unlike most people would do she didn’t try to change her fate. Instead she decided she would train Leo to be in tune with his natural psychic abilities as well.

As Leo grew his grandmother died. He was well aware of the fact that she was dying because she told him. At first this news was devastating and for weeks all Leo did was cry. After a while Leo realized he was wasting the time he had left with his guardian, best friend, spiritual guide and most importantly his grandmother. After he got over the fact that his grandmother was dying she showed him a whole new world. She taught him how to meditate properly and be one with the living beings around him. He was shown that death makes way for new life. His psychic abilities formed and he could brain speak with ease if he concentrated hard enough. But concentration was always harder for Leo than his grandmother wished it should be. As a Leo got older he learned how to focus on his thoughts and concentrate harder but never to the level his grandmother wished. He was just scatter brained. A trait his grandmother would always tease him about. She would say “You must have gotten that from your father because no child of mine has a roller coaster of thought instead of a steady train”. Leo still progresses very slowly with concentration and will probably have the issue his entire life.

Leo spent most of his time growing up very sheltered from other humans. In fact he was even home schooled so his grandma could ensure he was getting a quality education. She taught him the history of the land, the art of writing, how to read and the basics of math. She also taught him many other things that schools wouldn't have been able to teach him. Navigating by using nature and stars as his guide was one of the more memorable things he had learned. His grandmother believed that interaction with more people would just scatter his brain more so instead she had him communicate with nature and pokemon. Although Leo’s grandmother was never a trainer she knew how to make very tasty pokemon food and through her psychic abilities she would befriend wild pokemon and ask them to let Leo brain speak with them. They would happily agree in exchange for the food. Whenever Leo felt the energy of a pokemon and heard its inner thoughts he would enter a whole different state of mind and suddenly his roller coaster turned into a train. This sparked the flame that made Leo want to explore with pokemon of his very own one day.

The connections that Leo made with the help of his grandmother had taught him much about pokemon and their behavior. He learned how to approach them and befriend them. He also learned that some pokemon are just like people and cant be approached, or befriended. It was a sad truth that Leo learned to live with because he felt love for every pokemon. He did however know what it felt like to have a stronger than usual bond with a pokemon. There was a single bond that, unknowingly to Leo, change his world forever.

The forest was a very well known place to Leo at a very early age. At around 8 years old he was well versed in the wildlife that the forest offered. While he was too young to raise any pokemon, he was not too young to befriend them. With his grandmother's help Leo knew when he could approach a pokemon and when it wasn't the best idea. Well as you could imagine there's alot of things only a pokemon would know about pokemon. The more he learned about pokemon the more he wished he could know, so he decided he needed a friend to guide him in the pokemon's world. Being a rambunctious young boy made it very hard for Leo to find a pokemon that could keep up with him, until he met one particular Stunky. This Stunky was not your average get scared and stink up the place kind of creature. This stunky was curious about people just as much as Leo was curious about pokemon. Leo could tell by the first encounter with this Stunky that they would get along. He could feel his emotions and sense his curiosity. After giving out some pokefood the two of them observed the forest together. They chased each other around, spied on evolving metapods and shared each other feelings with one another. They had formed a friendship together that was so strong it affected how the other grew. As Leo grew he trained more and ventured into the forest less, but he would always find Stunky when he did decide to go out. After a while the two friends became more distant focusing on their own growing up, but both would often think back the friendship they once shared.

As Leo approached 16 his grandmother asked him to wait one year after her death before he went out on his own. She wanted him to train his psychic abilities and learn how to control them just a bit more before experiencing the world for himself. He agreed and life went on as usual for a while. Then one day Leo’s grandmother told him she was going to die that day. He had accepted her death long ago and told her that he loved her and kissed her forehead. She then pulled a pokeball out of her pocket and said “with death comes new life” and smiled as she closed her eyes for the last time. Leo sat by his grandmother holding the pokeball crying for the rest of the night.

The next day Leo attended his grandmother’s funeral. She apparently already had it planned for a few years now. Leo couldn’t help to chuckle to himself when he heard how long she had this all planned out. Throughout the funeral Leo’s family tried to talk to him. They tried to apologize to him, they tried to empathize with him and they tried to cheer him up. Leo then realized he had no understanding of how other humans behaved and it actually scared him to interact with them. Everyone was trying to be the center of attention. His family did not care for human life they way he did. They all talked about their ambitions and what they were doing in life. Not a single one of them asked how his grandma had been the last 13 years. They had all gathered to have an excuse for reunion so they could brag about themselves. A couple of times he tried to brain speak with them but he noticed that it was a lot harder to brain speak with someone that isn’t very spiritual. Leo then realized why his grandmother had wanted him to practice for another year before venturing off. She wanted to make sure he stayed true to his spirituality and didn't regress into the normal selfish nature of society.

That night Leo got home and decided it was time to open the pokeball his grandmother gave him before she passed. He clicked the button saw a red beam of energy form into a figure in front of him and immediately recognized the connection he had with this pokemon, not to mention the unmistakable smell. His jaw dropped in disbelief as he actually saw the pokemon that stood in front of him. Stunky was finally reunited with him. They hugged and sat down together catching up on all the emotions they had felt since their last encounter. It was one of the happiest moments in both of their lives.

Over the course of the next year Leo and Stunky became very used to each other. They trained and lived together as friends. Leo realized he could use their bond to train harder and keep their emotions at balance. Things weren't always easy though, sometimes their emotions conflicted making battle and training almost impossible. Leo knew this bond could help them be a force to be reckoned with if treated in the right way. He also knew that when things were out of sync with Stunky it was like they were at war with each other, on top of trying to over come a common enemy. The pros to this relationship that had been created between the two were immense, but the cons could prove self destructive at times.

As the end of the year came and Leo turned 17 he knew it was time he start to travel. So he packed his things and told Stunky they were finally ready to start the journey of a lifetime.

Inventory

Dians: *dian* 1,000

Items:
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Key Items:
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AdvancementAdvancement Points: (0/30) - Tier 0

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

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Stunky
Caught at Level 5


Nickname: Stunkyl
Gender: Male
Type: Poison/Dark
Ability: Stench
Height: 1’ 4”
Weight: 42 lbs
Health: Intermediate
EXP Rate: Medium Fast
EXP Gauge: (7/9)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Division: D8
Total Stats: 55
  • Attack: 14 (26%)
  • Defense: 8
  • Sp. Attack: 8
  • Sp. Defense: 8
  • Speed: 17 (30%)

Vitamins Used: None
Moveset:
1. Focus Energy
1. Scratch
4. Poison Gas

Unique Moves:
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Item:


PC Box: Stored Pokemon


Journal

Adventure Log
 
Adventure Log goes in here

Edited by paradox228, 22 Sep 2015, 05:48 PM.
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Hey Paradox!

Since you've had this previously accepted, there's not a great deal of stuff to do. There are just some bits that we tend to nitpick at a little more now, which I'm sure won't take you long. Let's go ^^

  • Perhaps expand his General Appearance a little more. For example, talk about his posture, his walk. Other than that, it's great.

  • His Personality is great too. Try to think of his likes, dislikes, fears, traits and such a little more too. Explain what happens when he encounters conflict. He's shy, but what happens if he's forced to talk to someone? A few sentences could probably suffice ^^

  • The History is good too, but we can expand points here too. How did he and his family react to his grandmother's passing? How was he at school? How did he get along with his family?


That's all I think we need to do, so let's get on with that and see how it looks. Thanks for your patience, and I hope to get you back into Godai soon! ^^
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I edited my post and included just about everything you wanted. Let me know if there's anything else! Thanks Riff. <3
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Alright, nice work. Here's approval 1/2 ^^
Emilie 'Lili' Kaplan
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Great work~ just a few more additions

For Hair, make sure to describe its length, and by messy, does this messy extend to cover his eyes or is it mostly up and out of the way?

For his eyes, describe their shape as well, perhaps his brow as well.

Also, does he literally only wear those two outfits? Clothing should use more general terms and key items, or it should be specified that he does only wear those items.

His personality seems a little unbalanced right now too. He seems very zen for a 17 year old, which is fine, but your putting in that he's hyper active seems contradicting to the rest of it. People are dynamic, but you need to frame it in a way that isn't "He likes to meditate, but he's also hyper active" Give us more context about what prompts each mood of his. Furthermore, we don't have much information on his morals, or his hopes and dreams, or his fears. These are what make rounded characters.

I haven't gotten to the history yet, but I will reply with more about that when I don't have to head to work lol.

One quick note, grab the coding for a Holocaster to replace your Xtransceiver please.
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