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| Brandon Cee | Feb 3 2008, 06:54 PM Post #1 |
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![]() Meet The Sunrise Full of reds and yellows, I pretend I'm mellow before I go so low you can't hear me, but clear me of the thoughts I had of a life I've never lived, before I regret to live again. Dreaming leads to believing in false hopes at first Yet the spiral from the clouds revokes your birth Demotes your curse; gives life to the undeserving Pain-staklingly staking pain in hearts we're hurting I've started working, but morale is a moral I gave up And my diamond mind is an object I can't repay much So betray love? Never would it occur in my soul or heart Nor would it be one of my desires for us to fall apart I wish to be seen, while I'm lviing this dream - yet I am a fiend to attention, so I am unclean. I regret the life I'd been with, but the wife I live with, I want her, I urge for her worst scorn - so I may take it and love it as I love her and feel then that I'd want to care for our children - SOMEDAY! Decisions - I refuse to choose anything I'll regret then I expect nothing fake, but I do accept a few exceptions And she is the reason for reflection - mirrored hearts We are entwined as the bite of souls allow in a bark And somehow when we start the "good stuff" - I'm fine In her eyes, I'm satisfied when they look up into mine I'm crooked with times, her life is so crooked it's crazy I never realized that we could be complete with a baby So when I figured out she was pregnant, I was into it Only to find out months later, that I was FUCKIN IMPOTENT! How could it be? She cheated on me - I'm back to the old me, back when we first met. When it was all.. "Full of reds and yellows, I pretend I'm mellow before I go so low you can't hear me, but clear me of the thoughts I had of a life I've never lived, before I regret to live again." |
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| $hin3 | Feb 3 2008, 06:58 PM Post #2 |
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THIS ONE OF THEM PIECES THAT GIVES U CHILLZ WHEN U READ IT REALLY NICE SHIT MAN AND I USUALLY DONT SAY THAT TO MUCH POETRY BUT DEF A SOLID DROP KEEP DOIN YA THANG HOMIE..... SHIN3 |
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| LVthugginATL | Feb 3 2008, 07:03 PM Post #3 |
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that second stanza/verse is off the hook son! i love the line Pain-staklingly staking pain in hearts we're hurting blows my fuckn mind! |
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